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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow Aani!

Fantastic piece! Really! Super loved how you showed Shagun;s regrets, and OMG! Brilliantly written... again if only the CVs would do justice to such an amazing story, such an amazing cast... theres so much scope... If only... :(

But this was fantastic... how i would be willing to give up whatever i can to see something like this on the show. Can you believe i could really really feel for Shagun?!

It was beautiful... it was literally Shagun based all over and i still loved it, Loved IshRa in it. Ishita has been doing the dumbest of things... really... but you still justify that some way or the other, which is wonderful.

Ive always and always... chalo mostly related with Raman... most of the times... one can always relate to him... but Ishita? SELDOM... im so so disappointed, UNHAPPY with this character assasination... but ab kya karen? :/

anyways, this was AWESOME! LOVEDDD that slap on Shgun's face LOVED... but really felt for her too... thats just how awesomely youve written it! <3 IshRa's comfort level being seen by Shagun, IshRa's progress being seen by Shagun, Ishita;s importance in the family, how noone can actually manage without Ishita,,, kis tarah sab ke dil mein ghar kiya hai usne... all that... and then... her regret... JUST AWESOME.

Keep it up! 🤗

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pkaur92

@pkaur92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow this is absolutely awesomee!!!! I sooo wish that something like this happens in the actual show!!! I personally love all your os' i may not leave a comment on all but i do, and theyre all very very good!! Keep up the goood work :)

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wowww.. this s a brilliant piece of work! Shaguns realization was amazingly portrayed!

Do writeee moree... well before that, pls chk my post. I hv written a story on ishra! Do let me knw hw it is! Thankuuu :-D :-D

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Wooo! That's was awesome...why can't the writers take this as inspiration? Lol

This was honest, not drama for drama's sake...this is plausible of all of the characters, we weren't asked to stretch the limits of our imgagination to believe how any of them reacted because it was genuinely in character for them.

Awesomely done bud!

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Excellent Aani ... very well written about thoughts and feelings of Shagun as a woman who felt she made the right choice but somewhere she is now lost.

Loved reading Shagun's POV ⭐️

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Beautifully written...thoda thandak padha...though as u said, this is not going to happen, I am hoping and keeping fingers crossed to make this happen!

Ishita in Raman's arms...awww isse kehte dream come true!

u portrayed Shagun's POV so well...

Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago

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Oishi Dasgupta

@Oishi_S

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Beautiful Aani. It's impossible for a normal person to not regret what they have lost- especially by their own hands. Well, like you said the show is never going to show something like this.
Shagun's perspective was so bang on for a person who is all of a sudden shown the difference between her past and present. You almost made me feel bad for her. 😆

Edited by Oishi_sonu - 10 years ago

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@-Ishita-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Beautiful Aani.. your writing creates magic!

p.s Being a silent spectator of this forum i have read almost every OS of urs!

Keep up the great work!

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Interesting Aani. Another one from Shagun's point of view.😃

There are a few points that had my complete attention in your story.

1. The way Shagun saw the changes in her ex-sasuraal gave a new perspective to my angle of watching the show.

2. If it is only because Shagun is drunk, I think I can let the action of bringing her home go though I don't like it one bit. But, the Ishita in your story has that genuineness which made me admire her till recently. I have been missing it a lot. Her goodness of heart, in my opinion, is slowly slipping in to the "Mahaanta" category.

3. Raman never lets go of an opportunity to taunt Shagun with Ishita about how he has moved on. I am yet to feel the truth in his words with complete conviction because I think there is still a part of him that enjoys seeing her jealous. It is one of the main reason behind his taunts. Raman, I feel, is the kind of person who won't feel the need to show of he has moved on. I don't think he'd be bothered about showing her and even if he did he would let actions speak.

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redwine1

@redwine1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Aani

One again u leave me speechless ...

I am one of the few people who feel the character Shagun is the main VAMP of the show .. & ur writing today made me pity her .. that was how moved i was by ur piece ...

Simply poetic ... very deep .. very insightful .. very soulful ... one can almost feel the devastation that is SHAGUN .. the desolation .. the despair ...

I loved ur end .. the One who ABANDONED .. was finally ABANDONED to be left alone ... BRILLIANT .. I would never want the writers to make Shagun positive .. but would love to see something of this sort in the show ... The True TRIUMPH of RIGHT OVER WRONG ... she abandoned her baby & her husband .. but they were never ALONE .. they had a family ... coz they were RIGHT

AND .. Shagun who was in the wrong .. today when she lays abandoned there is no one with her ... she lays ALONE

BRILLIANT >. hope the writers read this .. & they give us something this meaningful to see in the show ... it packs a message & it touches the heartstrings ..

Edited by redwine1 - 10 years ago

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