Halchal Hui, Zara Shor Hua - An Ishra OS

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Edited on Page 2 😃

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Ash

@-RisingAsh-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

OMG ! U adopted a different style of narrating n i loved it.. The whole scenario was awesome ! I was actually imagining everything.. Vala was the cupid there n i loved the way u put him here.. Totally justified for me ! Gr8 job gal ❤️

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

fantabulous SS Bhanu ...

Bala is always bin my fav character from show... i love his maturity and the way he tackle situation ...

loved to read something on IshRa from Bala's POV...

very beautifully written...

loved it

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

wow i liked this. pl continue his plan . i have lot of faith for bala and liked how you showed his pov

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

So brilliantly written..loved it dear..fantastic👏👏

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: JUHI.HI
nice one dear!!!👏

Thanks Juhi 😊.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Asha122
Amazing update... Very well written...

Bala's POV is too good and true...

Just a suggestion it will be good if u continue this till confession...

Thank you Asha 😊.

Haha. Like the protagonists in our serial, even my writing muse is not ready for confession. So, I found it apt to end it here.