IshRa SS- Jalaan ke bad, confession! (completed - 26th oct )

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

wow tht amazng...a cute end...

bt sad tht u ended it...

ishra descrptn to each othr is awesom...

loved their confsn nd romnce...

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Rinki

@IshraMiNeholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

hats off u buddy 4 dis .. "I wrote the last 4 PARTS in the last 24h. "

What a awesume day to start 😛

thnkww for dis continous updates 😛

frst thng aftr wakng up in d mrngg to check for d updte.. 😆

all awsome parts.. 👏

part 5-- Raman-Vyan meetng... lol.. 😆 den raman plannd after dat meetng hiring secretry..

If Ishita can get a cute assistant, then he can get a sexy secretary too ! Let's see how will his Jansi ki Rani react to that ! totallly on Ravan kumar mood 😆

part 6-- Ishita pouts a bit : "First of all he is not MY vyann. ishita explanation abt wierd vyan situation nd raman expresn.. aww.. i'm imagining it.. 😳 raman plans to make ishu jealous... 😆 afterall jealous/mu k bad hi confsn hota h... 😛

part 7-- The most awaitd scene.. ishu descrbng abt her crush.. hahahh its none other den our ravan kumar.. but wat ravan kumar thnks she is drscbng vyan.. ohh hoo ravaann.. 😡 apne dimag ki batti jalao.. 😈 brilliant updt.. 👏

part 8-- Finally, confsn on d way...yeah... Ohh..!! again dere tom & jerry fight strtd..

Lyk d way raman descrbs her.. ohh sorry abt his crush..😆 Finally e said its u .. nd left her male ego a side... ishu 1st rpely "Bec- because... i.. hilobyu"

Sharng same tiffin... feedn each other... (reminds me of dere pasta scenes) nyc beginning of new lyf... d lovely nrml husbnd -wife realtnshp.. no more 4 sirf ruhi k liye..

Wowww.. surprsd trip plannd by ishu... yeah after all its 21st century..

Overall it was superb fablous updte. .it will b nyc if u contiue too suprise trip.. lol 😆

Thnk u 4 pm.. 😊😉

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

i'm in a catch up mode- can you tell from all the res?😛😃
just read part 5- so raman finally saw vyaan 😆i loved the line about moon and stupid
now i want to see ishita's reaction- be back in a moment😛

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

o teri- you finished it?!
just finished reading part 6- honestly raman has more mood swings than most women on their period 🤪he went from smiling to sulking in two lines 😆
he knows 50 shades of gray 😈
lucky secretary- hot piece pati (someone else's) ke sath do din kam karne ko bhi mila aur two months ki salary bhi which apparently doubles by sharing tiffin

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

part 7: aww vyaan has dimples
...raman just blurted it out? of course he did! how can i forget, subtle as a gunshot this man 😆

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Vibhuti

@SparkleV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Read whole SS at once... 😎

it ws superbbb...spl the last part... amazing and diffrnt kind of confession ...

loved it!!!

very well done Rajji👍🏼

keep writing... 🤗

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

"Why wouldn't you be ?! He's cut... I mean he's not that bad looking and he's a tooth puller just like you..."

🤣oh that is hilarious 🤣🤣🤣 tooth puller 🤣 only you rajji😆
and when raman completely misunderstood ishita on the ideal man, i expected ishita to start eyeing blunt letter opener that must be on his desk- ya us paar ya is paar 😛🤪
aww such a lovely confession - reallly liked the head on shoulder visual as he confesses⭐️

that was such a cute, funny, but sweet ss- fantastic job👏👏

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Payal

@-Payal-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

PAYAL 🤗

I uploaded the last 4 parts today 😃 I got stubborn and wanted to end this story today (i was tired of seeing the little reminder "update SS Jalaan" on my laptop🥱)

Oh, good, so I wasn't behind :)

I don't want to praise myself, but i like my version better than the mani MU we have on screen now. i'm tempted to re-read it to enjoy it as a reader and not as a writer now. (am i being weird?)

I'd choose this over ManiShani any day. I literally laughed out loud at your "am I being weird". I say, go for it. A lighthearted read like this is just what we need right now with all that's going on on-screen.

Ugh. This sunday went by so fast, i can't believe we're already monday here. In 13hours, new YHM episode, i'm not readyyy.😕

Indeed it did. I'm not ready either.

Payal, you are going to make me blush. Why are you so nice to me? WHY? 😲😳

I'm re-thinking this after that Katie Melua song u just made me listen to. For realz. Not cool.

Thank you for taking the time to read the SS and leaving a comment, I genuinely appreciate it.

Thank you for writing to divert my attention from all the horrible stuff that's happening to My RKB.

Much love 🤗❤️

Back atchya tenfold. 😳