Pyar ka ehsaas OS during mi-mi wedding - updated on page. 3,5,8, 9,10 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

It is evening and ishita and Raman are getting ready to go to the farm house. He would have tol ishita that since it is a surprise she should no tell anyone. So he tells toshi ji that there is a party all night to which he is taking ishita and they will be very late in the night or may be come back in the morning. She tells ok. He comes back to the room and gives ishita a packet. It has a beautiful royal blue gown. He asks her to wear it. Ishita is surprised and asks him why should she wear it as it is only the farm house that they are going to and not a party. Raman tells her that he has told toshiji that they are going for a business party and not farmhouse so she should dress for the occasion else everyone will get a doubt. Ishita then agrees and goes to the bath room to change.

Raman smiles and tells himself" not bad beta you can act well" and smiles and goes to get ready. Ishita comes in to the room fully decked up and Raman is just not able to take his eyes off her. She is looking drop dead gorgeous. She has tied a bun and the gown with thin straps is perfectly fitting her. Raman cannot stop starring at her from top to bottom. She goes near him and asks him what happened . Is she looking allrigt. He asks her
R - tum ne weight lose Kiya Kya?
I- oh apne observe Kiya . Not bad. Kaise lagrahii noon .
R - sookhi lakdi jaise lagrahii ho. Hum punjabi hai yaar. Aise rookhe sookhi log nahi pasand.lagta hai tum meri Baath thoda seriously le liya aur itna zyaada dieting Karli. Ab chalo Poorna raath nahin hai humane paas

Ishita is irritated and wants to strangle him
I - yeh Ravan Kumar bhi na
And walks behind him to the hall

They both say bye to ruhi and leave. The drive is very quiet. There are romantic songs coming in the radio and Raman's mood is really getting turned on with all these songs. He keeps stealing glances at ishita. She realises that he is starring at her and feeling little awkward and blushing . Feeling very strange too.

They reach the farm house. It has been 2 hours drive . It is a beautiful place and has beautiful lawn and garden.

I - apne kabhi bataya nahi ki apake farm house bhi hai. Oh yeh bhi un cheezon ki tarah mujhse chupaya

Raman smirks and asks her to get inside. The house is beautifully decorated. There. Is no one in the house. So she asks Raman where is he wedding planner. He tells her that he has already made so e arrangements in the room. We can look at it and ask him to make any changes. He will be late.

Raman then takes her to the bed room. She opens the Door and there are candles lit beautifully . Rose petals on the floor welcoming her. There is also heart shape design in he middle of the room. The bed has beautiful white satin sheets and there is heart made of rose petals in the middle of the bed. There is light wind blowing from the window. There is a balcony which opens to the terrace garden and it is lovely. She goes into the bathroom and sees the bathtub full water and rose petals. She is so happy looking at it and looks at Raman and tells it is beautiful. Any girl would be clean bowled on her first night if the atmosphere is so romantic . She will tell him to tell the planner that she is fine with the arrangements and he can finalise this, She is about get out of the room


Raman smiles and takes the remote and switches on the music system. Light romantic music is played. Ishita smiles and tells yes this a good idea too and is about to go the door . He holds her wrist. She is amused and looks back. He tells her

R - abhi Kya jaldi hai. Poora raath baaki hai
I - mein samjhi nahin. Kaam hogayana ab ghar chalte hai. Itna kaam hai.
R - ishita I want to tell you something.
I - Kya?
R - us din tumhe kaha tha pehla Pyar ke bare mein
I - Raman humne is bare mein Ba'ath kee thi na. Tho ab phirse.
R- sssh.let me finish. I told you that day first love means different for different people. And that is true in my case. All this while I had thought that shagun was my first love but I was wrong. What is love. It is a mutual feeling of give and take. It completes you. Love is not lust.what I had with shagun was lust and not love. My first love is not her.

Ishita is a bit nervous now and is looking at him

R - do you want to know who my first love is ?
Ishita nods her head in silence

R- it is you my love. I know I am not your first love but you are my first love. You have taught me how to love. You are a beautiful person inside out and our souls love each other. I know you love me too. I realised my feelings for you long back but due to so many situations that we faced I could not express. You are beautiful person inside out . Please complete me and make me yours.

He goes near her holds her waist and pulls her near. There lips are just few inches away from each other.

Ishita isin tears and hugs him tightly.

He is also teary eyed and hugs her tightly. He takes out a diamond ring from his pocket .breaks the hug. Kneels down in front of her. Takes her hand . Kisses and puts the ring on her finger. He tells her that this is my love to you. I never gave you ring on our engagement but this is the token of our love and asks her how it is. She is crying and smiles and tells it is lovely. He wipes her tears and kisses her on her cheeks. He then looks at her and asks permission to kiss her on her lips.she closes her eyes and they have their first kiss which is very soft and passionate. He asks her to open her eyes. She is blushing and cheeks are red. He tells her he is hungry with a naughty smile. She hits his chest and moves away.

Raman turns her around and takes her to the balcony and further to the terrace garden. It is full moon that night and it is amazing outside. They can still hear the music .


There is a table set up and food kept with candles lit. He tells her that he was talking about this hunger and not that and smiles. He sits on the chair and makes her sit on his lap.asks her to feed him and they both keep staring at each other and keep feeding.

After eating it starts drizzling a bit and they both run in to the room drenched a little.

Raman is looking at her and she is looking beautiful and desirable in that gown .

R - I am still hungry and stares at her.

ishita is shy and moves towards the bed

R- can i ask something . Are you not attracted to me. Mere paas aake kuch Hota hai ?

Ishita blushes and nods a yes

R - I have been attracted to you from day 1 . Off late I have e not been able to control my urge to touch you and make you mine. I dream of you every night. Can you make me yours tonight..

Ishita is smiling and closes her face with her hands.

He lifts her and takes her to the bed. They make love and become one that night .

Next morning she wakes up in his arms and it is a dream come true for both of them. He asks her naughtily if she can give tips to mihika now on what to do on first night . She blushes And tells him this not manners to listen to girly conversations. Hits him on his chest .

Ishita gets up To go to the bath room to freshen up. He grabs her lifts her and takes her to the bath room and puts her in the tub. He gets inside too. I will leave the next to your imagination.

After a long time they come out get ready and leave to the house.


Next part which is the last one to follow soon

It is mi mi wedding
Edited by prevas12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
I know this was a really long one. But wanted to just get it done in one go. Some dialogues could not do it in Hindi so wrote in English. Hopefully you all like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
wow... it was written n sensuous too... i loved reading it... do update d next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for update. It is very romantic and thank you for English too cause I don't know Hindi. Hope that other writer can write more in English too.i don't know when will go to that lovely part in TV like you write in the story.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Romantic update! Loved it! Continueee soonnn... pls pm me whn u update the next part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww..too hot n romantic..😳😳 thanks for the PM..pls update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Aww really romantic update loved Ramans confession
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awesome, still on ishra dream land
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6

Ishita and raman get ready and leave the farm house . They reach home and ruhi comes running. They both look very fresh.

Toshi ji asks

T- are ye Kya tum do no to itna fresh dikh rahe ho . Naha dho kar aagaye Kya. Aur Kya ishita tera chehra itna Chamak raha hai.
I- hmm woh woh
R- ha ma waha spa bhi tha tho hum waha bhi Gaye the tho is liye ... ( rubbing his hair)
Romi- wah bhai aap do no ek Saath spa mein...

Every one starts laughing . Raman scolds him and they both go to the room

Ishita takes her saree to go to change . Raman hugs her from behind and says

R- ab Kya sharm yehi change karlona
I- pushes him and leaves

The whole day goes in to preparations. The wedding is next day early morning. So they all are up all night.

In the marriage hall Raman is always behind ishita trying to come close or holding her hand. Where ever he gets a chance pulls her in to a secluded corner kisses her. He is acting like a lovelorn teenager. Ishita is also liking it. She is also trying to seduce him in her own way by touching him , dashing him , pinching him when no one is seeing them. These things are observed by param and he is fuming. He can't take it anymore so he goes back home.

The Muhurat is early morning 2 am. The ritual starts. Raman comes next to ishita and holds her hands. When they got married they both hated each other. Now they both are a bit emotional.they hear the vows and look at each other and in their minds promise each other and take their vows again. The family members are noticing the closeness of both of them and are happy. Except shagun and her mother. They are present in the wedding because ishita would have convinced everyone to allow them to attend. Shagun is fuming looking at both of them.

After the pheras are over ishita goes and sits next to vandu. Vandu asks her what's happening you look so happy today. She notices the ring and asks who gave you.

Ishita blushes and tells her what happened in the farm house . Vandu is so happy .

Raman is talking to Bala and looking from far and stealing glances at ishita . Shagun hears vandu- ishita convo and is upset. She leaves from there. No one bothers if she is around or not.

Finally the wedding is over everyone get back home. Same evening mi mi are leaving to Mauritius for honeymoon.
Back in the room Raman asks ishita to rest .

R- my love sleep as much as you can now as I am not letting you sleep tonight
And winks at her. She blushes . Just then ruhi comes and all three hug each other tight and sleep.

They are a content and happy family now


This is the end of the OS.

Hope you all liked it.




Edited by prevas12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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y did u end yar...if der any posiblty pls continue...r cme wid anothr ff wid continue of dis...loved it...

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