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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Res OJu 😳

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Beautifully written Oju ...Loved the fact that finally Raman felt bad ...felt that things were so out of control that he might lose the woman who brought back light in his lifeless existence ... he was scared, worried & upset all coz he knew this woman's goodness & her ability to sacrifice for "his" happiness 😳

Excellent 👏

Thanks Paru . Happy to see u here🤗

Yes I personally think there is much more to Raman than what he shows to the world. He is a vulnerable man, very emotional, passionate about everything he sets his mind on and above all full of love. No wonder his Ruhi is his carbon copy!! I so wish that CVs show us more of this side

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
I loved it..but am simply hoping for one more post as a continuation that includes their heart to heart talk on their feelings since they both have realised it through which their bond will become more strong..pls can you update as a second shot

Thank you dear. Will take ur suggestion into account😃

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: nrn1486
Hey this was awesome.. You've portrayed Raman's anger and helplessness perfectly. Loved it!
Would love for you to continue😊

Thanks dear😊

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: aaminah123
Why did you stop there? How I was waiting for her reaction at his arrival! If possible continue soon and oh of course it was a delight to read it :)

Ok ok got the message 😆

I will try to get them a heart to heart conversation.

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: twerping

hehe! PM or no PM, I'll always turn up when you publish one of your writings!
Hoping to see you push this story a bit further. Am kind of disappointed with the present track the show is taking and so this OS really brought me a lot of added joy by giving a twist to the current storyline!

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I know buddy!! N that's why u r so special. 😃

I am disappointed too with the way CVs r bringing twists n twist in between IshRa to put a halt to their love story n prevent it from going to another level.

I will try to write another part of this🤗

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Tanyaarora11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

That was absolutely beautiful. Loved it. If only Cvs intended to show something like this on the show aswell.
I loved how Raman's emotiones overpowered him and he kissed her. It seemed too real and he was totally in character. Really hope cvs are reading and incorporate something of that sort soon enough!

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: divya17.8
Amazing Os.. Loved it..
Brilliantly written as always..👍🏼
Angry passionate RKB..

Thanks Divya

I also love the angry n passionate RKB😛

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11
That was absolutely beautiful. Loved it. If only Cvs intended to show something like this on the show aswell.
I loved how Raman's emotiones overpowered him and he kissed her. It seemed too real and he was totally in character. Really hope cvs are reading and incorporate something of that sort soon enough!

Thanks Tanya for your awesome review. Really appreciate it.

I wanted to add so ething sensuous without making Raman too mushy. N I came up with this. Happy u guys r finding it in character😳

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twerping

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

I know buddy!! N that's why u r so special. 😃
I am disappointed too with the way CVs r bringing twists n twist in between IshRa to put a halt to their love story n prevent it from going to another level.
I will try to write another part of this🤗

OSJ! 🤗

Looking forward to reading a continuation of this story.

And seriously the present track is kind of frustrating but necessary I suppose since the CVs want to push back the moment of realisation further and further back. urgh!

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Hello everyone.

After reading all the lists I believe that I should give this a proper closure. So I will b posting the continuation in a couple of hours. Hope u will love it😃

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