OS/SS: Is it just 'Jealousy'? (Part 7 posted)

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

that last line of the update was awesome!
aww raman- his rant about raman's ishita missing was 😭 but he still knows that ishita won't cheat on him👏
wonderful update- continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Woahooo... Brillianttt update! Loved hw raman blurted out in drunken state n mihir's dialouge!

Perfect! Cont soon!

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felciya

@felciya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

A heart felt rantings of Raman to his dear friend Mihir about his Ishita was touchy. I hope Mihir will do something for this two to bring closer. Wow Raman in his intoxication state did trust her completely.

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Raman is it not not easy to talk this out instead??

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Lovely! I would rather have Mihir ( who has been part of their journey together from day one) as a Cupid /catalyst than ManiShani ...

Wonderful 👏

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

wow, amazing part👏
i guess this one has to be the best till now👏
i just loved loved raman pouring out all his frustration and insecurity 👍🏼
you can see how deeply he feels towards ishita❤️
i cannot wait for their confession. hoping it will be intense n passionate
do continue soon
take care

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

firstly sorry for delay...was really busy..!!

and the part was superb..!! feeling so bad for raman,..!! he is so hurt..!!

there is no raman's ishita...aww...this statement was indeed hurting//...I hope mihir will do something to get them together..!! continue soon/./!! and thanx for pm...do pm me for next updates too...:) take care

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Yusra (or you can call me Hope as a nickname)

@LightingHope

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Please continue and if possible PM!

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Hey i just caught up with all the parts and this is really well written. Comparatively, the situation on the show is so overdone, but here you've dealt with the jealousy track really well. Especially the last update where he confides in Mihir was so touching. Loved it😊