MY DREAM TRACK (AD-VEH-TURE)PART 18/16

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PART 9 10
part 19 17

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PART 1

Scene starts with Raman and Ishita in shopping mall .They were shopping for Ruhi .Ishita was selecting few dresses for Ruhi and Raman was waiting their for finishing her shopping then Raman get's a call from office and he goes outside.Ishita was selecting dresses for Ruhi.

Outside while Raman was speaking in phone and after the call he is stopped by an unknown lady voice .He turns to see her.It is a familier face for him he has met her in Mihir's bachelore party.

Kajal "Do you remember me?"

Raman after little thinking gets her "Han I guess Kajal.Pub mey miley they."

Same time Ishita finishes her selection and comes out and notices Raman with other lady and wonders who she is .She decides not to interfere thinking some buisness meeting.

Then manager comes there and gives Raman his credit card.

Kajal "Aap yahan shopping key liyen aaye they."

Raman "Aap yahan.Shaayad shopping."

Kajal "Han friend key saath ayee thee.Are you free for a drink now."

Raman Funnily repeats" $e*on Beach?"

Ishita was shocked listening this from Raman.Ishita never drinks and neither does she know about drinks .

Kajal "I know you told kee aapko direct pasand hain but you have to try mixed once."

Raman "Yup life mey sab kuch seedha nahen hotha.e will try it other day."

Raman "Right now I am busy.Meet you later.Bye Kajal"

Ishita was still in thoughts of what they are speaking and she is thinking other way.Then Kajal leaves and Raman turns back to shop but sees Ishita already left and he calls her and they meet in parking lot.

They reach home and Ishita was still in thoughts of Kajal.

Then their waits another trouble.Their was some tour in Ruhi's schol and even for small kids and Ruhi's friends are going for it .Ruhi is adamant to go.

Ruhi "Ishima main bhee jaaongi merey saarey friends jaa rahen hain."

Ishita "Nahen ek huftha .Yhe naheen ho saktha.You are not going ."

Ruhi "Papa mujhey bhee jaana hain.Ishima ko bolo naa."

Raman "Ishita tumhey kyaa problem ho rahen hain.Ruhi jaana chahthey hain tho ."

Raman "Teachers hongey naa isska khyaal rakhney.Bass ek huftey kee baath hain."

Ishita "Raman itney logon key beech mey who log Ruhi ka khyaal nahen rakhengey."

Raman "Yeh tumhaari sooch hain.But usskey saath usskey friends bhee hongey naa.They will be togethr .Ruhi jaa rahen hain.That is my decision."

Ruhi higging Raman "Thankyou papa.I love you."

Raman "I love you too beta."

Ishita "Fir registration hogaya hain naa tho?"

Ruhi gets worried.

Raman "Main subaha jaakar Ruhi ko chod doonga .Whan main teacher ko request karoonga."

They finally come to truce and Ishita packs Ruhi's luggage.

Ishita was not yet over the scene she saw Raman speaking to kajal and their discussion.She is thinking in other way.

Then she see Raman speaking in phone and smiling and laughing .

Raman "Han main jaroor aunga Mumbai .I know we had a deal.i promise."

Ishita thinks Raman is speaking to Kajal but she is silent not asking questions.

Then next day Raman wakes up late and gets ready late.

Ruhi "Papa aap key wajaha sey late hoga abh kaisey main jaa nahen paaongi.?"

Raman "Nahin beta papa is ready thum jaroor jaaogi."

They leave in car in hurry.Ruhi was tensed as she may get late.

As she guessed they were late and busses left to tour before half an hour.

Ruhi becomes sad and annoyed over Raman for being late.

Raman "Ruhi sorry baba.Hum fir chalengey naa."

Ruhi was not speaking to him.

Raman "Ruhi theek hain hum bus ko chase karengey aur tumhey main bus mey choddoonga Papa's promise .OK"

Ruhi then gets hapy.

They chase the route the bus followed.Then Raman takes a short cut and then after one hour realizes he took wrong route.

Ruhi "Papa aap key wajaha sey main tour naheen jaa rahen hun."

Raman "I am sorry yaar.Tumhey tour jaana hain naa.Ok theek hain hum jaayengey abhee jaayengey.Papa bhee tumhaarey saath.ok"

Ruhi "Hum donon."

Raman "Yes.Ok get ready let set go."

Raman starts his car in direction of tour cancelling all meetings.

Ruhi "Papa Ishima poochegi thoo."

Raman "Naheen bathaana .Bathayengey tho humey waapas bulaayegi aur mujhey taaney .Now its Papa and Ruhi sectret."

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..getting raman and ruhi bonding..
update soon

thanks..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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According to previous planned track of ISHRA AND RAMAYI is terminated as many are not interested in combined tracks.So now this track of AD-VEH-TURE is RARU series one.It is full of adventure of Raman and Ruhi.I hope you like it.Ishita will be less here but you would have guesses the twist by now.Then I hope you are ready for another DREAM TRACK OF SAKIV'S DREAM WORLD.


THANKING YOU

SAKIV!VIKAS Chandra
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part 2

They start moving in direction of Araku Vally ,Andhra Pradesh.

Scene starts with Raman fixing the GPS and there is only one Araku vally so no problem of misjudgement this time.

Raman "Abh humey raastha patha hain hum jayengey tumhaarey bus sey pehley.Then on your mark set go ."

Raman starts driving his car in direction of point by guidance of his GPS.

Raman calls Mihir.

Raman "Mihir main ek huftey koi meeting attend naheen kar paonga.Tumhey manage karnaa hooga."

Mihir "Aap kahen jaa rahen hain?"

Raman "Han yaar Ruhi ko Araku jaana thaa aur mainey bus miss karwaaadey issliyen main hee jaarahan hun ussey dikhaaney.Tum please manage karon."

Mihir "That is all right bhai.Ruhi is important.Bhabhi ko patha hain?"

Raman "Galathee sey bhee ussey nahen patha chalnaa chahiye.Ussey patah chalega tho mujhey apney lecture sey postmortem karegi.Tum koi jhoot bolkey manage karlena."

Mihir "Theek hain bhai.Ghar mey sabko bol doonga.But bhabhi ko koi bahaana ."

Raman "Jho bhee kahaani bolthey hon who mujhey message kar deena.Nahin tho pakad legi Madraasan."

Mihir "Theek hain bhain."

Ruhi is enjoying her drive with her father.She was shouting loudly the moment Raman cut the call and turn off his blue tooth.

Ruhi "Papa fast .fast aur teej."

Raman "Kyon."

Ruhi "Humey uss ghaadi ko haraana hain.We have to over take it."

Ruhi was seeing a grey scorpio on road it is going at good speed and it just overtook Raman's car.

Raman "Beta jaaney do ussey.Speed nahe jaathey.Accident hoga."

Ruhi "Papa kuch nahen hoga.Merey papa ko driving acche aatha hain.Papa bass overtake karon ussey."

Raman "Ruhi ?"

Ruhi keeps a pouting face and Raman understood she is adamant now.

Then the race starts between Raman and that scorpio both are not giving an inch to the other as even Scorpio took the challenge and Raman was trying hard to break the lead it already took.

Ruhi was encouraging her father and is enjoying the ride and speed.Raman has tied a blanket around Ruhi and her seat and a pillow placed to her head so that she wont hit anything even if accident happens.

Then after around one hour Raman finally beats the scorpio and takes a big lead.Then he stops his car to celebrate his victory.

Ruhi "Papa hum jeetha gayen.Maza aaya.Mera papa best hain."

Raman "Yes .We won."Then hee looks at his GPS and they are no where in track to Araku.Raman followed that scorpio which was going to Agra and got separated from his route .

Ruhi also understood and she was acting as if she din't did anything.

Raman "Ruhi yahan dekho humey araku jaana hain Agra nahen.Abh dekho hum kahan pahunchey."

Ruhi was silent and acting as if not listening.

Raman "Main tumsey baath kar rahan hun."

Ruhi "Papa hum pehley Taj Mahal jaayengey fir Araku.Please aap Ruhi key liyen yeh nahen karengey." Cutely.

How can Raman resist this cuteness of his daughter.All his anger melted away and plans changed to Taj Mahal.

Then they spend time in Taj Mahal alone.They took photos in different places and Ruhi in all poses possible and they combined Ruhi with Raman and few hundreds of photos. Around 2 O' clock after noon they came out.

Then track back to Araku.Then Raman gets a message from Mihir and Raman asks Ruhi to read it.

"Bhai main ney ghar mey sabko bathadiyan hain kee aap Ruhi ko lekar Araku jaa rahen hain.Sab log khish hain.Mainey bhahi ko nahen bathaaya aur sab log ko bhee yeh baath bathadiyan.Bhabhi ko bola kee aapko Mumbai mey koi meeting hain aapko jaldhee mey jaana pada.Aapko aaney mey late hoga.Network milnaa bhee mushkil hain."

Then Raman and Ruhi restarted their journey in full swing .

They covered one one fourth of journey then by time around 8 O' clock.

Raman decides to stop for that day as it is not good for Ruhi.

Then Raman and Ruhi book a room in a good hotel in a town on way.Then Ruhi notices there is an exhibition in that town.So you know what is next.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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NO RESPONSE WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO UNDERSTAND.
COMPLETELY DISSAPPOINTED AND DISCOURAGING.😔😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Actually little disappointed... Without ishita not liking it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am lovg it papa & daughter fun continu pls wating for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dont be disappointed..
I liked it..
Its just that we also want to see ishita in the scene...
It would hav been amazing if she would join in with ru ra in trip..
Plzz cont...
Nd if possible do pm me...
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COSIDERING THE RESPONSES MY DREAM TRACK AD-VEH-TURE IS TERMINATED .
BUT I WILL BE FINISHING IT FOR MY SELF.ANY ONE INTERESTED WILL GET PM'M.
YOU CAN INFORM ME THROUGH PM ON WHO ARE INTERESTED .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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GUYS DINT YOU NOTICE THAT ISHITA IS JUST NOT IN THAT TRIP BUT SHE IS IN STORY.WHY DO YOU THINK I WILL INTRODUCE KAJAL IN STORY UNNECESSARILY TO WASTE MY STARTING POST.
IN WHOLE TRACK ISHITA WOULD BE THINKING RAMAN IS IN MUMBAI WITH KAJAL AND SHE WILL BE CALLING HIM EVERY HOUR THINKING RAMAN IS WITH HER .
WHAT EVER DECISION IS MADE ONCE. I WONT CHANGE MY DREAM TRACK TO FLOW.

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