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Posted: 11 years ago
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3 part


Scene starts with Ishita still thinking over Raman's words.

"Jab Raman merey liyen sirf Ruhi key Papa hain tho main bhee unkey liyen Ruhi kee maa he hongi naa."

Ishita sleeps thinking about it.She wokes up at around 7:30.

Ishita was late and she gets ready quickly and her ears were busy to hear ring from her mobile.

It was around 8:30 and she completes her break fast and was makes Ruhi go to school .

She goes personally to drop Ruhi in school.Then she goes for clinic.

In clinic she gets few patients and get busy but she was conscious about her phone.

After finishing her work she confirms that no wor is left and leaves for home.

Ishita "Muumyji Raman ka koi phone ayaa tha kyaa."

Mrs BHalla "Han ,tum Ruhi ko chodney gayee thee na jab ayaa thaa.Pahunc gayan hain.Sab kuch theek hain."

Ishita guessed it before only.She expected Raman will not call her .But she was happy atleast Raman reached safe there.

Ishita then goes to Iyer's house where Mihika was sitting .

Mihika "Akka aap aaj bhee pareshan hon."

Ishita "Kuch naheen .Main theek hun."

Mihika "Mijhey naheen lag rahan hain.Abh kya huan."

Ishita "Kuch naheen Raman Hyderabad gaya hain teen dinon key liyen ."

Mihika "Jeeju pehley bhaar todhi bahar jaa raha hain.Who hummesha kaam key liyen bahaar jatha hain naa."

Ishita "Han lekin mujhey tension ho raheen hain.Kyon patha nahee kuch gadbad lag rahan hain."

Mihika "Kyaa jeeju ka phone naee ayaa."

Ishita "Aaya tha mummyji key liyen mujhey phone hee nahee kiya."

Mihika "Akka ap tension math lo.Saarey mardh aisey hee hothey hain.Mihir bhee mujhey phone naheen kartha hain.Jab mujhey bheee gussa aatha hain."

Ishita "Fir tum kyaa karthee hon."

Mihika "Simple .Main hee phone karthee hun."

Ishita "Mihir ko kaam hoga tho disturb hoga naa."

Mihika "Honey do yeh punishment hain usskey liyen.Who naheen uthaaya tho main baar baar karthee rahongi."

Ishita "Mihir tumhey kuch naheen kahega kyaa.Dantega nahee."

Mihika smiles and takes Ishita's mobile and dials Raman's number and gives to Ishita.

Raman picks the call "Hello ."

Ishita "Main bol raheen hum aap hotel pahunch gaye."

Raman "Main yaheen hun.Tum theek hon."

Ishita feels happy over this question "Han .Aap"

Raman "Ruhi?"

Ishita "Ruhi bhee theek hain."

Raman "Ishita mujhey kaam hain main baath me bath karonga."

Raman cuts the call.

Ishita gets sad at this.She goes to her room.

Ishita "Raman key liyen Ruhi key alaawa koi aur baath naheen hain kyaa.Phoe katdiya.Mujhsey baath kyo naheen kar raha hain."

Ishita feels sad .

Ishita "Raman ko kyaa ho gaya pehley mujhsey bath kartha thaa sab kuch share kartha thaa.Abh achaanak sab kuch palat gaya."

Ishita "Mujhey itnaa kyo farak pad rahan hain.?"

Mihika was shown then she was speaking to Bala.

Mihika "Jeeju aap sahee they .Akka bahuth pareshaan hain."

Bala "Jaantha hun jaroor hogi."

Mihika "Jeeju aap jaanthey hain kyaa Raman jeeju aisey kyon kar rahen hain."

Bala "Ishita ney bahuth dinon baadh Raman ko yaadh dilaaya kee yeh shaadi Ruhi key liyen hain.Raman woho kar rahan hain jo Ishita sach manthee hain.Aur jab jo sach hain who Ishita ko pareshan kar rahan hain."

Mihika "Main kuch samjhee nahee."

Bala "Ishita aur Raman dono ek doosrey sey pyaar karthey hain.Aur who donon agey bhad chukey hain.Lekin Ishita ko abhee bhee lagtha hain kee yeh shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen hain,Aur Raman usskey sirf ek dosth hain."

Bala "Lekin Ishita ka tho Raman kamzori hain.Usskey bhina who kuch naheen.Ishita hummesha Raman ko saath chahtheey hain aur chahthee hain kee Raman sab unkey saath share kare."

Bala "Ishita Raman ko apnaa manthee hain aur bahuth possessive hain uskey baarey mey.Raman ka har kaam karnaa aur ussey jhagada karnaa ya behash aur usska gussa.Sab kuch pey ussney apna haq likhliya hain. Aur Raman bhee Ishita ko sab haq de diya thaa."

Bala "Jab Ishu ney Raman ko shaadi key baarey mey yaad dilaaya.Raman ko acha naheen laga kee Ishita abhee bhee agey nahee bhadee.Issliyen who sirf waaps wahe pad khada ho gaya waha khada thaa.Jaisey shaadi sey pehley sirf Ruhi key liyen"

Mihika "Aur Jeeju polite hogaye jaisey koi relation naheen aur koi anjaan hon."

Bala "Right .Yeh baath Ishita digust naheen kar paa raheen hain ,Kee usskey saarey haq kho gayen."

Bala "Who yeh maanney key liyen tayyar naheen hain kee Raman sey who pyaar karthee hain aur Raman ke bhina jee bhee naheen pa raheen hain."

Mihika "Jeeju abh mujhey kyaa karnaa hain."

Bala "Kuch naheen.Tum bhee woi taperecord chalao dosthi ka.Aur pooch kiss dosth key liyen wo itnaa possessive hain."

Mihika "Theek hain.I am on it."

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
superb... Hmm now Ishita will understand how Raman have felt when she has told him sirf ruhi k liye..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Good one. Carry on. I really want this scene in yhm. But god knows it will be happen or not. Ishita ki lag rahi hai 😭 . Aur hum Ko maja aa rahi hai. Waiting for next one. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Awesome...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Superb...Ye dono ka misunderstanding kab khatham hoga??
Waise Title mein page number bhi mention krdo yaar...

continue soon...😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love bala's character a lot.Even here I like him.Dekhte hain kab ishu confess kar te hai atleast khud se.nyc
Edited by lourel24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Very Nice. Ishita ko realise kar vanekeliye 2 logon ki jarurath Miku n Bala pad gayi itna dakkan hai yeh Ishu😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
part 4


Scene starts with Mihika and Bala conversation.

Mihika "I am on it."

Mihika "Aap kyaa karney waley hain."

Bala "Main kuch naheen kar paonga.Jo bhee karnaa hain tumhey karnaa hain."

Mihika "Aap kyon?"

Bala "Main tumhey advice to de saktha hun lekin directly involve naheen bo saktha."

Bala "Jo baathey tum Ishita key saath kar sakte hon who main naheen kar paonga .You are better player of this game now.I am your coach."

Mihika "And Akka's realization is our game."

They gave each other a HI-Fi and leave.

Mihika goes to Ishita.

Ishita is still in thoughts what happened to Raman.

Mihika "Akka chalo hum bahaar chalthey hain."

Ishita "Mujhey interest naheen hain tum jaon."

Mihika "Abh thak pareshan hon tum.Aap ney baath kee na jeeju sey."

Ishita "Kahan Raman ney phone katdiyan aur mera sawaal ka jawaab bhee naheen diya."

Mihika "Akka aap tension kyon le rahee hon.Main bhee kitney baar aapka phone kaata tha jab main busy hothee thee."

Mihika "Koi bahaana nahee chalegi aap bahaar aa rahen hain merey saath."

Ishita "Hum kall jayengey aaj main sach mey busy hun."

Mihika "Kyaa aapko jeeju ka logic break karna hain."

Ishita "Kyaa majaak kar rahe ho .Abh bahuth tamaasha bana liya tumney uss baath ka.Mujhey Ruhi ka assignment mey madad karnaa hain .Kall he presentation hain."

Mihika leaves .

Ishita gets busy helping Ruhi in her assignment .

It was around 8'O clock landline rings .

Ishita takes the call and it was Raman.

Raman "Ruhi ko phone de naa."

Ishita does so.

Then Ruhi speaks with Raman for few minutes and then it goes in chain to Mrs Bhalla and Mr Bhalla and call ends.Ishita gets pissed off over this.She even dreamt it except tha part Raman staying their for a month.

Ishita was sleeping in her room and her thoughts over Raman's call.

After two days.

Raman comes back home and Ishita was in clinic that time .Ishita comes to know that Raman came and she rushes to home.

She reaches home and as usual goes towards her room but finds it bolted from inside.

Ishita feels it strange as why Raman locked it from inside.

Raman opens the door as aIshita knocks it.

Ishita smells something different in room.

Ishita "Raman aapko bhee yeh smell aa rahen hain."

Raman panics and "Kaunsa mujhey kuch nahee aa rahen hain."

Ishita understands Raman is hiding something .

She starts checking the luggage of Raman.

Raman "Mera luggage kyon check kar rahen hon."

Ishita "Kuch naheen main bass used kapadey dhobi key liyen ."

Raman "Main karlonga."

Ishita "Main kar rahen hon naa."

She sees luggage and notices something.

Ishita "Raman aapka blue shirt kahan hain.Aap ussey lekar gaye they naa."

Raman "Shayad bhool gaya hunga.Tumhey usspar itnaa interest kyon a rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman aapka ek suit bhee nahen hain."

Raman "Bola naa bhol gaya hunga."

Ishita now understood something.

Ishita "Raman aap mujhsey kuch chupa rahen hain."

Raman "Kuch naheen bass tumhaari galath faimee hain."

Ishita "Aapney room andar sey lock kiya thaa.Aap ney aisa kabhee nahee kiya.Aur room mey mujhey medicines ka badhbhoo aarahen hain."

Raman "Koi smell nahen hain."

Ishita "Aap mujhsey chupa nahe saktey Raman.Aap bhool gayen hongey kee main bhee clinic mey kaam karthee hun main bhee scent sey patha kar sakthey hun kee kisney pathi baandhi hain."

Ishita "Raman apna shirt utariyen."

Raman gives a sign he is caught.

Raman "Tum pagal ho gaye hon kya.Main apna shirt kyon utaru."

Ishita "Aap apna shirt utariye warna main sabko bulakar kehdongi."

Raman finally takes his shirt.Then we can see bandage ove Raman's ribs.

Raman "Chota sa cut hain stitches lagey hain.Huftey mey theek ho jaonga."

Ishita is scared now.Raman is saying it as small one but bandage is covering around six inches.

Ishita "Aap ney mujhey bathana jaroori nahen samjha.Aap ney mujhey kyon nahee bathaya?"

Raman "Mainey kissey ko naheen bathaya."

Ishita "Mainey poocha aapney mujhey kyo nahee bathaaya."

Raman "Ishita sab log panic ho jaayengey.Main theek hun issliyen kissey ko naheen bathaya."

Ishita "Raman mera sawaal Aapney mujhay kyo naheen bathaya.Aapko itna bada chot lage hain.Aapney mujhey nahee bathaya."

Raman not knowing how to coverup gets to Angry Bhalla mode.

Raman "Just stop it Ishita.Main ney kissey ko nahee bathayaMain nahee chahtha kee mera family panic ho aur pareshan hon jab who cheez important nahen hon."

Raman "Aur TUM APNA TYPICAL BIWI BANNEY KA NAATAK BANDH KARO .TUM ISS GHAR MEY SIRF RUHI KEE MAA AUR GHAR KE BAHUN HO.MERA PERSONNAL MATTERS MEY INVOLVE MATH HUAN KARO."

Ishita was struck listening this words as Raman this time reminded her about their marriage is just for Ruhi.

Raman "Aur tum yeh baath kissey ko nahen bathaogi."

Raman leave that place wearing his shirt.Ishita was still in shock unable to understand what to do.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Let me check myself.
How long can I continue this boring track with out confession.
My target is 12 chapters without confession.

I can revise my target.

How many think I can do it.Without readers loosing interest.
What is you guess any bigger number...?
Give a target if you wish.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
areee nooo pleasssee 6-8 chapters will be enough without confessing..

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