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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Beautifully written Lucky. Sooo beautiful and touchy.

PS : Ruhanika is surely gonna be a great actress when grown up. She really can act. And, nothing more to say about DivAn.

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

res 😳

Oops I forgot my res on this post sorry Lucky for being so late but I have to say this is one of your best works - reason being you actually made it sound like a child was the one who was the narrator here and that is a feat in itself, to go OTT when writing - well either its an art... since you kinda have to have some guts to write purple prose and flaunt it 😆 or its a disaster... but writing convincingly, especially with a child narrator requires a special skill I tell ya cos it has to be just right - esp if the character is someone like Ruhi, a kid wise beyond her years - either you can go wrong and forget she is a child or you make her way too childish - does that make sense? 😕 it does in my head LOL

But I have to say you have captured Ruhi aptly, not for a moment it felt i was reading someone else other than her.

I have to say YHM in terms of child artists has scored with this little cutie and the little fella - her best friend/shadow - Shravan... on the matter of the brat..the less said the better 😳😆

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Elita
Your story is as innocent and sweet as Ruhi was in today's episode. I remember reading this poem long ago...and found it apt for Raman-Ruhi.

In My Daughter's Eyes
In my daughter's eyes I am a hero
I am strong and wise and I know no fear
But the truth is plain to see
She was sent to rescue me
I see who I want to be
In my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
Everyone is equal
Darkness turns to light
And the world is at peace
This miracle God gave to me
Gives me strength when I'm weak
I find reason to believe
In my daughter's eyes

And when she wraps her hand around my finger
Oh it puts a smile in my heart
Everything becomes a little clearer
I realize what life is all about

It's hangin' on when your heart
Is had enough
It's givin' more when you feel like givin' up
I've seen the light
It's in my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
I can see the future
A reflection of who I am
And what we'll be
And though she'll grow and someday leave
Maybe raise a family
When I'm gone
I hope you'll see
How happy she made me
For I'll be there
In my daughter's eyes"
Martina Mcbride

Its the perfect poem... Thank you very much for sharing this one with us 😊 My favourite line

"It's givin' more when you feel like givin' up"

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Wonderful Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more & pm Me!

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

OMG! This was beautiful. Extremely well captured, you've moved me with your writing. I could actually feel Ruhi's feelings through your post. Very well described. And I love how've you managed to include all the incidences from Shravan's sister to Param.
Magnificent writing! Also the quotes which you've used in the end, so aptly describe the entire situation. Brilliant work :)

Edited by Tanyaarora11 - 11 years ago

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
Wonderful Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more & pm Me!

Thank You 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11
OMG! This was beautiful. Extremely well captured, you've moved me with your writing. I could actually feel Ruhi's feelings through your post. Very well described. And I love how've you managed to include all the incidences from Shravan's sister to Param.
Magnificent writing! Also the quotes which you've used in the end, so aptly describe the entire situation. Brilliant work :)

Thank You Tanya... I am glad you found the beauty in this. 😊

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Raatri

@Raatri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

..beautiful...and beautiful...infact...ur rambling series...is too gud...as requested by other friend here...i definitely want to see how u put up aadi ramblings...becoz...there is lot more inside him...like his papa..

.what we see of aadi ...is more what his mother has made up...but inside...i guess...he is totally innocent and child like ruhi...shravu...and a copy of his DAD. he wants to fly...and be loved ...but ...shaguns...bad webs...is not making him to do it..

I .WOULD LOVE TO READ UR TAKE ON THIS...ANYTIME...

lastly...like other writers...u write awesome...with all feelings for the character...👏

Edited by Raatri - 11 years ago

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Beautifully written! You've put forward the fears and feelings of a child beautifully...loved reading it..!😳

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

OMG!!! reallyy beautiul! children grasp every single thing very quickly.. be it studies, love, fight or anger! amazingggly portrayedd!!! greatt job!! awesum update as alwys!!

keepp continuinggg!!!

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