Ishita Ramblings: Rain and Realisation - Page 3

for some reason ishita is not as well written as raman on our forum, i think. but, of course, you've done a fantastic job here 👏. i wish you'd added the part where she says i don't think i like the rains anymore and her thoughts on his reaction. i loved loved LOVED the 'i hadn't realize he was so close to me' thought process being the thread for her. 👏👏👏

thx for the pm😊

This was awesome as well. My fav part was when Ishita was thinking back to the night when Raman came home drunk and defeated. Loved how you wrote that whole part.

I feel Ishita is someone who's point of view is difficult to understand and specifically write about that! But you've nailed it lucky. Loved your analysis through Ishita's eyes. It actually made a lot of sense and for me, the best part would be tha last paragraph because that shows the realisation of Ishita that Raman definitely means something to her , which I feel in the show, she has attained aswell!
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As I connect the dots with the drops of rain, I cannot help but be shocked by the effect he has on me. I don't know what to name it, but I feel a pull. The pull that isn't there because of Ruhi any more, the pull that is getting stronger. Its just me and him, sitting across each other, trying to talk, but not knowing where to start. And with every look on his face that opens him up more to me, with every tear we try and hide behind the rain-drop, I think to myself "I hadn't realised how close he was"

This was really emotional, I'm totally in love with the way you write, these lines beautifully define Ishita's mental state and the way she said " As I connect the dots with the drops of rain,"
Wow! Buddy like seriously, how do you come up with such stuff?
Truly brilliant! :)

*Reserved*

Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Beautiful. Some pieces of writing leave you speechless and Raman and Ishita's Ramblings just happen to be two of those, I don't know if it's the feeling of really being in their heads, but there's a strange calmness in the words you use, even when it's all turmoil and unrest, so that I can imagine Ishita's calm face hiding those torrent of conflicting thoughts going through her.

I couldn't have imagined reading a more fitting description of what Ishita must have felt these last days. Her thinking back to those occasions she and Raman had met in the past and seeing it in a new light to trying relate his recent actions with the man she has come to know and finally the acceptance that there was something between them now that no longer encompassed Ruhi only. Can only end with the word I started with and say that it was beyond beautiful. :)

That is too high a praise ! Thank you very much.
Its always been easier for me to write for Raman, so when someone says nice things about the Ishita ramblings, I do truly appreciate it!

Originally posted by: --Sia--

Brillaint writing Lucky !!!

you know me na for my one line comment😳

One line is more than enough Sia :) thanks for liking this!

Originally posted by: Elita

<font color="#6633cc">Simply superb... whenever you pick a pen and decide on a topic... you do justice to it. Even cv's couldn't have penned Ishita's commotion so well...</font><div></div>

Thank you so much Elita for your kind words!!!

Originally posted by: -AnGel_Mind-

Fabules😃

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

thank u so much lucky fro writing this🤗

fantabulous Lucky... loved her every thought...

beautifully written...

and i like it more then Raman's, today m gussa on him😳

Thanks Meet, your encouragement on the last one meant a lot!!!

Raman pe gussa mat ho yaar! Main to CVs pe gussa hoon, they are taking my Raman away from me :(