Pyar ka ehsaas OS during mi-mi wedding - updated on page. 3,5,8, 9,10 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very beautiful os :) Loved it. Sad first part was. Happy wit two parts. Update soon. Pls pm me :)
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Very nice OS. Liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks to everyone. I will update e other parts soon. Probably only one more part
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Part 4

Ishita comes out of the bathroom and sees Raman hugging her pillow and sleeping with a smile. She automatically gets a smile on her face . part of her mind wants to believe that all the encounters that she had with Raman were probably not coincidence but she then convinces herself that it cannot be true as Raman himself has told that he can never love her. She is kind of blushing and combing her hair slowly looking at herself in the mirror. Raman is trying to get up. She sees that and snaps out of her thoughts and goes out if the room.

She gets busy with all the preparations. Raman comes out getting ready but never finds her alone to play more tricks on her. He gets frustrated and the day goes by. There are only two days left for mi mi wedding. He is seeing that she has been so busy that she has not rested even for few mins. It is post lunchtime he grabs her in to his room and makes her sit on the couch.

I- Raman ye Kya kar rahe ho aap. Bohut kaam kai.
R- chup ek dum chup chaap baito

He closes the door and he has already managed to keep food in the room. He picks up the plate and starts feeding her. She is touched by his action and asks if he has eaten. He does not respond . So she takes a piece of roti and feeds hi m. They keep looking at each other and feeding. She is completely lost in his eyes. When she is feeding the last bite he bites her hand and she shouts and snaps out of her trance. She makes a puppy face and tells

I- Kya karte ho aap. It hurts
R- ye lo ek choti si bite Keliye itna nakhra tho...( he stops realising what he was about to say)
I- tho ?
He just nods his head and diverts the topic

He tells that he has planned something for mi mi s first night in his farm house. He needs her suggestion on the decoration of the room and arrangement as he is very bad at all these. So he wants to take her there in the evening. The wedding planner will show them different decorations and they need to decide on one. Hearing this ishita is so happy and tells him that this is a great thought and she will surely come .

I - not bad Raman a apne itna Socha . Aap itna bhi khadus nahi hai
Smiles and leaves.

Raman runs his hand over his hair and speaks to himself

Raman baita tu tho Gaya aaj. Woh maan gayi ab kaam pe lag ja

And calls someone


Next part. They are in the farm house.




Edited by prevas12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
So how was it so far. There probably would be 2 more parts. Will try and update them today
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
nice updates...but waiting for the upcoming updates...farmhouse preperation for mimi or self..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow. Loved it. but you wrote little less. write big part.Thank you :) Pls pm the newt part cant wait :) So beautiful one:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was lovely plz continue soon really want to know what Raman has on his mind
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
superb..Farm house mein Kuch Romance hoga😉...continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovedd it!! beautiful update!
loved raman's care towards ishita!

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