SS : Distance makes the heart grow fonder! Part 2 Page 8 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
awww...this was emotional one
beautiful penned ishitas emotions
for last part I'm speechless
update soon n do pm m
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Aww such a beautiful OS just read both parts now do continue doing a great job
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
this part has stolen my heart specially these two lines

I who had assumed that we're headed somewhere in our relationship where as the fact of the matter is I was the only one walking while you stood stagnant."
and

" I failed at Love, Twice"

very emotional n heart breaking loved it thanks for pm update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
fab ryting... waiting fr d nxt update!!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
superb update...
very emotional from Ishita side...
i loved her part...and Raman's realization that he hurt her badly...
ur last line literally made me cry "i failed at love,twice"
awesome yaar...

thank u for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
continue soon ...how will Raman console and manaofy Ishia... confession????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was trully heart breaking, one of the first OS' that made my heart skip a beat and i could feel Ishitha's pain in your writing. simply superb! PM me when the next part is ready.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
amazing ! 😃
cont soon. n ty for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Nichuss

unres

i liked the restlessness of raman...
then cming to this mihir -shagun ...
im nt finding thr s any drama needed...

still ishu's pov was strongly portaited...

nice one






Thank you so much! And maybe you have a point, it's too soon to comment actually, there might be a deeper cause for Raman to hide the truth :P
But anyway, I am glad you liked my OS :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

Awww.. Such an emotional post. Loved the way you brought Ishu's POV. Poor girl she must be shattered. Waiting to see Raman's reaction





Thank you so much! I am happy that you liked it ! Shall try to update soon :)

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