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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Loved it totally.plz update soon

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Divya

@_Divya_

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

superb start! cont soon! 👍🏼

n pm if possible 😳

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Maisha59

@Maisha59

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Want to see raman's yearning nd ishu ignoring him, behaving like a stranger yet doing all her duties towards him being vry polite leaving her jkr form nd raman highly disturbed,restless coz of it.

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow nice one. Continue soon

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Paru

@paru_rox

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Loved it Tanya ... as usual it was well written 😃

Waiting for the next part ... am thinking this is an SS, right?

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

superb OS... thank GOD at least in ur story i get to read something which i want Ishita to do in show...if not same at least react...

i dunno how many times i ranted the same thing that i wanna see Ishita's reaction...she always have one reaction for all the situations "UNDERSTANDING" that's getting too much for me...

khair i loved ur OS...

dnt end it on here yaar...do continue and give it a proper ending wid Raman realizing where he went wrong and IshRa convo ...

if possible then do continue 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This was beautiful Tanya...

very imaginable situation!

Some lines I loved more than others

"The thought of betrayal had engulfed her, she felt wronged and cheated for the first time in her marriage."

Cheated - interesting word you use!!! its so true. When she thought he loved Shagun during the accident fiasco, she felt wronged, and sad. But not cheated. Now that she has come to accept him as her husband, she cannot take betrayal of any sort!

"that Ishita wasn't a part of their anger"

Thats such a deep thing to say. He wants her to react to his act, be angry and shout at him like everyone else is... but she isnt ready to

"Raman was befuddled to learn the pace at which his daughter was maturing, he'd actually have to think of better comebacks with this little one, she left him stammering "

This was perhaps the lightest part of your story :) Ruhi is indeed already too mature for her age, and she is growing... and how! Its clear to him that Ruhi will be Ishima's daughter first ... any battle, and she will be on Ishima's side 😆

I hope you are planning to continue this???

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saba007

@saba007

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Great Os.
Wish, Ishita would react in same way in d serial.
Waiting for d update.

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awww.. poor raman. Feeling bad for the lonely soul. Awesum n amazing start. Update soonnn... wud luv to read more. Plss pm me whn u update the second part! I hope thrs a continuation of this! Thnkuu dear!

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
This was beautiful Tanya...

very imaginable situation!

Some lines I loved more than others

"The thought of betrayal had engulfed her, she felt wronged and cheated for the first time in her marriage."

Cheated - interesting word you use!!! its so true. When she thought he loved Shagun during the accident fiasco, she felt wronged, and sad. But not cheated. Now that she has come to accept him as her husband, she cannot take betrayal of any sort!

"that Ishita wasn't a part of their anger"

Thats such a deep thing to say. He wants her to react to his act, be angry and shout at him like everyone else is... but she isnt ready to

"Raman was befuddled to learn the pace at which his daughter was maturing, he'd actually have to think of better comebacks with this little one, she left him stammering "

This was perhaps the lightest part of your story :) Ruhi is indeed already too mature for her age, and she is growing... and how! Its clear to him that Ruhi will be Ishima's daughter first ... any battle, and she will be on Ishima's side 😆

I hope you are planning to continue this???

Thank you so much Lucky, I am so glad that you liked my OS. Honestly speaking, the idea struck me after watching last night 's episode and 5 mins later i was typing that os on my phone. That's the ishra effect.

And i really feel that Ishita should sternly react this time unlike her past debacles and Raman's yearning is what i wish to see on the show.

and the lines which you've mentioned and given an analysis on is so apt, that's exactly what was going on in my mind.

Thank you :)

and yes., I will be continuing this OS. :)