Halchal Hui, Zara Shor Hua - An Ishra OS

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alu5123

@alu5123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing idea. How cute of Bala to notice Raman checking out his wife n acting on impulse👏

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Paru

@paru_rox

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

RESwa

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Oh my God ... an OS dedicated to me Bhanu . Tight wala Hugs girl 🤗.

Wished I knew before, would have tried to res on first page. Needless to say, am touched dammit 😃

Excellent OS girl ⭐️

Bala is like the Spiritual Guru of YHM yaar especially for Ishu & Raman. Kya khel khala ussnay. Got the great RKB confused, thinking & contemplative. Bala should make DVD's for doling out advice bey ... the guy would be a millionaire soon 😆

Loved the conversation about Ishita-Raman being in a comfort zone & not wanting to leave. You know for the first time, an explanation for their relationship not moving forward actually makes sense to me. They are so happy with the stillness & peace in an otherwise turbulent life that they faced, that they just don't want to do anything to disturb it. They want to enjoy the companionship & that special friendship that they have rather than risk losing it for a dream that they are even afraid to look towards. Beautifully written part.

Coming to the song ... oh my Bhanu, I love this song too & this movie too. Never understood why it failed. Loved the chemistry b/w Akshaye & Madhuri, there was something really cool & romantic in their scenes. For the first time I felt Akshaye Khanna had chemistry with a co-actor 😛😆

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happenstance

@happenstance

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

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This was so wonderfully written and that too from the perspective off someone other then couple in question. I loved how you have taken Bala's awareness of the arising situation between Raman and Ishita and given it a 'voice' here. I would love to read more 😳 now that Bala has set things in motion, would be lovely to see it conclude with what we have been waiting for.

Edited by happenstance - 11 years ago

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Omgg how i love bala n vandu❤️

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

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Unres below!!😊

Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Very beautifully written..

Bala the cupid...i wish there is a future track like this in the show too..pls cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

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Bhanu have you written any other pieces besides the SS - STL - and this one? Sorry to ask a question first but if so please let me know of your other pieces 😳 would love to read them as I am quite lazy when it comes to surfing the forum and might have missed out on your work. 😳

Now coming to this SS - you know what the first thing that I felt was like OMG yay 😛 an OS from Bala' POV - I adore the guy despite his recent tomfoolery 😆 he is a sweetheart and you have so retained that aspect of him in this one too.

I loved how he included Vandita in his plan and got IshRa to come to them and talk things with Raman, especially noticing the ever so discreet' Mr. Bhalla' indiscreet moment 😉😆 quite an observer he is and what a way to induce a turmoil - lol reminds me of the line - saap bhi mar jaaye aur laathi bhi na toote 😆

I especially loved how he made all the right questions and then subtly backed off 😉 but how could you end it here Bhanu - so not fair this should have been a SS I swear. Please try and write a sequel for this one- pretty please cos I so loved this one - a breath of fresh air man I tell ya. Made me have this huge smile on my face when I was done reading it.

Beautiful work my friend 🤗 Keep Rocking 😃

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago