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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4

Scene starts with Ishita confused over recent turn of situations.One side what she saw and other her belief over Raman's character.

That side Raman is sleeping along with Ruhi.Then he wakes up at around 6'O clock morning by Ishita's call.

Ishita "Raman aap uth gayen."

Raman "Kyaa huan tumney itnaa subaha phone kyon kiyya?"

Ishita "Kuch nahen socha aap uthgayen hongey."

Raman "Main itnaa subaha kabhe uttha hun kyaa?"

Ishita "Kissko patha aap jagaha badalthey hee aadath badal lethey hain?"

Raman "Kyaa bol rahen hon yaar.Please mujhey neend aa rahen hain raath ko late soya tha aur tired hun.Please."

Raman "Main baad mey phone karoonga."

Raman cuts the call and sleeps and Ishita was wondering what was Raman doing late night.

She tries not to think over that matter but she is completely broken with the fact that Raman is maintaining a secret relation unknown to her.

She never thought Raman can do that and she always expected Raman to be special.She considers Raman is not like other men and he won't be in such influences.She has tears in her eyes as she imagines Raman with Kajal in romance.

Ishita "Raman ney ek baar bhee merey baarey mey nahen socha.Maanthe hun kee hummarey rishtha kabhee uss wore nahen bhada lekin ussney socha kaisey kee main doosrey ladkee ko merey jagah leney doongi.Main Raman sey pocch bhee nahen sakthee.Par mujhey poochnaa padega."

She has tears in her eyes.She had no control over it.

Then on other side time is around 10'O clock and Ruhiwoke up and got ready first and Raman don't have extra set of clothes .

Ruhi "Papa aapkey pass kuch nahen hain.NO clothes ,brush,paste.Abh hum kyaa karengey?"

Raman "Hum nayee khareed lengey."

Then Raman and Ruhi goes to shopping mall and Ruhi selects new clothes for Raman and you know how Ruhi's choice would be.

Then while in shopping mall Raman was trying his new outfit Ruhi has selected it is jeans pant and her Ishima's fav colour green T shirt and Ruhi has selected around 5 pairs in same combination.

Then Raman decides to wear it in mall itself as they had a trip to catch.

Then Raman wear a pair of Ruhi's selection and comes out Ruhi was not over yet and she was selecting more clothes for her Ishima.

Then Raman gets a call from Ishita.

Ishita "Raman aap kahan hon?"

Raman "Yaar tum bore nahen ho rahen hon iss sawaal sey kitney baar poochogee?"

Ishita "Raman main ney waisey hee poocha.Aap ko kyaa hogaya?"

Raman "Kyaa bolun yaar .Kall sey journey jar rahan hun aur subaha tumney itnaa subaha uthaaya."

Then same time sales girl comes there notices Raman is wearing his new clothes he just brought.

"Aap yeh kapadey pehenrahen hain." Raman signs yes and shows the bill.

"Theek hain aapkey who kapadey pack karthee hun." Raman signs Ok.

But Ishita also hears the lady voice and her imagination goes different way.Then she cuts the call and Raman feels it strange but he has bigger headache now Ruhi.

On other side Ishita's doubts are getting worse.

Ishita "Who kaun hain jo Raman sey uskey kapadon key baarey mey pooch sakthee hain?Main bhee yeh directly pooch nahen sathee thee?Kya who ladakee Raman key liyen mujhsey jyaada important hain?But I am his wife mujhsey jyaada."

Ishita "Main yeh honey nahen doongi.Raman sey jaroor poochungi?"

Ishita "Main kyaa poochungi?Raman mujhey hummarey shaadi key contract key baarey mey yaad dilaaya tho."

Ishita "Ussney kahan kee main usskey personal bathey mey interfere naa karo.But who mera personnal hain.Main kaisey chup rahon jab mera pathee koi aur ladakee key saath.Chee ..."

Tears flowing in her eyes.She was sitting silently in her room.

Then here Raman and Ruhi started their journeyRaman is driving with great speed to catch the bus.According to schedule of Bus it would be reaching next day morning as it is taking small kids and they need constand guidance and will not be able to travel continuously.Ruhi is getting everything as it is her control.

Then around after noon Raman gets a call from Ishita .Ishita was just trying to speak to Raman more and make him realize he is married and should not be other women from his self con science.But Ishita don't knoe that other women is her daughter.Ishita fakes reason of Ruhi this time.

Ishita "Raman aapney Ruhi sey baath kiyen they kyaa?Hummesha who mujhey phone karthe thee but kyon ussney kall sey mujhsey baath nahen kiyya?"

Raman "Main abhee teacher ko phone kartha hun aut bathatha hun kee tumhey phone karey."

Ishita always has worries over Ruhi but this time Raman was bigger loosing him to other woman is making Ishita behave out of character.

Ruhi "Papa abh hum kyaa karengey ?Ishima sey mujhey baath karna hoga but kaisey."

Raman "Han yaar tumhaari Ishima na dentist key jagaha detective bane hothe tho accha hotha.Abh main teacher sey kaisey baath karwaon."

Raman and Ruhi are thinking how to make Ruhi call Ishita.Obvoiusly they can't call using Raman's mobile and by some road passer they have threat of Ishita calling back that number and they will be caught.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
AD-VEH-TURE will be continued.
I am sorry for what ever happened yesterday.I came out of mind seeing no feed back.
I should'nt have done that and reacted that way.I am sorry please accept my apologies.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
No Problem Vikas it happens soometimes...
Anyways nice update... Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesome story..
Ishita and her imagination!!! 😆
Raman-ruhi r lovely father-daughter duo..just love them ..
Plz continue soon ... PM me for next update if possible...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what happened no replies.Is it not good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Superb update.i like confession track more than jealous track. Please think about it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ppramod

Superb update.i like confession track more than jealous track. Please think about it.

buddy I don't know what you are seeing .But I am seeing a confession ahead.Ishita cscolding herself for thinking bad about Raman.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
part 5

Scene starts with Raman thinking how to make Ruhi speak to Ishita.Then on road they will see a mobile shop and then Raman decides to buy new set and make call through it.

Then Ruhi sits for the selection of mobile and Raman provides his document for the new prepaid number.

Ruhi was seeing all mobiles available their and id not liking any one as all are of black or white couloured.

Raman "Tumney pehley he eek mobile select kiyaa tha merey liyen.Who pink wala.Ab kyaa aur ek pink chahiyen tumhey."

Ruhi "Uffo Papa Pink colour pasand naheen hain aapko."

Raman "Mujhey pink pasand hain but har cheez mey pink I don't like it.Jaldhee select karo."

Raman "Waisey bhee do din key use key liyen itnaa bada mobile kyon choota wala ley lon."

Ruhi "Papa mujhey select karney don."

She then turns few more down and finally selects a bedazzled one irritating Raman.Raman was supposed to pay in cash as the shop don't accept credit cards.

Then Raman and Ruhi restarted their journey.

Then on other side Ishita was upset on you know what.Then Mihika and Vandu come there to discuss something with Ishita.Ishita decides not to tell them as it will change everything.

Mihika "Akka suna hain kee jeeju ka birthday aaney waala hain next week."

Ishita "Han next Sunday hain.Kyon?"

Mihika "Akka ghar mey naa sab log decide kkiyan kee celebration hon iss baath kaa.Jeeju ney hummarey liyen kitnaa kiyaa tha.Mihir ney preperations suru kardee."

Ishita "Abhee bhee time hain naa itnaa jaldee kyon?"

Vandita "Ishita tum tho Raman ko jaanthe hon naa.Duan ka smell sey aag ka jagaha bathaadetha hain.Abh sey preparation karengey tho ussey easily patha nahen chalega."

Ishita "Theek hain.Kuch chahiyen?"

Mihika "Kyaa naa akka.Abh right time hain yeh tumhey bathaaney key liyen.Fir jeeju ayengey tho batha nahen payengey."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Vanditha "Kyaa hain naa party Raman key liyen surprise hain.Tho tumhey Raman ko maximum late karwaana hain uss din bahaar aaney sey."

Ishita "What?"

Mihika "Kyaa hain naa akka.Mihir ney kuch old slides plan kiyyaa hain aur jeeju key poraaney doston ko aur bahuth kuch.So who nahen chahtha kee jeeju uss din subaha bahaar ayen.So you have to stop him."

Ishita "But kaisey?"

Mihika "Akka office sey phone nahen aayengey aur perosnnal cheezey aapko rokhna hoga."

Ishita "Kaisey?"

Mihika "Akka kyaa hain yeh.Yeh hee mujhey bathaana pad rahan hain.Kiss do jeeju ko who kaam karega.Romantic mode mey rakho."

Ishita "Kiss sey kissey ko rokh saktey hain kyaa.Kyaa tum bhee na Mihika."

Vandu "Ishu Mihika sach kehrahen hain.You can give time by it."

Mihika "Akka .Shaadi tho pehley aapka huin hain but sab kuch mujhey bathaana pad rahan hain.Ladkey naa kuch cheezon key kuch bhee kar saktey hainin that one is romance .You can trade to anything for them.Main tho abh bhee Mihir sey kuch bhee lethi hun aisey hee.You have to use this as trumpcard and avoid romance unless they request you then you should loosen up trading for something."

Ishita was confused.

Mihika "Mujhey lagatha hain kee aap jeeju ko hummesha dethey rehtey hon issliye who trich kaam nahen karega.Waisey litney baar detho hon din mey.20-30."

Ishita "Shut up Mihika."

Ishita "Hum completely avoid karey tho kyaa hoga."

Vandu "Who humpar interest kho jaayega.Aur you know what illegal ways."

Mihika and Vandu goes away from there and Ishita again started.

"Main tho kabhee Raman ko respond hee nahen kiyya.But sach mey koi itnaa gir saktha hain iss cheez key liyen.I can't believe this."

"Raman bhee" again started crying but she gets a call now and she lifts it and it is from Ruhi.

Ishita stops crying .

Ruhi "Ishima,Aap kya kar rahen hon."

Ishita "Kuch nahen .Aapko kya hogayan do din laga phone karney.Ishima ko bhool gayen hon kyaa."

Ruhi "Nahen Ishima.Main friends key saath thee na tho ussey fever ho gaya thaa.Main usskey saath thee.Fir papa ney teacher ko phone kiyaa aur keha kee aapko phone karnaa hon."

Ishita "Tumney papa sey baath kee?"

Ruhi "Han."

Ishita "Yhe kisska phone hain.Teacher kaa."

Ruhi "Han."

Ishita "Kyaa naam hain unka."

Ruhi thinking few time "Aap believe nahen karogi .Ravan Kumar."

Ishita smiles at this "Ravan Kumar .Thek ussey phone don."

Ruhi signs to Raman and Ishita will recogonize Raman's voice any moment.So he has to avoid it.

Raman calls home through his mobile and Ishita goes to attend excusing Ruhi to call later.

Scene shifts to Raman and they restart their journey.

It is night time and they were very near to their destination around four hours more.They made a halt for that day in a town and they booked a hotel there.

Then Ruhi gets attention of dog show there and trade.

Ruhi request Raman to go and she can do it even though Raman is tired.It is her energy which matters and that she has full seing her father with her.

Raman "Ruhi tumm uss bus mey bhee itnaa masthee karogi kyaa?Ya sirf merey pass?"

Ruhi "Kyaa papa main masthi apney papa key saath he karoongi naa."

Then she is enjoying the dog show and Raman was carrying her around as she is wasting time few places.Then she sees a girl requesting money for treatment.Ruhi feels pity and donates the money from her fathers wallet .

Then after leaving from there Raman realizes she donated alst penny from there.

Raman "Ruhi tumhey mujhey poochkar donate karna chaiyen thaa.Abh hummarey pass paisey nahen hain."

Ruhi was shocked "Hummarey pass paisey nahin hain tho .Hum kaisey jaayengey."

Raman "Credit cards hain.But sabh hotels mey accept nahen hongey."

Ruhi "Sorry papa .Hum unsey waapas nahen le saktey naa."

Raman "Koi problem nahen.Hum koi solution doodengey." Seeing her sad.

She again went to her masthi mode bazaaing Raman's band in all possible ways.

It is not over and then she makes a decision to buy a dog.Ruhi caught attention of.

It is a white boxed well bred and trained.

Ruhi "Papa kitnee cute hain.Mujhey chahiyen.Mutthu is so small."

Raman "Cute hain.Mujhey tumhaarey Ishima sye jyaada daraawani lag rahen hain."

Ruhi "Papa.?"

Raman "Mazak kar rahn hun."

Raman "But ghar meyy allow nahen hain naa.Aur hum ghar kaisey le jaayengey."

Ruhi "Papa please .Hum manage karengey naa.Main daadi ko manaungi.Yeh tho trained hain mutthu trained nahen hain naa."

Raman turning to dealer "Card chalega."

Dealer "Yes sir "

Raman "Usskey related har cheez chahiyen .Kyaa khatha hain sab kuch ."

Raman makes deal and Ruhi gets her new pet.She gets a name "HERCULES " for it as it is bigger than others in that area.

Then Ruhi is playing with it and to Raman's tensions it is listening only to Ruhi and Raman is feeling difficult to control and Raman gets tired running after it.

Then Ishita calls him on sudden.

Raman picks the call before speaking to Ishita he requests dog "Plase tum apnaa moo badh rakho mera Biwi ka phone hain nahen uthaunga tho maardegi mujhey."

Raman was breathing fast as he got tired running and Ishita heard his words to dog .

She assumed Raman is telling to some girl.As dog accepted the request and was silent.

Ishita hears Raman breathing fast and Assumes what you know.

Ishita "Raman main baath mey call karoongi."

Ishita breaks down again thinking Raman just spent a moment with other woman.

Ishita "Raman .kyaa ho gaya aapko.Aaap itnaa kaisey gir saktey hain."

Ishita "Raman aapney mujhsey poocha hotha tho shaayad main sochteee iss bath key liyen but.Aap ney doosra solution ley lee apney liyen."

Ishita "Raman .Mujhey ek mauka tho diyan hotha."

Then she is sad thinking she made it herself by always making Ruhi come in between them.

Then on other side Raman feels weard as Ishita cut the call without speaking.

Then his boxer is listening to him on request instead of order.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
loving ruhi's masti
update soon n do pm m:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by prachi_vrushan - 11 years ago

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