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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue!! This is the realistic way CV's can go with but dont know if user wants to see it without ishra moments on the screen...its a beautiful story.. great job putting them together
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Posted: 11 years ago
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2 part

Scene starts with Ishita thinking over what Bala said.Ishita is still in confusion.

Ishita "Shaayad jeeju sach hee kehraha hain.Main kuch jyaada soch raheen hun."

She then leaves but she is not satisfied with her own judgement.

It is around evening Raman comes home and Ishita was waiting for him.She want to clear the problem today.

But Raman wins this time as he gets busy over the matter of concern.

Raman is in hall while everyone are there ready for dinner.

Raman "Maa main kall Hyderabad jaa raha hun.Kuch urgent kaam hain teen din mey ajaaonga."

Mrs Bhalla "Hyderabad mey kyaa kaam pad gaya tumhey."

Raman "Kuch naheen maa.Udhar hummarey company ney ek company handover karlee .Usskey liye mujhey waha jaakar sab arrange karnaa hoga .Waha kissey ko appoint karna padega samhalney key liye."

Everyone takes this news normally as it is common for Raman to go for business meetings .But Ishita's unanswered question are not leaving her.

Raman was packing his luggage and searching things which he could'nt find as he was even habituated for Ishita's presence.

Ishita comes and see Raman packing and comes to help him.

Ishita "Aap mujhey bol dethey main kar dethee na.Aap kyon kar rahen hain."

Raman "Koi problem nahee main kar longa .Waisey bhee mera kaam mujhey karney mey kyaa problem ho sakthee hain."

Ishita "Aap dialogu math maaro.Main ney bola naa main kar doongi."

Raman "Main kar loonga .Shayad tum bhool gaye .Main shaadi sey pehley apna kaam khud kartha tha."

Ishita "Lekin abh baath alag hain naa.Main madad karlongi aapke."

Raman "Ishita main karlonga .Ruhi ka doodh ka time hogaya tum jao.Pehley tum Ruhi kee Ishima ho baath mey saarey kaam."

Ishita "Main ussey doodh dekar hee aarahen hun."

Raman "Tum jaakar so jao mujhey subaha jakdee jaana hain.Tum waha hee so jao."

Ishita "Raman aap pehley bola hotha Ruhi so gaye hain.Fir ussey uthana theek naheen hoga.Aaj main yaha adjust karlongi."

Ishita started to counter Raman's trick.Ishita started packing Raman's stuff without his permission.

Raman after few minutes again reshuffles his luggage and changes everything what Ishita selected.

Ishita "Kyaa kar rahe hain aap.Main ney packing kiya naaap fir kar rahen hain."

Raman "Yeh kapadey kuch saaf naheen lag rahe hain tho mainey socha change karloo.Waha fir sey clean naa karnaa padey."

Ishita "Aap teen din key liyen jaa rahen hain.Ap jaisey bol rahen hain kee ek mahiney thak waheen rahengey."

Raman "Kisko patha kaam nahe huan tho wahee rukhna padega.Tum sojao.Mera flight subaha chey bhajey hain mujehy jaldee uthna hoga."

Ishita sleeps in her couch.

Her mind is filled with words.Raman calling her Ruhi's Ishima and Raman constantly avoiding her .Raman telling he is going out of town.

Ishita seeps thinking about Raman .

After few hours Ishita sees some strange scenes in her dream.

She sees Raman calling Toshiji and telling he wont come there for a month as he was busy and he speaks to everyone except Ishita.When Ishita calls him she will hear some voice asking whome is he speakin to and Raman answers as Ruhi's mom and nothing else.

Ishita suddenly wakes up at time in her sleep where Raman "Ruhi ke maa hain aur kuch naheen."

Same time Raman's laram rings and it was around 2:30.Ishita was fully tensed .

Raman gets up and ask.

Raman "Kya hogaya tum itney jaldhee uth gayee."

Ishita "Kuch nahee kuch ajeeb sa swapna tha."

Raman "Kya huan .Tum theek hon naa.Kuch bura swapna tha kyaa."

Ishita thinks over her dream and says "Kuch naheen."

Raman "Tum so jaon mujhey ready hona hain."

Ishita was trying to sleep but she is not getting sleep over the words Raman said in dream "Aur kuch naheen."

Ishita "Main Raman key liyen kuch naheen hun siwa Ruhi ki maa."

Again she gets to dilemma.That their marriage is a compromise for Ruhi and nothing else.

Ishita "Mujhey itnaa kyon farak pad rahan hain.Hum sirf dosth hain."

Ishita "Main isskey baarey mey itnaa kyon soch rahan hun.Yeh sirf ek swapna tha."

Ishita closes her eyes saying this.

It is around 4 o' clock Raman is leaving.

Ishita wakes up .Actually she never slept.

Ishita "Aap jaa rahen hain?"

Raman "Han time hogaya hain.Tum sabko boldena."

Ishita "Raman aap apna khyaal rakhiyega.Jathey hee phone keejiyen."

Raman "Main jantha hun.Tumhey mujhey koi instruction deney kee jaroori naheen hain."

Ishita "Raman main waisey hee bol rahe thee."

Raman "Itna concern jaroori naheen hain.Main jaantha hun main kyaa kar raha hun."

Ishita "Raman aap aisey kyon kar rahen hain?"

Raman "Kuch naheen .Tum Ruhi ka khyaal rakhna.Waisey bhee Ruhi ki Ishima ko jyaada bolney kee jaroori naheen hain.Tum jarror rakhogi.Tum iss ghar mey aye bhee Ruhi key liye naa."

Raman "Bya main jaa rahan hun."

Raman leaves bidding good bye .But Ishita was struck over the words Raman told.

Ishita "Raman ney aisa kyon kahan."

Ishita "Raman sach hee tho keh rahan hain mais iss ghar mey Ruhi key liyen hee aye."

Ishita "Fir iss bath mujhey itnaa kyon pareshaan kar rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman waisey kahan hoga.Main usko badha rahen hun."

Ishita convinces herself that she is thinking so much and tries to sleep.But she cant get over words she heard from Raman's mouth and in dream ."Aur kuch naheen.'

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Read both of them in one shot! Great updates. Hopefully you will continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
i hope u update soon bcoz i wanna see dhakun ishita's realization ur story is going good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arree yaarrr when will ishita confront him😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bohot ho gaya yaar ruhi ki ishima.Aab Ishita ka jkr mode laa do of which raman cud never escape n blurt out the truth.pretty please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was again a good Update ...!!
Actually seeing Ishu in #FARQ_Padtha mode ...I am entertained ...!!😳
In the show ...we never got to see this side of Ishu in TV ...
THANQ for this 😆😉


And yes I cant wait for the next Part ...I have to wait till I come back from my hostel 😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Another lovely part...the story's just getting better n better with every part...amazing. Hope to see the cv's bring such a track soon in YHM.
Looking forward to your next part. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

Bohot ho gaya yaar ruhi ki ishima.Aab Ishita ka jkr mode laa do of which raman cud never escape n blurt out the truth.pretty please.

Buddy for Ishita to be in JKR more Raman should be in Ravan Kumar mode.
Ravan Kumar is temporily out of courage (I am right its courage not coverage)so we have to adjust with Raman and Ishita.

Iss Ruhi ka ishima ka drama kuch din chaltha rahega.

But I am sorry I am not upto your expectation.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweety_98

It was again a good Update ...!!
Actually seeing Ishu in #FARQ_Padtha mode ...I am entertained ...!!😳
In the show ...we never got to see this side of Ishu in TV ...
THANQ for this 😆😉


And yes I cant wait for the next Part ...I have to wait till I come back from my hostel 😭😭

abh kuch din padthey hee jaayega.

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