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vani_prem

@vani_prem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

well done on the last update, very racy!

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Ohh my..That was such a brilliant OS..
Girl, you are a fabulous writer.. The entire OS had me blushing and grinning most of the time..
It was so dreamy to see the bold Ishra..specially a super bold Ishu.. She stumped him so many times..He couldn't even have imagined his wife to be that bold..😆 Bechara..

Raman's idea of watching 50 shades with her..the kiss..then him leaving her desperate..and then the master planner Ishu..She actually came up strip carom.?? WHOA.!!! ☺️

Well, what to say about the last part..I was Ishralicious.. 😳

Totally loved the OS..Please do write more and please PM me..would love to read more of your works..😃

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yhmfever

@yhmfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Ong that killed me
Strip carom hahha
I loved the part
Amazing yet short
Awesome ss

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ssm122

@ssm122

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Strip carom? Brilliant! !
Fantastic update!
Thanks for the pm!

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divya17.8

@divya17.8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Omg.. Amazing update..

Romance with bit of comedy perfectly merged.. loved it...

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shaayne

@shaayne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Oh my gosh I just adore the ending. Raman's in the mood to play :P

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

hey hun😃
this was too awesome👏
a nice mix of humor and passion⭐️
i just knew there was going to be a stripping game when ishita appeared with the robe...😉
i loved how dejected raman felt seeing the carrom board😆😆
and i know the confession was suppose to be sweet and touching and it was but i found it hilarious how he got all emotional and confessed seeing her in the nightie🤣
i really enjoyed this story.. too good👏👏
thanks for the pms😃