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momb24

@momb24

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

you took me to another world with this one 👏 so intense and passionate.
beautifully written.
can you imagine something like this being shown on the show 😆 we might just get a scene with them sitting on the bed and having a similar conversion without any action 😆

Edited by momb24 - 11 years ago

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Jyoe

@Jyoe

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Oh Aani!

This is the first OS of yours that I have read that is so intense , sensuous and passionate! Uff maar daala!

After reading this OS, I definitely wish Subbu is back on the show to see the insecure side of Raman for Ishita!

For me these lines had the most impact!

"Because I haven't been loved like this before Ishita...because I haven't loved anyone like I love you. Its true I was married before, I too have a past but one where all the feelings in the relationship came from my end... with you I found someone who loved me back for the first time. It broke me when I was cheated on... but it would destroy me now if I ... I ... lose you. I don't have it in me to recover from you, from us anymore."

Trust me Aani, when I read these lines, I actually felt the fear and every emotion of what Raman felt and I was scared too!!

Beautifully written ...words are not enough to praise you. Whatever you write, it touches the heart and I can feel every emotion you mention and can visualize the scene!

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Omg..this has got to be the best one till date!!! I'm in another world all together reading this...the passion, love, possessiveness were all at it's extreme..at their best..!!! ☺️☺️To say I loved it would be an understatement...I'm going to have to read it again now!❤️

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Dhwaniiam

@Dhwaniiam

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nicely writern ... Loved it ...
I love you .. 👏

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Oishi Dasgupta

@Oishi_S

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Omg...omg
What did you write? This was probably your best piece for me till now. That amazing mixture of emotions, sensual scene and Raman's possessiveness and insecurities. Also, I loved how you emphasized that Ishu is not a weak women who would let any man come back into her life after breaking hee trust like that. She is not that girl.

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dreamy-sa

@dreamy-sa

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Aani, this os u wrote is very intense and passionate. one of the best stories till date👏

I loved it very much. the way u have written made me glue to the screen😉 but really I appreciate u from my heart for giving us a beautiful story to read👏👏😳

thanks for the pm...

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beautiful OS Aani. I must say one of ur best. U should b proud of urself.

I simply loved it.

I wish the Subbu angle does crop up once in the show. This will definitely get our hero to show some real intense emotions because I believe that our Raman is a very intense n passionate man n hides it really well by yelling n taunting his lady love.😳

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Divan_Sashona

@Divan_Sashona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

its very intense & sensuous piece of work n Raman was possessive n jealous n first time he showed his fear of losing her,he was scared he acted aggressively than he calm down so many emotions Rkb or i can say emotions were flowing n best thing is that Ishita she understand her husband most his one move she can understand his mood he is upset ,angry or watever he hardly found this type of soul mates these days i loved it u have written awesome bonding of husband n wife hatts off to u

u have written beautiful each n every emotion of RKb & ishita
loved it when i was reading i was imagining watever u have written this is best quality of brilliant writer u r one of my fav writer in this forum still i do not know ur name can u tell me ?

Today we r celebrating eid its best thing i have read today u made my day

Edited by dark.lig8 - 11 years ago