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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

This was really well written. The emotions were played out really well, Ishita's patience and Raman's impatience were very correctly protrayed. Raman's insecurities were protrayed perfectly. I really enjoyed it. Well done.

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chinudolly.yhm

@chinudolly.yhm

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

m speechless dear after reading this

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really super duper awesome os

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appuss

@appuss

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

what to say about such amazing piece of work...splendid... i'm speechless👏👏👏

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Sunshine

@SWAN123

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

That's was hot and sweet,

Wouldn't one give an arm to be in your Ishita's place. Nothing is more moving than true love that comes after turbulence.

You have brought it out so beautifully!

A real gem!

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

hey Aani sorry for reading it too late😳

reading title i thought its old song but the moment i read its Omkara song, though i never heard song but i knew this gonna be passionate one...

and damn its is... it is so intense wid full of emotions...

what do i say abt u Aani... u r a gem...

u showed Raman's emotions , his love, anger , desire , his fear to lose her so perfectly ...

and depth of IshRa relation... man Ishita was so knew something bothering him beyond limit and that's why this out burst ...

i loved 2 parts the most...first where Ishita told him "do ur worst..."

and change in Raman's reaction and then guilt of what he did... i can so imagine Raman there... and

later when Ishita said " u r my other half" love the line...

epic piece of writing Aani👏👏

btw while reading it i realized in yesterday epi Raman was in somewhere same situation 😆

tumhe pehle hi pata tha ke even Subbu's name can make him Raman restless to that extent,

agar Subbu samne aaye to GOD knows kya karega😆😆

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
res

PS : i thought u meant old song "o saathi re"(my fav old song)...bt when i saw ur post..i got babaji ka thullu 😆

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omggg tht ws EPIC INTENSE PASSIONATE OS...!! uff tht one line by Ishu to Raman tht he is her other half..omg BEST LINE i hv ever read frm Ishu in this forum..SPOT ON..👏... THIS hv bcome ur BEST OS written by u for me...⭐️

Thanks Nikki 😊

I love the old song too but for this piece the one from Omkara suited more 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: happenstance
Res 😳
Edited-

Aani I'm back, just about.

I just want to say that I am so happy that you decided to share this with us all. This is truly one of your most beautiful pieces. I'm actually going to go as far as saying that it's my favourite to date. I will have to explain in more detail over pm.

This was errotic and hauntingly poetic at the same time. You paint the most vivid imagery on every single canvas. This was deliciously tempting on so many levels and I seriously felt delirious after reading it ( i don't know if that's appropriate here i apologise if its not🤣)

Hun now that you burst open those banks (ahem) I hope that we get to see banks being burst in the future😳😆😆

Loved it 🤗🤗

Hey Uz thank you 🤗 without you this wouldn't have been possible you know that right, I assume you read my Author' note 😳

@red - 😆 cant say when they will next burst I am not a pro like you after all 😉😆

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: redwine1
OMG Aani ...

U have outdone urself with this one .. the thot .. the execution ,.,.the writing .. simply brilliant .. the aggression in the lovemaking fairly jumping out of the page .. but the underlying tenderness & love touches the heart as well ...
The insecurity .. the passion ... after a long time i have read a Fan fic which is in tandem with the original writers characterisation ...

U can fairly picturise this scene ... if only such raw passion was allowed on Indian telly then i am sure we would get to see this in a future episode of YHM ... but am sure a version of this scene whether instigated by subbu or no is bound to happen on the show ... 😉 take a bow gurl ... 👏

I am humbled & please accept a solemn fans best wishes .. BRILLIANT ...

Hey Ruby thank you so much for these wonderful words of praise.

Honestly I have to say I was a nervous wreck before posting this not just because of the content, but because this is an unventured zone for me - I have never written something so explicit... so to have this kind of support and appreciation means so much to me.

I am really happy you found thing in tandem with IshRa of the show and for this to be allowed on Indian TV... I think I might have to be 75 - pretty LONG wait if you ask me 😆... on the other hand Showtime or HBO sadly arent the channel partner for this one 😉😆

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Malika
Aani u almost transported to me to some other land with this piece of urs. 🤪 I especially like it when a writer infuses emotion (specially that of belonging and desire) into sensuous scenes 😳 And u did that so beautifully.❤️ Loved this possessive and vulnerable Raman to bits. This is the reason I am dying for Subbu's return.Because its only Subbu who can bring out many new shades of Raman.

Thanks so much Mallu 😃

@bold - and we already got a taste of that with the MERE mention I was like OMGG when it happened the same night I posted this piece 😛 - talk about timing right?

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode
reswa
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Unres
whoaa whoaa. ... what a passion 👏☺️again pretty so much similarly going with script of show. just like Rust and Stardust

Thanks so much Zene and I am on such a high when I find my pieces working in tandem with the show I cant tell ya 😛😃

She too observes his restlessness. I just wonder how he had controlled volcano trying to outburst the way he grabbed her.
god, ishu is not less ☺️☺️☺️
Nope they are equals who understand each other 😳

pretty consistent character . he din know in adi s case he did mistake by lying to her and went to picnic with ex wife how much she was hurt same here in this grabbing scene.but in both cases he realizes what he has done and he regrets by heart , he himself is horrified realizing it, omgg he loves her so much he can't see her in pain and he himself tries to heal those wounds
his fear of losing her is making him wild because he has never got his dues from his spouse what he has got now and he is NOT ready to lose her.

That's Raman for you... he makes mistakes, he learns and tries to fix things once he gets that 😳 and thats what makes him real - he isnt perfect- he is REAL.

so much much similar to show, how much you are so much in sync with script writers 😲👏saying ruhi is her first love and raman feeling buy1 get1 free 😆😆😆 gosh i loved kisses

😛 tell me about it - Subu' mention and Ishu' lines I was like OMG, OMG, OMG 🥳 when that happened 😃

your ishita is damn bold, am in love with your ishu . Aani grt job. So beautiful writing.you have equally made rkb restless just like show. Hats off

In my head this happens when they have already consummated their marriage and are pretty much comfortable with each other in that regard, like my lines said - never been this rough before - so of course she can afford to be bold with her husband 😳