O Saathi Re - IshRa OS. - Page 6

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Haha

This is wildest one you have written

I have always said that you write stuff we will not get in show

But I now say that your earlier ones have chance of happening

But this one will never happen

Hope no one from cast reads it they will pass out

By the way you have a good range good stuff

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

awww beautifully written..passionate and romantic! ☺️

passionate and loved it when she said that he is her other half...awesome!

Originally posted by: AditiDoc

That was a beautiful OS, it was definitely worth my time for reading. You brought the whole concept with such beauty and crystal clarity - The way Ishita cleared Raman's doubts. Ishita reassuring Raman that she was more to him than just the love of her life, that she was the other half of her, was superb! One of the best OS' I have read in a long time! Well done!

Originally posted by: whitelily

Great os

Originally posted by: momb24

you took me to another world with this one 👏 so intense and passionate.
beautifully written.
can you imagine something like this being shown on the show 😆 we might just get a scene with them sitting on the bed and having a similar conversion without any action 😆

Originally posted by: moonstone

simply superb👏👏

Omg it was so passionate..

I love this song too, and for some reason, I associate it with IshRa too. Maybe its the seriousness of the movie, or the intensity of love that was portrayed on the screen. Your piece has more than justified the use of this brilliant composition!

Now, your story is an actual piece of beauty Aani. It has the intensity of a volcano that has decided not to be dormant any more. And the way you balanced out the sensuous scenes with the serious conversation, I can only applaud!

Raman's biggest insecurity is that someone he loves will leave him. Her biggest discovery is that she has found a man who she wants to be with for the rest of her life. But it required the presence of Subbu to trigger that reaction from him, and her vocalising her feelings. Just like we saw in the episode too. There is nothing like confronting the past to get a better perspective on the present and future.

And honestly, Aani, I can imagine KP nailing this scene you wrote. I can almost visualise him saying the things you wrote, with fear/anger/annoyance in his eyes when he questions her about Subbu!!!


Brilliant piece of work Aani. I am liking the surge of inspiration you've had recently!!!


"Only love of a good woman will make a man question every choice, every action. Only love makes a warrior hesitate for fear that his lady will find him cruel. Only love makes a man both the best he will ever be, and the weakest. Sometimes all in the same moment. -Wicked "
- Laurell K. Hamilton


P.S: I had a busy week, so am not able to read the last 2 parts of the SS... will do in a couple of days