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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 9

Scene starts with Ishita coming to Raman's room and she locks the door.

Raman "Tum yahan kyaa kar rahen hon?"

Ishita "Aapney kahan kee peeth mey dard ho rahan hain tho?"

Raman "Han ek huftey sey gaadi chalaatey rahan hun.Bahit bhaitkey peeth mey dard ho rahan hain."

Ishita "Aap letey rahiyen main peeth dabaathee hun."

Raman lays on his chest removing his shirt.

Ishita was happy that Raman forgave her but she is not over the guilt yet on thinking bad about Raman.Raman could sence this.

Ishita "Raman ghar mey sab log jaanthey they kyaa aap Ruhi key saath hain.?" Applying balm on his back.

Raman "Han.Bass tumhey naheen patha thaa?Tumhey bathadiyan hotha tho tumm ussey din waapas bulaalethee .Issliyen naheen bathaaya."

Ishita "Aaapney aisa nahe kiyya hotha tho mujhey aappar shak naheen huan hotha.Seedha sach bathadethey."

Raman "Kyaa tumhaarey taaney sunney key liyen.Mujhey kaisey patha hoga kee tumhaara dimaak mey kyaa pak rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman aapney aisa nahen kiya hotha.Mujhey bathadethey tho shaayad main bhee aapkey saath chalthee."

Raman "Shaayad?Yeh sabh chodon."

Ishita "Raman mujhey nahen patha kee mujhey kyaa hogaya.I just could'nt bear it."

Raman was silent .

Ishita "Raman I could'nt difest kee aap kissey aur ladkee key saath they.Yeh socch bhee mujhey khaarahan thaa."

Ishita "Raman I just need you .Yeh baath mainey aapsey kabhee nahen kee.But I just love to be with you."

Ishita "For me everything with you is a beautiful memory aapseu jhagada karnaa,aapkey taaney sunna.Jab mujhey laga yeh kissey aur ladkee ko bhee mil rahan hain.I just could'nt control myself.I started hating you." Breaking down.

Ishita realizing what she spoke "But main galath thee.Mera soch galat thaa."

Ishita "I am wrong.Raman par main khush hun kee main galath thee."

Raman realizing Ishita's state.He took chance hold her by his hands and pinned her to the bed and they have an eye lock.

Raman "Sach bathaon.Yeh sach huan hotha tho tum kyaa karthee?"

Ishita "Main uss ladkee ko maardethee."

Raman "Ek baath bathon .You love to spend time with me or YOU LOVE ME ."

Ishita was shocked listening this and she was thinking over this view and then a smile with shyness flowed through her lips.

Ishita repeated "You love me. " then smiling realizing her inner turmoil "I love you."

Ishita "Raman I love you." And smiles covered her face the moment she realized it.

Ishita "Raman main aapsey pyaar karthee thee.I could'nt realize it.I love you."

Raman "I love you too."

Ishita "Main aappey shak kaisey kee.?"

Raman "Ishita it is just your love.Tumhaarey pyaar ney tumhey andha banaaya.I can understand.You don't want to loose me.Tumhaara koi galthee nahen thee.It is just a communication gap.Ok."

Ishita hugs Raman tightly realizing his efforts to get her out of guilt.Yes indded it is her love that blinded her and her love that she din't want to loose.

Raman "Ishita tum jaanthe nahen ,But I really missed you.Mujhey har samay lagan kee tum bheee saath hothee tho baath alag hothee."

Ishita kisses Raman on his cheeks .

Raman "Abh kyaa hogaya.Abh kyon patha rahen hon."

Ishita "Raman?"

Hugging him tightly as if she will never get a chance again.

Raman goes romantic .He clears her hairs falling on her face then moving his lips toward her eyes to her tears.Then Ishita understood Raman is forwarding to next stage but she want it too.She wanted to bridge every gap between them so that no KAJAL can enter even in her dreams

Raman then moving his hands to her face kissing her in forehead.Ishita confused.

Raman then stops "Ishita I am sorry.Mainey yeh naheen poocha kee tum kyaa chathe hon."

Ishita "Raman.I love you.Humey ek hona he hain." Forwarding herself to Raman.

Raman and Ishita share their first kiss .Then they takes their first step to progress their relation to next stage.

Then Raman sleeps pleasantly feeling of Ishita being beside him happy and pleasant make him feel it like heaven.

Ishita was happy ow she had spent sleepless night past few days thinking about Raman but now it is cleared and Raman is with her and she had her moment of her life with Raman and Rama beside her make it feel like she had everything in world.

Then in morning Ishita wakes up first and seeing Raman arms around her marking his protectiveness and possesivity makes Ishita feel proud of her life.Then she dresses herself up and goes to other room to check he rdaughter sleeping peacefully.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
I read all parts...It was just amazing yaar...Finally Ishitas shak is over...now they are together...This time you really tried a little romantic scenes too congrats...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
so finally mus cleared...ishra real life started...

now its goin t b intresting with ishra ruhi and hercules...

waiting for next prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story is awesome...
And your way of writing is superb...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
part 10

Scene starts in morning Ishita wakes up first and seeing Raman arms around her marking his protectiveness and possesivity makes Ishita feel proud of her life.Then she dresses herself up and goes to other room to check her daughter sleeping peacefully.

She feels happy seeing Ruhi happy and sound looking from door..

Raman comes there and backhugs Ishita.Ishita smiles and kisses him on his cheek.

Ishita "Aap uth gayen.?"

Raman "Han.?"

Ishita "Ajeeb hain Ruhi abh thak so rahen hain?"

Raman "So rahen hain yaa naatak kar rahen hain."

Ishita "Raman kyaa bol rahen hain aap?"

Raman "Ishita ek huftey sey Ruhi ko itney kareeb sey dekh rahan hun.Usska naatak ko tho pehchaan saktha hun.But tumsey better tho nahen."

Ishita "Aap bahuth enjoy kar rahen they Ruhi key saath."

Raman "Bathaney kee jaroori hain kyaa.Har pal merey saath thee.Mujhsey baathey karthee thee aur har raath mujhey ussey sulaana padtha tha bed mey.Har din raath ko tired hojaathe hain aur mujhey ussey uthaakar aana padtha hain aur aisey hee sojatheee hain."

Ishita listening happily with pride in her face.

Raman "Main ney ek moment bhee miss nahen kiyya.Mainey usska bachpan kitnaa miss kiyan thaa.Chothee the thab main usska saath nahen thaa.But who hummesha papa sey hee pyaar karthee thee.Mainey kyaa kiyya tha usskey saath."

Ishita "Raman abh kyon sad ho rahen hon.Sab kuch khatam huan naa.Abh sab kuch normal hain Ruhi is angel hummarey princess hain who.Aapney suna nahen teacher ney kyaa kahan.Raman you are rectifying your mistakes.You did it." Holding his hands .

Ishita "Tho yeh bathayiyen kee abh Ruhi kyon sooney kee natak kar rahen hain."

Raman "Aaj hummey ghar waapas jaana hain naa.Issliyen?Who yahan aur time spend karnaa chahthee hain."

Ishita "Wha kyaa baath hain aapney itnaa acha samajh liyan Ruhi ko."

Ishita "Raman aap yahen rahiyen.Ruhi ney mujhey dekha nahen naa ."

Raman "theek hain."

Ishita goes to Ruhi silently on tip toe.

Ruhi is checking with one eye whether Raman is coming or not.

Then Ishita comes on other side and surprises her.

Ruhi "Ishima aap?"

Ruhi jumps and hugs Ishita.

Ishita "Kaisey hain mere princess .So rahen thee."

Ruhi "Main theek hun."

Ishita "Main kall raath ko aye thee tumhey dekhney.News mey aya thaa naa."

Ruhi looking Raman not there nearby on her sight."Ishima papa ney kuch nahen dikhaaya.Papa key saath mazaa nahe aaya.Aap saath hothe tho accha hotha."

Raman who was hiding beside listening gets shocked.

Ishita laughs as Ruhi is buttering her.Raman can't recogonize but Ishita will at sight itself.

Raman comes out "Jhootey.Kissney kahan kee papa Ishima ko math bathaon nahen tho humey daantegi .hum enjoy karney nahen deegi."

Ruhi "Aapney?Ishima mujhpey gussa nahen hogee."

Ruhi hugging Ishita.Hercules just got up then.

Raman "Kaisey hogee jab saarey galathiyan doosron key uupar daldogi tho."

Ishita "Raman rehney deejiyen naa.Suniyen who kyaa kehrahen hain."

Ruhi "Ishima hum aur kuch din yahen rukhengey fir ghar jaayengey.Papa ney mujhey kuch nahen dikhaaya."

Ishita "Theek hain hum yahen rahengey.Papa ko jaan ahain tho jaaney doo,OK."

Ruhi sensing that with Ishita rules would be more and hece Raman is recquired "Ishima papa bhee.Papa ney bhee kuch aneh dekha naa.Papa ko bhee hummarey saath."

Raman was about to speak but Hercules interrupted .Ruhi took chance.

Ruhi "Ishima main hercy key saath bahaar jaon khelney."

She runs taking ball beside her pillow and went runningHercules followed giving final bark at Raman.

Raman "Gaddhar ."

Ishita "Kyaa Raman.Aap bhee bachee sey."

Raman "Main Ruhi ko nahen Hercules ko kehrahan hun.Hercule who kuttha ka naam hain."

Ishita "Ussney kyaa kiyan."

Raman "Itney din merey party mey thee,main ussey har din khaana khilaatha tha,exercise karwaath tha.Abh dekho party badal dee itney asaani sey tumhaarey party aagayen."

Ishita laughing at Raman.

Ishita "So sweet."

Raman then noticing Ruhi is down side playing with Hercules.

Raman "Who tho main hu hee.But romantic bhee kam nahen hun."giving a back hug and tracing his lips around her neck.

Ishita shyly "Raman chodiyen naa."

Raman "athaon tumney kyaa decide kiyan .Yahen rukhogee kuch aur din yaa ghar chaley."Kissing her on her cheek and rubbing her cheeks with his beard.

Ishita "Raman pehley aap shave tho keejiyen .Daari choob rahen hain."

Raman "Choobney do"

Ishita "Raman hum yahen rukhengey naa kuch aur din."

Raman "Theek hain.Your wish."

Ishita realizing what Vandita told now it is their trumpcard.But only for wives and lovers.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
read all the parts and its just fantastic ... wow really what an imagination...oopsgrt going ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome its superb... Hercules is superb...Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dear...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates
ruhi?? dramebazz finally ishra r together
update soon n do pm m plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 11

Scene starts with Ishita and Raman in same condition where they were in previous scene.

Ishita realizing something.

Ishita "Ayyo .Abh main kyaa karon."

Raman "Abh kya hogaya?"

Ishita "Main Ruhi ko dekhney itney zaldee mey aagayee.Mainey kuc plan hee nahen kiyya tha.Directly aagayee.Abh mainey mera koi bhe saaman nahen laaya.Merey kapadey hbhee nahen hain."

Raman "Merey saamney kyaa jaroori hain.Tum bolon tho yahen room book kardetha hum permanently."

Ishita "Besharam.Ussey accha naye kapadey khareed sakthey hain."

Raman "Han tumhaarey liyen kapadey kee than laaney mey mujhey interest nahen hain.Naheen naye dress khareedney mey"

Same time Ruhi comes back along with Hercules.This time it allowed them .

They break their pose seeing Ruhi.

Ruhi "Main jaanthe hun yahan kyaa ho rahan hain.Main chootey hun but main sab jaanthe hun."

Ishita "Ruhi kuch nahen.Ishima ney directly aye naa tho ussney kapadey nahen laayee abh kyaa karey."

Ruhi "Uffo itney see bath.Humney lee they naa." Showing her a bag.

Ishita checks it and finds few new clothes for her Ruhi selected on first day.

Ishita "Yeh sab kiskey liyen hain?"

Raman "Kajal key liyen."

Ishita "Raman seedhey bolo naa."

Ruhi "Ishima papa key bhee kapadey nahen they uss din naa.Tho humney shopping kee .Mainey aapkey liyen bhee dress select kee."

Ishita "My princess.Tumney khareedha tho thaa but kaisey deney kee plan kiyaa."

Ruhi "Papa Mumbai mey they naa ussney aapkey liyen laaya hain Mumbai sey.Yeh actual story hain.But abh nahen chalega naa.Buddhu papa aapkey liyen gift laana bhool jaathey hain issliyen main ney he select kiya"

Ishita laughing "So sweet."

Raman "Bhuddhu papa.Han bhuddhu jo hun itney din papa smart they abh bhuddhu ban gayen."

Ruhi hiding behind Ishita and then it is Hercules moment.It started barking at Raman.

Raman "Gaddhar tum fir shey shuru ho gayan."

It started licking his face again.

Raman "Dekho sab kuch karthey hain aur fir maskaa laga rahen hain.in donon maa beti key taraha.Sab kuch karthey hain baad mey maskaa lagaathey hain.Ek ullu jo mil gayan hun."

All are smiling at it as Raman stops Hercules and takes it outside for its regular exercise and training on Hundred safe ways to survive in his family museum."

Ishita "Ruhi hum yahen rukhengey kuch aur din ok."

Ruhi giving her all extra things she brought for Raman.She brought everything in excess when Raman is lost in her cuteness and observing her selection.

Ishita then noticing Ravan Kumar mobile.

Ishita "Yhe kyaa hain.Kisska mobile hain yeh?"

Ruhi "Ishima Ravan Kumar mobile hain yeh.Papa ney liyan tha mujhey aapsey baath karvaaney."

Ruhi "Ishima aap yeh rakhlo aapka phone very small hain naa." Giving her the new one.

Ruhi "Yhe bhee main ney select kiyaa.Kitnaa cute hain naa.Papa ko pasand nahen aaye."

Ishita "Ruhi phone pey koi design rakhthey hain kyaa."

Ruhi "Accha lagatha hain naa?"

Ishita "sabko nahen.But I will take it.Mere princess mujhey kitney gifts dey rahen hain."

Ruhi "Ishima aap papa ko bathayiyen naa."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Telling something in her ears.Ishita blushes listening this.

Ishita "Main bathaadoongi .Pehley tum ready hojaon."

Ishita then starts to her business.She keeps food for HERCULES in a bowl.It is inder new leadership.

Outside Raman is doing exercise with Hercules telling it his problems.It listens carefull and does his style of buttering.

Then Raman comes back and notices Ishita looking at his back as she just took bath and dressed up.

Hercules was eating but Raman goes and hugs Ishita from back and Ishita is happy to see Raman.

Ishita "Raman main ney bahe abhe nahaya hain.Aap passena math lagayiyen."

Raman "kyaa hoga.Dubaara nahaalena.Main madad bhee karoonga iss baar."

Ishita "Pahley aap apna khud kaa madad keejiyen.Yeh kyaa hain."

Showing his bag to him.

Ishita "Mujhey green pasand hain but Raman saarey kapadey green colour mey."

Raman "Tumhey kyaa lag rahan hain mujhey shauk hain isss karelon mey ghusney kaa.Tumhaarey beti ney khareeda hain.Sab ek jaisey hee hain.Karelea ka colour."

Ishita laughing "Raman abh aap jaakar ready hojayiyen.Selecting a pair of clothes for him."

Raman goes giving a final peck to her.

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