Ishra TS: Dil ye bekarar kyu hai - Part 2 (Last part) updated, Pg 8 - Page 5

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

My reactions while reading the OS :

Not bad. I'm feeling this.

It's cute. Really cute.

Seriously though, why is this SO GOOD?!

THE TEXTS EXCHANGE = CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!!!

After reading it :

I need a hug now RIGHT NOW.

I don't know if it's the writing style or what but that was so so good. Definitely one of my fav OS. Good job and i hope to read more from you ! 👏🤗

Originally posted by: -Anku-

That was a wonderful OS, love your writing. The subtle blooming love and the different sort of IshRa Romance, wonderfully penned 😳

Originally posted by: paru_rox

This was too good.

Raman was so in character here and so was Ishita. Loved how you described their insecurities about their feelings for each other. Both worried about the same thing -- what if they lose each other in an attempt to gain each other.

Loved this piece of work. I know you said, you have ended it there but I do hope you continue this to show us how Ishita manages to get Raman Kumar Bhalla to confess his feelings 😊

Originally posted by: Jyoe

Beautiful! loved reading it and it brought a smile on my face!😊

This is exactly what is happening now both unsure about their feelings..and in this OS Ishita realizes it . would so love to see what Ishita does to let Raman to confess his feelings? Any chances of continuing please?😳 If you do, please PM me. would love to know what happens nxt.

By the way, these lines melted me for sure!😊😳

"Raman.. what is it?".

Her cell beeped once more "It's your smile. I swear I saw it sometime back but I don't see it now." Her lips curved in response and she looked up at him only to see him looking back at her, watching her intently. Her heart skipped a beat. She saw him type some more and sure enough, her cell beeped a few moments later.

"Ah, there it is. Thanks for finding it. Now keep it safe for me". If she could melt, she would have probably turned into a puddle by now.

Awesome, cute, Romantic is the word!

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Very beautiful. Do continue. It will be wonderful to see "the prim and proper" Ishita as a tease. Divyanka should be able to pull it off very well considering she is such a good actress
And it will be great to see Raavan kumar blush😆 . Jo sab ki taang khichta hai uski taang khiche to maza aaye! Dekhte hai ab one-liners kahan se aur kaise aate hain 😆
I was just thinking the other day how nice it would be if whoever realizes/accepts that he/she is in love would coerce the other person to accept it.
Please do write to inspire the CVs.

😆 😆

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Awww.. It was such a beautiful OS... ⭐️

The texting part where he was trying to make her smile was so adorable.. It was the best part of the OS for me..

Ishu and Vandu talk was heartwarming.. Lol, Ishu is all ready to make her Raavan Kumarr realIze his feelings for her.. Go girl, get him.!! 😳😆

Please continue this one, really wana see how she makes him confess. Awesome work.. Keep it up!.!! 😊