New IshRa OS:The New Turn of Events.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: twerping
This was pure hotness!!! I am still shaking a bit after reading it and am probably going to sound a bit incoherent. Woah! Brilliant! what an unique journey to realisation! It's quite natural that Raman, always the man of action,would react first and contemplate later. His tremendous rage at Ishu...manifestation of his love for her which being repressed for so long, has to erupt and it should be this violent!!
I don't even know if I made any sense. Just letting you know that I think this was brilliant! Loved it and wish there was a sequel in the making~

Hey 🤗So happy to see u here. Sorry I didn't pm u this time😳Was maha choked with some work but still u r here😃

@ bold

U have so aptly described Raman's personality!!

Thanks again for ur encouragement.

Sequel?? Not thought about it but let's see😛

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Fb this is! You got to continue this real soon

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Alu-
Great One shot as soon as I read the title I was excited about an Os from you. Anyways wish you had written from where he entered the room, cause I love to see what you think would happen. Anyways great work. Really hope this situation never comes in their lives and if it does they are together in it.

Thanks.

I started writing and it was just going on n on. 😳 N without me noticing it it had turned longer that I usually write. I stopped it there but I may give it a closure with Ishita's reaction if the responses are positive.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: simples28
Oh wooow..😃😃 that was so hot and intense yaar..😊😊 you are a brilliant writer..👏👏 Ic ould actually visualize the whole scene in front of my eyes⭐️⭐️..your level of detail is mindblowing OSJ😃😃 I wish there was a continuation for this part..😊 Ishita was waiting..😉 Want to know what happens next😛 Is there a second part??😊😊 And also I loved the way the angry young Raman devoured his Ishu😉😉

Thank u dear for ur awesome comments. I am pleased to see that u ppl are liking this. It's been like ages that I haven't written some serious stuff. I have just been more of a tease.

Sangat ka asar u see!! 😆

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Lovely OS Hema and I have to say that this one night stay of weekend would hugely impact IshRa from the looks of it and here you have made her stay in a what seems like forever kinda situation which would piss off Raman to no ends and he would react in the extremes especially if begins fearing that for the sake of his family and his happiness which she believes he derives only from his children she may distant herself bit by bit and leave him.

Also I hope you are taking this forward and making this OS into a TS or an SS. 😳

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PUBALI BASU

@MysticMoon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

So beautifully written , just perfect , and amazing... 👏

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Shree1005

@Shree1005

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Superb... Really NYC..!!!! 😊

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

nice please continue soon...

hwy they can shift back to their room n shagun in ruhi's ..cammon they should start their relation in their room only...

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Res OJu 😳

Edited:

Beautifully written Oju ...Loved the fact that finally Raman felt bad ...felt that things were so out of control that he might lose the woman who brought back light in his lifeless existence ... he was scared, worried & upset all coz he knew this woman's goodness & her ability to sacrifice for "his" happiness 😳

Excellent 👏

Edited by paru_rox - 10 years ago