Ishra TS: Dil ye bekarar kyu hai - Part 2 (Last part) updated, Pg 8

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rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

fabulous - any chance of a continuation where we see ishita getting raman to realize their love? 😉
can you please pm me when you write next 😳

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florine_20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

I love Ravan Kumar 😳 loved this os. Keep writing

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Jyoe

@Jyoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Beautiful! loved reading it and it brought a smile on my face!😊

This is exactly what is happening now both unsure about their feelings..and in this OS Ishita realizes it . would so love to see what Ishita does to let Raman to confess his feelings? Any chances of continuing please?😳 If you do, please PM me. would love to know what happens nxt.

By the way, these lines melted me for sure!😊😳

"Raman.. what is it?".

Her cell beeped once more "It's your smile. I swear I saw it sometime back but I don't see it now." Her lips curved in response and she looked up at him only to see him looking back at her, watching her intently. Her heart skipped a beat. She saw him type some more and sure enough, her cell beeped a few moments later.

"Ah, there it is. Thanks for finding it. Now keep it safe for me". If she could melt, she would have probably turned into a puddle by now.

Awesome, cute, Romantic is the word!

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Anju.s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

PLEASE CONTINUE

IT IS REALLY GOOD

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

it was fantastic..would love you to continue it!!

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AdventureGirl14

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: aniiee
I love this ishu😆

hehe.. me too 😉

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AdventureGirl14

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: SuryaNakshholic
superbb Os.. Love leg pullng convo of sister
nyc starting... Hope u write more Os/ss in future...

Thanks a lot.. 😊😊

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice one-shot..👍🏼

Thanks 😊

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Swathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Very beautiful. Do continue. It will be wonderful to see "the prim and proper" Ishita as a tease. Divyanka should be able to pull it off very well considering she is such a good actress
And it will be great to see Raavan kumar blush😆 . Jo sab ki taang khichta hai uski taang khiche to maza aaye! Dekhte hai ab one-liners kahan se aur kaise aate hain 😆
I was just thinking the other day how nice it would be if whoever realizes/accepts that he/she is in love would coerce the other person to accept it.
Please do write to inspire the CVs.

😆 😆