Ishita Ramblings: Rain and Realisation

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: avni_19
Ishita's inner mind ws described sooo beautifullyy!!! Brilliant! I lovedd it! Keep continuinggg!!!

U write freaking awesum. I wud suggest u write a beautiful Os ya Ff ya Ss! Hehehe!

Thanks Avni

Arre itne OS toh likhein hain na maine :) this track is not letting me write anything more than ramblings :(

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha
I read it, good one Lucky! Now see you when this track ends! 😊

:) Thanks Ninja...

And shhh... Ur frustration with the track is showing :)

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Shanig123
<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Lucky you have been given a blessing to writer , I read this as well as Raman's . what a terrific way you have outlined the careful words you have picked and the consistency simply amazing. one thing for sure this forum has the best writers . please do write often .maybe the creative👏 of the show can gather some from you . </font>

Thank you so much Shani!!! You are too kind :)

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: addictedlove

very good .

Thank you :)

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

This was beautiful Lucky👏!!

Especially this line "And with every look on his face that opens him up more to me, with every tear we try and hide behind the rain-drop, I think to myself "I hadn't realized how close he was"
- You just hit It out of the park😆.

On a serious note - all those unsaid words in those few minutes after they exchanged seats in the car - the pouring rain outside and the water dripping off their faces - just their glances at each other - you summed it all up from Ishita's POV with this one statement - Bang On!!

You should continue the ramblings as a series - I would love to get into Ishita's head again after the Adi juvie episode...the conflicted emotions from today - of how torn and guilty Raman is - and her concern about what he may be going through, that too all alone, to her own guilt of still wanting to do the right thing..but not knowing how ...to then not knowing how to react when the 'unpredictable' RKB does the needful, punishing his own son...😊...Too much scope😆

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: rutu83
for some reason ishita is not as well written as raman on our forum, i think. but, of course, you've done a fantastic job here 👏. i wish you'd added the part where she says i don't think i like the rains anymore and her thoughts on his reaction. i loved loved LOVED the 'i hadn't realize he was so close to me' thought process being the thread for her. 👏👏👏

thx for the pm😊

Believe it or not Rutu, thats my one regret about this piece. I failed to include that line. I think it was because of the rush in which i wrote this piece! I did think about it, but not enough :) thanks for the honest feedback.

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

This piece is something that has me dumbfounded. Loss of words.

The way you ended it and the short quote is an excellent way of ending it!👏

I read Raman's ramblings first and now i can see the stark difference in their characters.
Alike in so many matters and yet so different.

There is nothing better than simple words to project the whirlwind of emotions and you did exactly that beautifully.

This is was mature and truly amazing.😊

Sorry for being late and also for the short reply. Running out of time buddy.

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Mindblowing Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Wow beautiful as like as the previous one.
You are too good at ramblings Lucky.

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Lucky, you have put the entire scenario in a simple sentence. Brilliant.👏

" He sits there looking at me with a face that expects me to understand."

After reading this edition, I am now confused. I thought I knew what was bothering Ishita. Not anymore. I have no idea what is hurting her. She understands every action of his. She defends him. Yet, she is angry, hurt and disappointed.

Excellent writing as always!

Edited by Metamorphmagus - 11 years ago

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