Ishita Ramblings: Rain and Realisation - Page 5

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Thanks Meet, your encouragement on the last one meant a lot!!!

Raman pe gussa mat ho yaar! Main to CVs pe gussa hoon, they are taking my Raman away from me :(

Originally posted by: ABBY92

This was awesome as well. My fav part was when Ishita was thinking back to the night when Raman came home drunk and defeated. Loved how you wrote that whole part.

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11

I feel Ishita is someone who's point of view is difficult to understand and specifically write about that! But you've nailed it lucky. Loved your analysis through Ishita's eyes. It actually made a lot of sense and for me, the best part would be tha last paragraph because that shows the realisation of Ishita that Raman definitely means something to her , which I feel in the show, she has attained aswell!
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As I connect the dots with the drops of rain, I cannot help but be shocked by the effect he has on me. I don't know what to name it, but I feel a pull. The pull that isn't there because of Ruhi any more, the pull that is getting stronger. Its just me and him, sitting across each other, trying to talk, but not knowing where to start. And with every look on his face that opens him up more to me, with every tear we try and hide behind the rain-drop, I think to myself "I hadn't realised how close he was"

This was really emotional, I'm totally in love with the way you write, these lines beautifully define Ishita's mental state and the way she said " As I connect the dots with the drops of rain,"
Wow! Buddy like seriously, how do you come up with such stuff?
Truly brilliant! :)

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Nicely written

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aah lucky...this ws so so good just lik Raman's one...bt ur last line took the limelight for me..it ws the PERFECT thing u could evr say for Ishu's situation in this track...so so aptly written lucky...👏👏

Originally posted by: bscorp13

This was beautiful Lucky👏!!

Especially this line "And with every look on his face that opens him up more to me, with every tear we try and hide behind the rain-drop, I think to myself "I hadn't realized how close he was"
- You just hit It out of the park😆.

On a serious note - all those unsaid words in those few minutes after they exchanged seats in the car - the pouring rain outside and the water dripping off their faces - just their glances at each other - you summed it all up from Ishita's POV with this one statement - Bang On!!

You should continue the ramblings as a series - I would love to get into Ishita's head again after the Adi juvie episode...the conflicted emotions from today - of how torn and guilty Raman is - and her concern about what he may be going through, that too all alone, to her own guilt of still wanting to do the right thing..but not knowing how ...to then not knowing how to react when the 'unpredictable' RKB does the needful, punishing his own son...😊...Too much scope😆

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

Fab!

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

beautifully written