Halchal Hui, Zara Shor Hua - An Ishra OS

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: whitelily
Great os

Thank you Whitelily. BTW, Can you please tell me you name? I am sorry, I do not know it. 😳.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: rutu83
i loved it!👏
awesome to see a new perspective- please write more

Thanks a lot Rutu83 😊.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Ishrafanno1
Very well written are you going to continue. Please do.

Thank you dear. Am not sure whether I will continue.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: twerping
Brilliant story! Firstly, thank you for writing the whole thing from Bala's point of view! That character has a special place in my heart and you really brought out the best things about him in this story! and of course superbly written and could almost imagine the scenes playing out in my mind

Thank you Twerping. I agree. Bala is indeed a special character and I will really love him to play some part in this realization track.

Thank you for appreciating my work 😊.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Amazing update

Thank you 😊

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: alu5123
Amazing idea. How cute of Bala to notice Raman checking out his wife n acting on impulse👏

Hehe .. Yup, I think Bala is someone who can pick up the discreet looks pretty well. Thank you.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: paru_rox
RESwa

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Oh my God ... an OS dedicated to me Bhanu . Tight wala Hugs girl 🤗.

Wished I knew before, would have tried to res on first page. Needless to say, am touched dammit 😃

Excellent OS girl ⭐️

Bala is like the Spiritual Guru of YHM yaar especially for Ishu & Raman. Kya khel khala ussnay. Got the great RKB confused, thinking & contemplative. Bala should make DVD's for doling out advice bey ... the guy would be a millionaire soon 😆

Loved the conversation about Ishita-Raman being in a comfort zone & not wanting to leave. You know for the first time, an explanation for their relationship not moving forward actually makes sense to me. They are so happy with the stillness & peace in an otherwise turbulent life that they faced, that they just don't want to do anything to disturb it. They want to enjoy the companionship & that special friendship that they have rather than risk losing it for a dream that they are even afraid to look towards. Beautifully written part.

Coming to the song ... oh my Bhanu, I love this song too & this movie too. Never understood why it failed. Loved the chemistry b/w Akshaye & Madhuri, there was something really cool & romantic in their scenes. For the first time I felt Akshaye Khanna had chemistry with a co-actor 😛😆

Parul 🤗 .. Tight vaala hugs to you girl ... This OS is there is all because of you 😳. As I said, I was out of ideas and then our ranting on the episode made me think and I had this idea in a second.

I know I didn't tell you before 😳 .. but only because I was not too sure myself about this idea ... rather, I just wrote the draft in my phone and edited in late in the night.

Spiritual Guru ... brilliantly apt term for Bala. He is indeed the savior for both these souls and I will love to see something the real series ... hahaha ... dvds ... 😆😆

I agree about them being at peace with their present state. It is but natural for anyone who is leading a troubled life to find even a bit of happiness to be comforting. And both of them have found this after such a long period. So, naturally, they are too afraid to disturb anything at all.

But, of course. we are here to do that from various mediums 😉😆. In my case, it has be Bala and therefore, I officially made him the cupid between these two ignorant souls.

I love the movie too. Madhuri and Konkona. Both brilliant actresses. Nice to know someone else also likes this movie (I have been made fun of watching its rerun on TV mane a times )

Thank you for liking my work dear. See you in your post.

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Divya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

its b'ful dear!

plz continue! 👍🏼

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: happenstance
Res

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This was so wonderfully written and that too from the perspective off someone other then couple in question. I loved how you have taken Bala's awareness of the arising situation between Raman and Ishita and given it a 'voice' here. I would love to read more 😳 now that Bala has set things in motion, would be lovely to see it conclude with what we have been waiting for.

Glad to know that you liked my work. I know, I wanted to see for once that what do others think of their equation and my obvious choice was Bala.

I am not sure whether I will continue this because I am out of ideas and had planned it as such. Let us see. Fingers crossed.

Thank you for reviewing 😊.