New IshRa OS: Entangled!!

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Entangled!


"Ammaaa!!"

"Ishita please stop shouting like this. Your Amma is of no help here. You want the whole society to know what is happening in our room?"

"I won't survive this."

"Ishita don't be silly. Nobody has ever died of...

"Oh my God... it is hurting so much Raman."

"Relax Ishita. Otherwise it will hurt more. You are a doctor, you should know that. Ok breathe in...good...breathe out...now relax..."

"Aaaiii!!... Ouuuch!!...

Relax?

How can I Raman when it is hurting so much?

When YOU are hurting me so much?"

"Ishitaaa...cooperate please. You asked for it and now you are being so difficult".

" It is hurting Raman. Are you planning to tear my..."

Ishita whined in pain and looked away but could not stop a drop of tears to fall on Raman's neck.

"Awww you are crying? Please stop Ishu. We are almost there. Trust me I know what I am doing. I've done it before..." He said trying to calm her with his soothing words but it was doing just the opposite.

"Huh??"

"Yeah! It happened...you know... with Shagun."

"Shut up Ravan Kumar. Spare me the details ok. How insensitive! Talking about your ex in this position..."

"I am just trying to boost your morale, Ishu. You are being very difficult, not cooperating at all. I didn't expect this from you Ishita. Shagun was like a sheep being sheared without any fuss and we were done within minutes..."

Cutting him, with a fuming expression, Ishita exclaimed: "Don't you dare compare me with your ex. She is the last person I want to hear about right now."

"You are acting like a wild cat being given a bath...From Jhansi ki Rani to Ishita the jungle billi."

Raman chuckled, the vibration of his laugh shimmering across her sensitive skin causing her to gasp... but he immediately pulled out a straight face when Ishita started ranting.

"Aap ho janwar. You were done within minutes with her but we have been doing this for almost one hour. Aissa kyun? You are drunk and that's why you are not being able to..."

"I only had two shots of whiskey. The position was different Ishita. Here I am not being able to see what I am doing and... you are so tensed. I am asking you to lie down on the bed but you want it done standing up. We are doing things as per your instructions but still you are being way too much difficult ".

"I am being difficult Raman? Why don't you say it is this...this thing you have put on... which is making things more difficult?" Ishita exclaimed in a high pitch.

"No it is you. Who told you to wear this? You women buy anything you see in magazines..."

"I was just trying to please you. Aaahhh... Be gentle you brute...You are torturing me...'

Her shriek made him change his strategy. It would be futile arguing with her. Raman coaxed her gently:

"Ok, ok relax, we are almost there baby...

"Yeah?'

"Yeah, just a little more!"

Raman kept coaxing her softly unable to see her in pain. "Wasn't it hurting more at the beginning? You see once we have adjusted ourselves, the pain has lessened. Now just try to relax babe...Trust me..."

Her body shuddered hearing him say those words, her breathing started getting rapid as she felt his warmth breaths fanning her neck.

Ishita waited with terrified anticipation. She could felt he was trying to be as gentle as he could. She could feel him tensed, even if she was not seeing his face, trying to focus on what he was doing to avoid hurting her. She knew he would not hurt her but the situation was such that...

Adjusting his position again with his head at the crook of her neck, she heard him growled:

"Don't move Ishita..."

And then she felt it...

He finally managed to release ...it...to release them...

Ishita shrieked loudly as she clutched on Raman's shoulders with fresh tears spilling from her eyes as she heard him say with a sigh, pulling away from her:

"You literally killed me Ishita".

His face was as flushed as hers. His forehead was damp with his hair all sticky.

" YOU . LITERALLY . KILLED. ME. FOR . ONE. HOUR. Don't you ever put on this thing again?"

"You were dressed to kill; I only wore it to impress my wife."

"Oucchhh..." she whined still feeling very sensitive there.

"Am I bleeding much?" She asked, her face flushed and her teary eyes shining brightly.

"No. It is a bit swollen, all red and sensitive which is very normal after so much of pressure but you are not bleeding Ishita. My name is Raman Kumar Bhalla and I do things with utmost care and precision"

" Yes yes that's why you tortured me for so long! And please no need to wear a brooch in future. No need to impress me. You could have torn my ear lobe apart with it"

"And if you stop wearing these long drop and stone earrings, they would not get stuck to my

brooch ".

An afterword:

As all of you must have understood by now, Ishita and Raman were in a difficult situation for almost one whole hour trying to release Ishita's long drop earring from Raman's brooch.

The couple was back from a party and Ishita bumped into Raman while turning away from the cupboard with her kurti. The earring got stuck to Raman's brooch in his coat. And hence the whole drama...☺️🤣

How was it? 😆The number of likes for this OS, your feedback and comments would tell me if I should be proud of myself or should drown myself in chullu bhar paani mein!!

And yes I would not be surprised if some people refuse to read my works as from now after this story and... un-buddy me.😆

My index: Omshreejaanu's Index- IshRa:Romance Redefined!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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res...will update in a wee bit and sorry for double post😳
Edited by dreamy-sa - 10 years ago
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edit:
yayy...first to comment
yeh toh kuch alag story nikhla😆😉 gutter and cute😳 at the same time...
I love ur writing 👏👏👏
Edited by dreamy-sa - 10 years ago
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OMG!!!!!! Wish they were AT IT!! my gutter mind was on full swing imagining weird weird positions😳😳. That was HOT! you should definitely be proud of yourself!!!😆 but this dirty mind here demands more so next time plz give us "the real act"...omg!! m still blushing...the release was painful for Ishita...RKB does things with utmost precision 😆. Actually inside my mind i have convinced myself that the brooch thing never happened☺️.
you are just Hilarious OSJ!!!👏👏Love you for giving this😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Osj

What the ...

It was like you were given a holiday in Switzerland but somehow landed up in Uganda

I see Sangat ka Asar on you

Anyway good writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i so knew...poora daal hi kaala hai...so i just read it to knw where u were leadin as i ws so sure u wnt directly make them do it..😆😉..n my guess ws rite..😆😆

u rock che jaanu..🤗
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it ! it was very funny !!! 👍🏼👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am going out for some time. I hope when I come back I am pleasantly surprised by your responses on this silly OS.
See u later. Will reply to you all later.
Take care 😃
Edited by omshreejaanu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣☺️ naughty naughty girl! 😆
but somehow I knew u were going to fool ur readers! but then we have the liberty to think whatever we wish for...bas last para omit karna hai...ya padhke bhool jaana hai 😆 and the rest will fall in place...🤣
Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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🤣
mind blowingly awesome!

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