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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for editing
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part 6

Scene starts with Ishita thinking about Raman and his deceit.

Then on other side Ruhi is sleeping along with her new friend Hercules.Raman watches them sleeping and feels happy.He is missing Ishita and decides to call her.

Then Ishita gets a call from Raman but she is dejected seeing this she started hating Raman with her doubt on him.Still she takes the call having hope Raman may comeback to her.

Ishita "Aaap abhee tak soyen naheen?"

Raman "Naa.Abh thak busy thaa.Abh free huan hun.Socha tumsey baath karoon kall sey free nahen mil rahan thaa."

Ishita "Kyaa kar rahen hain aap ?"

Raman "Abhee abhee room ayan hun .Bass tumney phone kiyya than a uss samay thoda busy thaa?"

Ishita "Kyaa kar rahen they?" casually not to cause any doubt to him .

Raman "Mummy ko math bathaana.Yahan dog fare thaa.Ruhi key liyen ek nayan pet khareedha.I hope ussey pasand ayen."

Ishita "What ?Raman aap jaanthey hain mummyji ko pasand nahen hain."

Raman "Han but yeh trained hain mutthu key taraha nahen hain.Cute hain Ruhi kee baasha mey."

Ishita then thinks Raman is speaking to her normally and feels happy but she has her anger which she is hiding and conserving to explode.

Then they speak till late night Raman indirectly telling his experiences of what happened but Ishita unable to understand.Then Raman slips to sleep on call itself.

Ishita feel little relieved but she has her anger full on now as Raman was able to call her even after doing that shameless act.

Then next day Raman and Ruhi get ready and Ruhi was happy with Hercules.They are on walk outside for few minutes.

Raman has given his car for washing and will be waiting till it finishes.It is travelling continuously since two days.

Then Ruhi gets attention to the temple and huge crowd there.

There is some pooja going on the temple and is quite crowdy there.Then they come across a woman who works in the temple society.She is talking in phone with some person .She is complaining about trustee and their less budget for the festival.Her name is Sunitha.

Raman listens this and gets an idea to use it for his opportunity.

Raman "Excuse me Miss.You don't know who I am but I can help you."

SUNITHA "Sir ,aap kyaa madad karengey."

Raman "Tell me I can help .But I need a return help."

She thinks Raman is acting playboy .

Raman "Don't take me wrong.I am not like that.I am married and have a daughter too."showing Ruhi.

Raman "My name is Raman Bhalla,main Delhi mey ek MNC ka CEO hun.Just by situation mujhey mere beti key saath suddenly aana pada.Unplanned."

Raman "Then you know kids.Ussney merey wallet mey paisey kharch kardee.Now I am penny less."

SUNITHA laughing "Sir hummey bhee sponcer kee kamee hain.We have to make arrangement s for festival."

Raman "Aap poorey sunengi.I don't have money but I have all my credit cards in working .Main aapkey festival key liyen sponcer ban saktha hun.I can directly help you in buying all the stuff recquired for it ."

SUNITHA was shocked listening this she has problems with trustees till now now she got a direct single sponcer for it now.

Raman "I can help you.After this you can help me by giving small amount for us."

It is a stupid deal for any man .But our situation is also different.

SUNITHA accepts a deal in her favour and Raman makes all necessary arrangements for festival by his cards.

Then SUNITHA asks Raman to be honorary member for donations.Raman gives Ishita's name as trustee for it .

Then Raman does pooja in name of his family but he wishes Ishita to be with him that moment as Ishita will be more interested in things like that.

The as a deal Sunitha provides them with little money in exchange of 5 lakh spent on preparation for festival with excess honary membership in temple board for Ishita.

The Raman and Ruhi continue their journey back around 11'o clock.Ruhi is sleeping in back seat and Hercules was on front seat.






Raman "Tho aapke mem shaab so rahen hain.?" To Hercules.

Raman starts speaking to dog.

Raman "Ok .Yeh chotey hain tumhey issey badey ko bhee samhaalna hoga."

Raman "Ok I will tell you about my family." Avoiding boredom speaking to dog.

Raman "I am Raman." Forwarding his hand and same does it as formal introduction.

Raman "Hum abh Araku jaa rahen hain.Ruhi key tour key liyen.You know Ruhi right."

Showing dog the back seat.

Then Raman continues.

Raman "Fir hum ghar jaayengey.Delhi mey,never mind I will make arrangement for you.Ghar mey pehley tumhey Ishita sey milnaa hoga.Ghar mey sabka control usskey pass hain mera bhee aur Ruhi ka bhee."

" Ishita,meri biwi hain aur Ruhi kee maa.Ghar my who kissey par gussa nahen hogee siwaa mujhpey.But bahuth achee hain she loves everyone.We have a deal tumhey mujhey bachaana hoga Ishita ka gussa sey."

Raman "Actually ghar mey kuttha allow nahenn hain.But mainey Ishita ko bathadiyan who manage karlegee."

Hercules was listening as ideal student however it is trained.Raman patting his head

Raman "Fir papa.Tumhey unsey koi problem nahen hogee,Romi mera bhai ussey bhee ."

Raman "Then you have to meet my mummy.Tum ussey decently behave karnaa hoga bahuth gussa hain.Shaayd mujhsey kam ee hain but.dangerous."

Ruhi then wakes up listening her father telling dog about their house.

Ruhi "Papa aap hercy ko yeh sabh bathaarehn hain."

Raman "hummarey museum mey rehnaa hain naa ussey.Isska training dey rahan hun."

Ruh I"Aagey main bathungi.Fir saamney ghar mey paati,chitti sab log hongey .hum wahan bahuth mastee karengey."

Then Raman and Ruhi notices Ruhi's school buses carrying student on road.

They finally caught the busses.Raman follows them and they reach their destination.

Raman then informs the teacher about being late and they felt happy seeing Ruhi and they were surprised seeing Raman bringing Ruhi all way from delhi alone.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome but please please please clear ishita doubts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintu

Awesome but please please please clear ishita doubts

Their are only two ways when bomb is triggered.Either we have to diffuse or let it explode.
I have planned one so wait for it.
But I can tell you one thing.I wont dissappoint.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing updates
sry for late comment
cont.soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vikas...

im so impressed with the last chapter...

the best part i liked was raman talking to hercules...

it was so visualisable...


i really wish ishita hothi tho...

par no pblm...make anothr dream track with ishu-ruhi-raman n hercules...


the 7th part is my favourite...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updt next part soon pleasss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

vikas...


im so impressed with the last chapter...

the best part i liked was raman talking to hercules...

it was so visualisable...


i really wish ishita hothi tho...

par no pblm...make anothr dream track with ishu-ruhi-raman n hercules...


the 7th part is my favourite...

why another one return journey is with Ishita only.
.How come ,I still din't update 7th part.
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update vikas Raman's convo with herculas was hilarious loved it update soon n yar do pm m when u r updating...

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