My Dream Track (os rz)finished

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Scene starts with Raman sitting in his car near office he is reminding everything happened in last few days.Ishita telling about Subbu and her love for Ruhi .

Raman thinks that he is not important for Ishita and she still considers him only as Ruhi's father and just a friend.

Raman is worried over his feelings for Ishita .

Raman "Ishita key liyen main sirf Ruhi ka Papa hun aur kuch naheen.Main iss baath sey agey badh chukka hun lekin Ishita .."

Raman "Mujhey khud ko control mey rakhnaa hoga.Mera koi bhee galthee kissey bhee keemat par jaa saktha hain."

Raman leaves office and reaches home.The moment he reached home scenario was every one busy with their own work and Ishita is helping Ruhi in her studies.

She was about to come to help Raman but he rejects the offer and tells her to continue her work with Ruhi.

Raman gets ready and was doing his work in his room over his laptop.He gets busy and Ishita comes there to speak to him .

Ishita "Raman meri gaadi kharaab huin hain kall tum Ruhi ko school chod denaa."

Raman without any argument "Theek hain."

Ishita was surprised as she expected an argument over that matter.

Raman gets up and goes to kitchen making his own coffee.Mrs Bhalla comes there and offers the help and she does that.

Ishita sees this and gets weird as simply Raman could have told her.

After dinner while Ishita was making arrangements for sleeping .Raman sees this.

Raman "Ishita aaj mujhey bahuth kaam hain tum aaj Ruhi key saath so jaana."

Ishita "Raman main adjust karloongi."

Raman "Kya jaroori hain.Tum aaj Ruhi key saath so jaon.Adjust karney kee kyaa jaroori hain.Ruhi kee maa ko Ruhi key saath soney mey kya problem hain"

Ishita leaves to Ruhi's room.

Raman watches TV for few minutes and then goes to sleep.

Ishita who comes out to get water notices light being off in Raman's room .

Ishita "Raman itney jaldee so gaye.Ussney kahan kee kaam hain."

She then leaves to Ruhi's room and gets busy telling a story to Ruhi.After Ruhi sleeps she goes and checks Raman's room and he is sleeping and Ishita wonders why he told lie to her.

Ishita "Koi kaam subaha hoga isliyen jaldhee sogayen.Lekin mera waha rehney sey kyaa problem hosakthey hain.Main he unhey rooj uthathee hun naa."

Ishita "Koi kaam ka tension hoga.main kuch jyaada soch raheen hun.Abh main bhee sojathee hun."

Ishita gets up in morning and gets ready and makes Ruhi ready and as usual takes coffee to Raman's room but Raman has left early and was not there in room.

Ishita "Mujhey bathaye bhina hee chal gaye."

Ishita was still in thoughts over it.

Mrs Bhalla "Kya soch rahee hai thu?"

Ishita "Mummy ji Raman itney jaldee chal gaye office."

Mrs Bhalla "Han Mujhey bathaaya tha kee kuch urgent kaam hain jaldee jaana pada.Tumhey bathaaya naheen?"

Ishita "Main to unsey milee he naheen."

Ishita leaves thinking about it she makes Ruhi do break fast and see driver coming to pickup Ruhi for school.

Ishita "Tum Ruhi ko chodkar ghar aajaana .Mujhey Raman key liyen naastha lekey jaana hain."

Driver leaves and after half an hour he comes back .Ishita goes in car to office.

She sees whole office is empty as still there is time for office and Raman was sitting alone in his cabin checking some files.

Ishita comes there to give break fast to Raman .

Raman "Ishita tum yaha ?"

Ishita "Main aapkey liyen naastha lekar aye"

Raman "Mujhey poocha hotha .Main neey aathey samay hee bahar karliyan."

Ishita "Itney jaldee aagayen aap.Yaha tho koi naheen hain."

Raman "Mujhey kuch kaam tha .Conference meeting tha."

Raman "Mujhey kaam hain main tumsey baadh mey miltha hun."

Ishita leaves but she din't believe what Raman said and she was sure that Raman din't had break fast.So she just left tiffin box there.

It happens similarly for few more days.

Raman comes late and leaves early .He was almost avoiding Ishita and Ishita was daily sleeping in Ruhi's room as Raman sent her saying he have work here.

He is not arguing over any thing and he planned few more weekend for just Ruhi and Ishita and he would be missing there.

Ruhi asks for a movie and Raman arranges tickets for just both of them .

Ruhi is getting time with Raman while Ishita gets time but they don't speak much and Raman only spoke about Ruhi and decisions over Ruhi.

Raman few times calls home and speaks to Ruhi and he is calling landline number instead of Ishita's mobile and he was telling everything to Mrs Bhalla about meetings and schedule.Which Ishita used to remind him.

Ishita initially doubtful is now sure that Raman is avoiding her.

Once while in Mrs Iyer's house Mihir and Mihika were there quarreling over something.

Ishita comes there and they stop fighting.

Ishita "Mihir office mey kuch problem hain kyaa.Koi nayee deal ya kuch problem hain."

Mihir "Kuch nahee sab kuch normal hain.Bhabhi kya huan?"

Ishita "Kuch nahee aisey pooch rahe thee?"

Mihika understood something but she was silent.

Once Mihir left.

Mihika "Akka koi problem hain kyaa .Sab kuch theek hain"

Ishita "Mujhey naheen patha .Sab kuch normal hee hain lekin kuch bhee theek naheen hain."

Mihika "Kyaa huan jeeju sey koi jagada huan ?"

Ishita "Wohi tho problem hain.Raman mujsey jagada kyaa koi bhee argument bhee nahee huan ek huftey sey."

Mihika "Koi jhagada naheen tho kyaa problem hain."

Ishita "Mujhey lag raha hain Raman mujhey avoid kar rahan hain."

Mihika "Kyaa .Aapko aisa kyon lag rahan hain?"

Ishita "Raman mujhsey kuch chupa rahan hain.Hum aarey beech itney din sey koi argument bhee naheen hua.Raman ney ek baar bhee gussa naheen kiya.ur office mey hee jyaada time bith rahen hain."

Mihika "Jeeju gussa naheen kar rahen tho acchee baath hain naa.Office mey koi kaam hoga."

Ishita "Naheen hain.Mera haath kaa coffee bhee naheen pee rahen hain.Khud jaakar banaarahen hain."

Mihika "Issmey kya problem hain .Aapsey baath bhee naheen kar rahen hain."

Ishita "Bathey tho hain lekin sab kuch Ruhi key baarey mey."

Mihika "Mujhey tho koi problem naheen dik raheen hain.Sab kuch theek hain."

Mihika "Main pehley baar dekhrahan hun.Kee koi issliye pareshaan hain kyon kee unka pathee ussey jagadha nahee kar rahan hain.Gussa nahee ho rahan hain."

Same time Bala comes there and it looks he listened to complete conversation.

Bala "Ishiat issmey tumhey kyaa problem ho raheen hain."

Ishita "Jeeju aap.Aap kabh aaye?"

Bala "Jab tum apney problems Mihika ko batha raheen thee thab."

Mihika leaves as she gets a message from Mihir .

Bala "Kabh sey aisaa ho rahan hain.?"

Ishita tells him everything from the day it started .

Bala "Ussey pehley aap log kiss barey mey discuss kiya tha."

Ishita tells him about the discussion over Raman asking whether she is happy in this marriage.

Bala understood the matter .

Bala "Sab kuch normal hain.Tum bass jyaada soch rahee ho."

Ishita "Aap yeh kaisey keh saktey hain."

Bala "Tum tension math lena ."

Ishita "Tension nahen loo.Jeeju aap merey situation mey rehkar dekho."

Bala "Tumhey kyaa problem ho raheen hain.Raman sey pyaar thodi karthee hun."

Ishita "jeeju aap kya bol rahen hain.Aap jaanthey hain naa main yeh shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen kiya tha."

Bala continue "Aur Raman sirf tumhaara ek accha dosth hain."

Ishita was silent.

Bala "Tho tumhey kyaa problem ho raheen hain.Tum Ruhi key saath hee hon.Aur Ruhi sey acchey time mil rahan hain."

Ishita "Han "

Bala "Fir tumhey aur kyaa problem hain.Jab yeh shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen hain tho."

Bala "Raman sirf ek dosth hain na tumhaara .Fir itnaa kyon pareshan ho rahen ho."

Bala "Who tumsey baath kar rahan hain.Tumhara respect dey raha hain.Sab kuch theek hee tho hain."

Bala "Fir tumhey kyaa problem ho rahan hain.Main bhee tumhaara dosth hee tho hun.Main thodi tumhey har baath bathatha hun phone karkey."

Bala "Main bhee tumsey jagada naheen kartha hun.Tumhey kuch problem naheen ussmey."

Bala "Tum bass jyaad a soch raheen hun ya Raman tumharey liyen kuch dossth sey bhadkar hain."

Bala "In donon mey kya sach hain tumhey decide karna hoga."

Bala leaves telling this

Ishita was in thoughts over what Bala told her.


(to be cont.)

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madhavimanish32 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very very very very nice
RheaSh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it...would love to watch something similar like that in the show.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Liked how you brought Bala at the end to give Ishu some advice...nice OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one is really good ...❤️❤️ Really really good ❤️❤️❤️

Loved Ishu & Bala's Convo ...
It actually made everyone understand that Raman is nt just Frnd ...
Its really good thought to compare Bala & Raman ...

Hope Ishu too understands 😉 ...R U gonna continue ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweety_98

This one is really good ...❤️❤️ Really really good ❤️❤️❤️

Loved Ishu & Bala's Convo ...
It actually made everyone understand that Raman is nt just Frnd ...
Its really good thought to compare Bala & Raman ...

Hope Ishu too understands 😉 ...R U gonna continue ???

depends on others interest.
If others want it to be continued or not.

But give your judgement do you want me to continue
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

depends on others interest.
If others want it to be continued or not.

But give your judgement do you want me to continue



My vote ...DO CONTINUE it Buddy ...!!
Its really a very good start ...Atleast continue it upto their realization & COnfession
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweety_98



My vote ...DO CONTINUE it Buddy ...!!
Its really a very good start ...Atleast continue it upto their realization & COnfession

I will then.

When is your college?
Did you read other one ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Nice. Bala jiju was a good advisor. Dakkan Ishu now realise her love towards Ravan kumar .
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

I will then.

When is your college?
Did you read other one ?



Will be leaving tmrw nyt ...😊
no i didnt read another one ...u sent me the same link twice

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