New IshRa OS: Entangled!! - Page 2

Such a hilarious piece dear.

😉 OMG what a OS ...i think everybody's mind will be going for gutter mind... But if don't read afterthought people r thinking cry stuff. U r too good ...hilarious

Omg ... naughty naughty os

Lol.. I knew there was a twist at the end when Raman mentioned Shsgun's name. RKB won't ever utter or get reminded of Shagun at that moment ever with Ishu.

Hahaha ... ROFL 🤣🤣

Although, I had figured out that you are gonna definitely going to burst the bubble in the end, yet the journey towards that was totally naughty and ☺️

Reminded me of the epic confusion between them on their Suhagraat 🤣🤣

Definitely a new genre for you ... and you rocked in to ... kudos OSJ..

Loved it.

P.S.: Kal RKB ne zara sa mardo vaala kaam kia 😆😆😆, to forum ka ye haal hai ... imagine when he ACTUALLY does something ... LOL ... this forum will explode

Still laughing ...

Cheers

Bhanu

Hahahahhahah! That was hilarious, I was a little skeptical when the story began, but it was written with so much intensity and double meanings that somewhere in the middle I kind of belived what you wanted us to think, however in the end it turned out to be babaji ka thullu. Hahahha
But very well written! And amazing work:)

After reading this I came to know I have gutter mind

I just liked it so delicious thank you so much

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

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Entangled!</font></div>

"Ammaaa!!"

"Ishita please stop shouting like this. Your Amma is of no
help here. You want the whole society to know what is happening in our room?"

"I won't survive this."

"Ishita don't be silly. Nobody has ever died of...

"Oh my God... it is hurting so much Raman."

"Relax Ishita. Otherwise it will hurt more. You are a
doctor, you should know that. Ok breathe in...good...breathe out...now relax..."

"Aaaiii!!... Ouuuch!!...

Relax?

How can I Raman when it is hurting so much?

When YOU are hurting me so much?"

"Ishitaaa...cooperate please. You asked for it and now you
are being so difficult".

" It is hurting Raman. Are you planning to tear my..."

Ishita whined in pain and looked away but could not stop a
drop of tears to fall on Raman's neck.

"Awww you are crying? Please stop Ishu. We are almost there.
Trust me I know what I am doing. I've done it before..." He said trying to calm
her with his soothing words but it was doing just the opposite.

"Huh??"

"Yeah! It happened...you know... with Shagun."

"Shut up Ravan Kumar. Spare me the details ok. How
insensitive! Talking about your ex in this position..."

"I am just trying to boost your morale, Ishu. You are being
very difficult, not cooperating at all. I didn't expect this from you Ishita.
Shagun was like a sheep being sheared without any fuss and we were done within
minutes..."

Cutting him, with a fuming expression, Ishita exclaimed: "Don't
you dare compare me with your ex. She is the last person I want to hear about
right now."

"You are acting like a wild cat being given a bath...From Jhansi
ki Rani to Ishita the jungle billi."

Raman chuckled, the vibration of his laugh shimmering across
her sensitive skin causing her to gasp... but he immediately pulled out a
straight face when Ishita started ranting.

"Aap ho janwar. You were done within minutes with her but we
have been doing this for almost one hour. Aissa kyun? You are drunk and that's why
you are not being able to..."

"I only had two shots of whiskey. The position was different
Ishita. Here I am not being able to see what I am doing and... you are so tensed.
I am asking you to lie down on the bed but you want it done standing up. We are
doing things as per your instructions but still you are being way too much
difficult ".

"I am being difficult
Raman? Why don't you say it is this...this thing you have put on... which is making
things more difficult?" Ishita exclaimed in a high pitch.

"No it is you. Who told you to wear this? You women buy
anything you see in magazines..."

"I was just trying to please you. Aaahhh... Be gentle you
brute...You are torturing me...'

Her shriek made him change his strategy. It would be futile
arguing with her. Raman coaxed her gently:

"Ok, ok relax, we are almost there baby...

"Yeah?'

"Yeah, just a little more!"

Raman kept coaxing her softly unable to see her in pain. "Wasn't
it hurting more at the beginning? You see once we have adjusted ourselves, the
pain has lessened. Now just try to relax babe...Trust me..."

Her body shuddered hearing him say those words, her breathing
started getting rapid as she felt his warmth breaths fanning her neck.

Ishita waited with terrified anticipation. She could felt he
was trying to be as gentle as he could. She could feel him tensed, even if she
was not seeing his face, trying to focus on what he was doing to avoid hurting
her. She knew he would not hurt her but the situation was such that...

Adjusting his position again with his head at the crook of
her neck, she heard him growled:

"Don't move Ishita..."

And then she felt it...

He finally managed to release ...it...to release them...

Ishita shrieked loudly as she clutched on Raman's shoulders
with fresh tears spilling from her eyes as she heard him say with a sigh, pulling
away from her:

"You literally killed me Ishita".

His face was as flushed as hers. His forehead was damp with
his hair all sticky.

" YOU . LITERALLY . KILLED. ME. FOR . ONE. HOUR. Don't you
ever put on this thing again?"

"You were dressed to kill; I only wore it to impress my wife."

"Oucchhh..." she whined still feeling very sensitive there.

"Am I bleeding much?"
She asked, her face flushed and her
teary eyes shining brightly.

"No. It is a bit swollen, all red and sensitive which is
very normal after so much of pressure but you are not bleeding Ishita. My name
is Raman Kumar Bhalla and I do things with utmost care and precision"

" Yes yes that's why you tortured me for so long! And please
no need to wear a brooch in future. No need to impress me. You could have torn my ear lobe apart with it"

"And if you stop wearing these long drop and stone earrings,
they would not get stuck to my

brooch ".

<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1">An afterword:
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<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1">As all of you must have understood by now, Ishita and Raman
were in a difficult situation for almost one whole hour trying to release
Ishita's long drop earring from Raman's brooch.
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<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1">The couple was back from a
party and Ishita bumped into Raman while turning away from the cupboard with
her kurti. The earring got stuck to Raman's brooch in his coat. And hence the
whole drama...☺️</font><font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1">🤣</font>

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<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1">How was it? 😆The number of likes for this OS, your feedback and
comments would tell me if I should be proud of myself or should drown myself in
chullu bhar paani mein!!</font>

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<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1">And yes I would not be surprised if some people refuse to read
my works as from now after this story and... un-buddy me.😆</font>

My index: Omshreejaanu's Index- IshRa:Romance Redefined!

🤣
Alright, I knew daal mein kuch kaala hai from the start and I was right in the end but by god, even knowing the truth- the way you had written it, I was almost convinced that it was plain daal...and hot plain daal it was.