New IshRa OS: Entangled!!

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Haha jaanu u rock with ur works...omg this reminded me of the scene when ishra aftrr rains... were in their bedroom n shagun had come to take some cd...n ishra convo had such double meaning...hope u r getting it...

Keep up the gud wrk..

PS: Nt able to press like button frm mob...hope my comment makes up for ur trp..

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Haha the predicament was something! Knew it from the beginning that it wasn't what we were supposed to think but the ending was quite entertaining!

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Rinki

@IshraMiNeholic

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

in startng i did'nt understnd anythng.. but atlast i understnd.. 😆

its differnt concept..

Nyc.. 👏

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

First and foremost I would say brilliant work

When I started I knew u will have a suprise at the end and I was write it took me all the will power not to read the end before the start hahaha

But very nice

Looking at ishra I think there suhaag raat will be something like this with them just having conversations

In reality this is what happens and not the roses and candles and background music hahaha

Amazing and brilliant work

U should write these kind if things more often

Very good writing

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Juhi

@JUHI.HI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

hahaha...i guessed it...sumthin fishy...bt just wanted to noe whr u were headin to😆 hilarious post...lovely😳

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

you're awful😆
i knew it ke aisa kuch nahi hai but wanted to see what the actual situation was - a brooch?! lol
loved it!

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Superb OS Dear!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

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Aditi

@-AditiS

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

humour at its best! ROFL throughout while reading it

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
edit:
yayy...first to comment
yeh toh kuch alag story nikhla😆😉gutter and cute😳 at the same time...
I love ur writing 👏👏👏

First one to comment on my post. 😃
Thank u very much.
Keep Reading my work if u love it. 😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9900ff">OMG!!!!!! Wish they were AT IT!! my gutter mind was on full swing imagining weird weird positions😳😳. That was HOT! you should definitely be proud of yourself!!!😆but this dirty mind here demands more so next time plz give us "the real act"...omg!! m still blushing...the release was painful for Ishita...RKB does things with utmost precision😆. Actually inside my mind i have convinced myself that the brooch thing never happened☺️.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9900ff">you are just Hilarious OSJ!!!👏👏Love you for giving this😳</font>

Tweety I am very bad in writing explicit n hot stuff 😳 😆
I enjoyed it the most when u guys write those mature stories.
This one is just a crazy one which I write due to over excitement of yesterday.
But I am very happy that u liked it.
Thanks again for ur encouragement.