OS-Mature Final Part Page 26! - Page 20

Originally posted by: v_ani_patel

Superb ...

Thank youuu :)

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Ohh my..That was such a brilliant OS..
Girl, you are a fabulous writer.. The entire OS had me blushing and grinning most of the time..
It was so dreamy to see the bold Ishra..specially a super bold Ishu.. She stumped him so many times..He couldn't even have imagined his wife to be that bold..😆 Bechara..

Raman's idea of watching 50 shades with her..the kiss..then him leaving her desperate..and then the master planner Ishu..She actually came up strip carom.?? WHOA.!!! ☺️

Well, what to say about the last part..I was Ishralicious.. 😳

Totally loved the OS..Please do write more and please PM me..would love to read more of your works..😃</font>

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! I am glad that you read all of them and liked it as well. You've described it perfectly well.
Thanks a ton! Really means a lot!
Will surely try to PM you when ever I put up a new story.
Thank you :)

Originally posted by: yhmfever

Ong that killed me
Strip carom hahha
I loved the part
Amazing yet short
Awesome ss

Haha! Thank youuu.
I am glad that you liked it buddy :D

Originally posted by: ssm122

Strip carom? Brilliant! !
Fantastic update!
Thanks for the pm!

Haha yeah ;)
You're welcome.
Thanks for liking it :)

Originally posted by: divya17.8

Omg.. Amazing update..

</div><div>Romance with bit of comedy perfectly merged.. loved it...

Hey! Thank you.
I am glad you could find both romance and comedy in it, that was my intention. It is YHM after all ;)
Thanks again :)

Originally posted by: shaayne

Oh my gosh I just adore the ending. Raman's in the mood to play :P

Oh yes! He totally is ;)
Thank you :)

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hey hun😃
this was too awesome👏
a nice mix of humor and passion⭐️
i just knew there was going to be a stripping game when ishita appeared with the robe...😉
i loved how dejected raman felt seeing the carrom board😆😆
and i know the confession was suppose to be sweet and touching and it was but i found it hilarious how he got all emotional and confessed seeing her in the nightie🤣
i really enjoyed this story.. too good👏👏
thanks for the pms😃

Heyyy!
Hahahhahaha! Thank you so much
Yes, confession is slightly hilarious, I was contemplating whether I should put it or not. But then I decided in affirmative only. It's ISHRA man.lOl
Thank you so much for liking it :)

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for PM.

It was so Romantic Parts.😳

The carrom game of ISHRA was so interesting.😊

Raman and Ishita love moments were so lovely explained.😳

The message which Raman sent toSubramanium to spend time with Ishita was so cute.😳

Haha! Thank you so much.
I am glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: Lata_ishra

Its fab...

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: yazhi

wow... superbb hottt.. very interesting

Thank you so much :) :)