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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: exploringmyself
🤣
mind blowingly awesome!

Thanks!!😆

I am happy I managed to get most of the readers rofling!!😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: K.K.Monster
Such a hilarious piece dear.

Thanks for reading 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: samantha_151
Lol I was thinking one thing and turned out to be some other...

August fool!! 😆😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: anjalisawle
😉 OMG what a OS ...i think everybody's mind will be going for gutter mind... But if don't read afterthought people r thinking cry stuff. U r too good ...hilarious

Thanks😆

This OS was written for gutter purpose only!! 😳😆

Happy u enjoyed it😳😆

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Oyyyeww...this was a double meaning OS..mein read karrahi thi..and kuch aur Soch rahi thi..mera GmAnd i know u have one as well when writing this.hai ke nhi

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ABI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Awesome word play throughout the whole OS. Who would have guessed Raman and Ishita were stuck to each other cause of a brooch and earring, LOL.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Omg ... naughty naughty os
loved it
Gutter mind activated though😉

Thanks Dipsi. I am very happy to see most of my readers loving it. 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Autumn.
Lol.. I knew there was a twist at the end when Raman mentioned Shsgun's name. RKB won't ever utter or get reminded of Shagun at that moment ever with Ishu.
Good writing.. :)

A veteran member in my thread, I am honoured. 😃

Shagun has no place in Raman's life n definitely not when he will b busy loving his wife!!😳😆

Thank u for ur time.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: btalwar
Hahaha ... ROFL 🤣🤣

Although, I had figured out that you are gonna definitely going to burst the bubble in the end, yet the journey towards that was totally naughty and ☺️

Reminded me of the epic confusion between them on their Suhagraat 🤣🤣

Definitely a new genre for you ... and you rocked in to ... kudos OSJ..

Loved it.

P.S.: Kal RKB ne zara sa mardo vaala kaam kia 😆😆😆, to forum ka ye haal hai ... imagine when he ACTUALLY does something ... LOL ... this forum will explode

Still laughing ...

Cheers

Bhanu

🤣 Yes Bhanu, just a glimpse of Raman the mard, hum log ke dil n dimaag ke thikane nahin raha!!

Consummation time, we will go through the same haal that Ishu will go through May be☺️😆

As per everyone's feedback, everybody guessed there was a twist but I assume nobody thought of what it could be. 😛

Thanks for ur awesome review n comment on my work.

Really appreciate it.

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Paru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Lol OJu ... as soon as I started reading, knew it wasn't what it seemed. And Nooo, its not your writing, its RKB & his biwi you see. Had full bharosa that these two would be doing anything but that 😛😆

Enjoyed reading this a lot OJu, it was hilarious... waiting for the time when its not a love affair between a brooch & an earring 😉