O Saathi Re - IshRa OS. - Page 5

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

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PS : i thought u meant old song "o saathi re"(my fav old song)...bt when i saw ur post..i got babaji ka thullu 😆

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omggg tht ws EPIC INTENSE PASSIONATE OS...!! uff tht one line by Ishu to Raman tht he is her other half..omg BEST LINE i hv ever read frm Ishu in this forum..SPOT ON..👏... THIS hv bcome ur BEST OS written by u for me...⭐️

Originally posted by: happenstance

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Aani I'm back, just about.

I just want to say that I am so happy that you decided to share this with us all. This is truly one of your most beautiful pieces. I'm actually going to go as far as saying that it's my favourite to date. I will have to explain in more detail over pm.

This was errotic and hauntingly poetic at the same time. You paint the most vivid imagery on every single canvas. This was deliciously tempting on so many levels and I seriously felt delirious after reading it ( i don't know if that's appropriate here i apologise if its not🤣)

Hun now that you burst open those banks (ahem) I hope that we get to see banks being burst in the future😳😆😆

Loved it 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: redwine1

OMG Aani ...

U have outdone urself with this one .. the thot .. the execution ,.,.the writing .. simply brilliant .. the aggression in the lovemaking fairly jumping out of the page .. but the underlying tenderness & love touches the heart as well ...

The insecurity .. the passion ... after a long time i have read a Fan fic which is in tandem with the original writers characterisation ...

U can fairly picturise this scene ... if only such raw passion was allowed on Indian telly then i am sure we would get to see this in a future episode of YHM ... but am sure a version of this scene whether instigated by subbu or no is bound to happen on the show ... 😉 take a bow gurl ... 👏

I am humbled & please accept a solemn fans best wishes .. BRILLIANT ...

Originally posted by: Malika

Aani u almost transported to me to some other land with this piece of urs. 🤪 I especially like it when a writer infuses emotion (specially that of belonging and desire) into sensuous scenes 😳 And u did that so beautifully.❤️ Loved this possessive and vulnerable Raman to bits. This is the reason I am dying for Subbu's return.Because its only Subbu who can bring out many new shades of Raman.

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

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whoaa whoaa. ... what a passion 👏☺️again pretty so much similarly going with script of show. just like Rust and Stardust

Thanks so much Zene and I am on such a high when I find my pieces working in tandem with the show I cant tell ya 😛😃

She too observes his restlessness. I just wonder how he had controlled volcano trying to outburst the way he grabbed her.
god, ishu is not less ☺️☺️☺️

Nope they are equals who understand each other 😳

pretty consistent character . he din know in adi s case he did mistake by lying to her and went to picnic with ex wife how much she was hurt same here in this grabbing scene.but in both cases he realizes what he has done and he regrets by heart , he himself is horrified realizing it, omgg he loves her so much he can't see her in pain and he himself tries to heal those wounds
his fear of losing her is making him wild because he has never got his dues from his spouse what he has got now and he is NOT ready to lose her.

That's Raman for you... he makes mistakes, he learns and tries to fix things once he gets that 😳 and thats what makes him real - he isnt perfect- he is REAL.

so much much similar to show, how much you are so much in sync with script writers 😲👏saying ruhi is her first love and raman feeling buy1 get1 free 😆😆😆 gosh i loved kisses

😛 tell me about it - Subu' mention and Ishu' lines I was like OMG, OMG, OMG 🥳 when that happened 😃

your ishita is damn bold, am in love with your ishu . Aani grt job. So beautiful writing.you have equally made rkb restless just like show. Hats off

In my head this happens when they have already consummated their marriage and are pretty much comfortable with each other in that regard, like my lines said - never been this rough before - so of course she can afford to be bold with her husband 😳