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FieryLioness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

omg lucky m speechless. I dnt knw what to say abt it. As ur other ramblings this time too I felt like m reading Ruhi's thoughts directly from her.

Very beautifully written, how family atmosphere effects kids...

Amazing work Lucky...

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Lata_ishra

@Lata_ishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

very Beautiful and touchy...😊

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--Sia--

@--Sia--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Beautiful & Touching post Lucky !!!

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sai

@sai14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Lucky- This is very nice.. you still have a kid in you!! You captured the emotions that she might be going through very well.. I always wonder what Ruhi is going through amongst all this. it must not be easy for her.

lol i liked the part about Romi's room not having any windows. typical Romi LOL.

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Elita
Your story is as innocent and sweet as Ruhi was in today's episode. I remember reading this poem long ago...and found it apt for Raman-Ruhi.

In My Daughter's Eyes
In my daughter's eyes I am a hero
I am strong and wise and I know no fear
But the truth is plain to see
She was sent to rescue me
I see who I want to be
In my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
Everyone is equal
Darkness turns to light
And the world is at peace
This miracle God gave to me
Gives me strength when I'm weak
I find reason to believe
In my daughter's eyes

And when she wraps her hand around my finger
Oh it puts a smile in my heart
Everything becomes a little clearer
I realize what life is all about

It's hangin' on when your heart
Is had enough
It's givin' more when you feel like givin' up
I've seen the light
It's in my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
I can see the future
A reflection of who I am
And what we'll be
And though she'll grow and someday leave
Maybe raise a family
When I'm gone
I hope you'll see
How happy she made me
For I'll be there
In my daughter's eyes"
Martina Mcbride

Hijacking the thread before editing my comment 😳 dont hate me Lucky 😳 but this poem is perfection Elita thank you for posting this remember reading it ages ago too.

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Thanks for the PM Lucky! 😊

Nothing can hide from that perceptive little child who is mature for her age while retaining her naughtiness. I could see that in your writing as well. How she thinks of innocently getting out of trouble for getting up late while at the same time realising all is not well at home.Quite a clever kid to find out the loop hole in her Chachu's excuse! No windows!😆 She is a perfect example to disprove the common impression of children who come from broken homes. While the family do keep her away from unpleasantness, they don't always avoid the issue. Ishita handles Ruhi's questions in a very wonderful manner.

I think you did a great job trying to write 'young' as you put it. I had a nice time reading. Thank you!😊

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Res

*** Edited ***

Extremely sorry for being awfully late!😛

Whoa Lucky! This completely different!

Amazing thought an very well written!👏

To step into the shoes of a 7yr old is not easy. You considered to all the perspectives. This OS couldn't have been better you know.

I just loved the quotes that you used here. Absolutely marvelous!👏
Hit the right notes and very apt!

Thank you for such a lovely piece of work and yeah thanks for the PM!🤗

Edited by afsanaanjum - 11 years ago

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Elita

@Elita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Its the perfect poem... Thank you very much for sharing this one with us 😊 My favourite line

"It's givin' more when you feel like givin' up"

Thanks. Even I loved this poem and how thoughtfully the poet has penned it. Such a sweet way expressing and admiring a daughter. And Raman-Ruhi scene was just too good...since I couldn't find words to express it I choose to quote the poet. Glad you all like it. 😃

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Raatri
..beautiful...and beautiful...infact...ur rambling series...is too gud...as requested by other friend here...i definitely want to see how u put up aadi ramblings...becoz...there is lot more inside him...like his papa..
.what we see of aadi ...is more what his mother has made up...but inside...i guess...he is totally innocent and child like ruhi...shravu...and a copy of his DAD. he wants to fly...and be loved ...but ...shaguns...bad webs...is not making him to do it..
I .WOULD LOVE TO READ UR TAKE ON THIS...ANYTIME...
lastly...like other writers...u write awesome...with all feelings for the character...👏

Hi

Thank you so much for your kind words.

Yes, Adi ramblings would be interesting to read and write. I have material, but need more inspiration on screen.😊 If they show him come to Bhalla house, then I will be able to pen something down.

Now I know I will at least have 2 readers for the Adi post. I wasnt sure earlier 😉😆

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: DivAniTanni
Beautifully written Lucky. Sooo beautiful and touchy.

PS : Ruhanika is surely gonna be a great actress when grown up. She really can act. And, nothing more to say about DivAn.

Thank You Tanni 😊

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