My Dream Track (os rz)finished - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one. How n when did he hurt?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Another interesting part...keep going, your OS is really awesome. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
OMG...ab mera question yahi hai ki Raman ko chot kaise pahunchi???
Yeh janne keliye waiting for next part😉😆...
Now Ishita is really hurt because of Raman's those words...
Waiting...waiting...waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NYC. Now ishu is hurt a lot [:s ].Her words struck herself but the ? Is how raman got hurt?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
plz pm me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
amazing...waitinggg...if u post all the parts in a day..u cn go as long as u want without confession😉 its vertygripping
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 5

Scene starts with Ishita being hurt and goes out of room.Mihika who was waiting for chance comes to her.

Mihika "Akka aap free hon aaj?"

Ishita thinking that she needs a diversion accepts it.

Ishita "Han kyon?"

Mihika "Kuch naheen mujhey shopping key liyen jaana tha?"

Ishita "Theek hain main bhee aa rahen hun?"

Mihika and Ishita go for shopping in her car.Ishita is in car but her mind is completely over the wound she saw.

Mihika "Aapney jeeju sey mila.Main ney dekha tha unhey bahar jaathey samay bahuth gussey mey thaa?"

Ishita thinks about Raman's words and unknowingly gets tears in her eyes.

Mihika notices this.

Mihika "Jeeju aap pey gussa tha.Kyaa huan ussney kuch kahan?"

Ishita "Tum aisey kyo pooch rahen hon ?Kuch naheen huan?"

Mihika "Aapkey asson alag baath batha rahen hain."

Ishita then notices tears in her eyes and clears them.

Ishita "Kuch naheen."

She suddenly stops the car.

She remembers Raman's words and again stops.

Mihika "Akka mujhey batao naa kyan huan.Main aapkey madad kar saktey hun ."

Ishita "Raman mujhsey kuch chupa rahan hain.Ussney mujhsey itnaa bada baath chupaaya."

Mihika thinks something is seriously wrong and gets tensed.

Mihika "Kyan huan ?"

Ishita tells everything happened in her room to Mihika.Mihika also get tensed.

Mihika then remembers about Bala's words.

In flash back "Ishita aur Raman ka rishtha sab key jaisa naheen hain.Sab key rishtey khushiyo sey judey hothey hain.In donon ka tho problems aur tensions sey bana hain.In dono ka shaadi huee bhee Ruhi ko paaney ke liyen jab saarey ghar mey tension thaa."

"So jab in dono ko saath bhee laana hon tho koi problem hee kar saktee hain.Ishita ko bhee Raman apney khushiyon na baatney sey jyaada affect naheen hogi.Jitna jab who hogi Raman apney pareshaniyan naa baatney sey hothi hain."

"So our main work is to expand any problem related to Raman to peak and then leave them alone."

Mihika reminds evryt thing Bala told.

Mihika "Akka aap itnaa tension kyo le rahen hon.Jeeju ney bola naa who sabko tension naheen dena chahtha thaa issliyen naheen bola."

Mihika "Waisey bhee aapney kitney logon lo dekha hoga jaisey ghaayal aap jeeju ko itnaa importance kyo de rahen ho jab who khud usskey baarey mey naheen soch rahen hain."

Ishita "Kyaa kahan tumney.Sabmey aur Raman mey farak hain.Raman mera ..."

Mihika "Doosth hain" interrupts .

Mihika "Yeh bahuth baar bol chukee ho aap."

Mihika "Dosth hain maana accha doosth hain.Fir bhee itnaa pareshan honey kee jaroori nahen hain.Abh jeeju theek hain naa."

Ishita "Abh theek hain.Ussey sach mey kuch ho gaya hotha tho yeh baath karney ka mauka nahen miltha poora pariwar ro rahen hothey."

Mihika "Abh kuch naheen huan naa abh hua hotha tho sab kuch chod deejiye."

Mihika "Waisey bhee aapkey kitney dosth hain jiskey aap choto sey itna paresha hojathey hain.Main ney tho aapko itna pareshan kabhee naheen dekha kissey dosth ke liyen."

Ishita don't have answer for this question.

They reach shopping mall and Ishita goes for car parking.

Mihika then calls Mihir .

Mihika "Mihir Raman jeeju ko Hyd. Mey koi bada chot lagee hain.Mujhey usskey baarey mey janna hai.Akka bahuth pareshan hain.Bath kissey ko patha naheen hona chahiyen."

Mihir "Toda saas tho lo pehley.Theek hain main patha kartha hun."

Ishita comes there.

Mihika "Main ney Mihir ko bathaya who patha karega kee jeeju ko chot kaisey lagee.Abh tho khush ho jaon."

Ishita fakes a smile and Mihika accepts even though she knows it.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: posterity

amazing...waitinggg...if u post all the parts in a day..u cn go as long as u want without confession😉 its vertygripping

Nice answer.
It is my kind of answer.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
readed al parts going vry well.. keep wrtng it more.. will wait 4 nxt updt.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Loved all parts and eagerly waiting for update...

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