New IshRa OS: Starting Afresh! Part 2 on pg 9

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011
That was great so romantic and loved how he was really gentle with her continue soon

Glad u like this update.

I will surely write another shot now with the jealousy track coming😊

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twerping

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

This. Was. Beautiful! I think this is the most passionate and romantic piece that you have written. Amazing. Still in the state of wonder and bliss after reading this... lovely!!! and so excited that you mean to continue!!!

P.S. Thanks so much for the PM!!!

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: vani_prem
absolutely amazing writing, i was completely caught up in your story. cant wait for the update

Thank u very much. 😳

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: dazzzling
Just read both parts. There is one word to sum your writing - CLASSY.
It is not easy to write the ACT of love making. It can turn tacky anytime but you are such a graceful and sophisticated writer. A boon to this forum. Keep writing dear.

Awww!! I mean seriously. I am very touched. I know what you mean. Sometimes things can turn too crude and embarrassing while trying to portray love making. After announcing the 11 pm slot update, I was really freaked out. But I am really honoured that u guys r loving it. 😳

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: twerping
This. Was. Beautiful! I think this is the most passionate and romantic piece that you have written. Amazing. Still in the state of wonder and bliss after reading this... lovely!!! and so excited that you mean to continue!!!
P.S. Thanks so much for the PM!!!

Thanks dear😃

Yes I think this is my most explicit passionate n romantic OS. All MU other works have mostly subtle romance with a pinch of humour or nokjhok. I had some apprehensions to write. I took ages cutting n editing. N then after the write up I was like- post or not!!😳😆 I am not continuing this dear. I may start a new one with green Bhalla!! Let's c😃

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twerping

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Thanks dear😃
Yes I think this is my most explicit passionate n romantic OS. All MU other works have mostly subtle romance with a pinch of humour or nokjhok. I had some apprehensions to write. I took ages cutting n editing. N then after the write up I was like- post or not!!😳😆 I am not continuing this dear. I may start a new one with green Bhalla!! Let's c😃

And you've excelled in this!!! And your new story sounds awesome!! I do love your sense of humour! So a jealous Raman should provide ample scope to let the comedy flow! 😆

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dazzzling

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Awww!! I mean seriously. I am very touched. I know what you mean. Sometimes things can turn too crude and embarrassing while trying to portray love making. After announcing the 11 pm slot update, I was really freaked out. But I am really honoured that u guys r loving it.😳

I am a huge fan of your write ups and I always look forward to them because they are always different. You are one of my favorites on IF and you surely know that. Keep writing.