Deception And Debt - OS - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant OS Aani Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more & pm Me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey please do write more soon!! Ur a nice writer!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: paru_rox



They need to start focusing on someone other than Raman for a change. I say we do a "Bring back Subbu" virtual dharna & post in on the YHM team's FB, twitter etc 😛😆


LOL Parul I cracked up at the term virtual dharna, but at this point I don't see that happening , honestly I would love to see Ishita win the case, reform that brat, Raman fall in love with her during this phase and voila just when he wants to confess Subu should pop up 😈 now that would be more fun... cos right now he merely likes Ishita, there is respect and attraction, admiration for her - but love... ooo love will make the jealousy enjoyable... he should be jealous because he is in love not fall in love because he is jealous or realize that he is in love because of that. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: FieryLioness



hehehe... u know me well😆
can't even tell u how the whole mood of reading it changed wid a single name😆
m dying to see it show😳

me too hoping the same... true said once she will lose Adi custody then she will b of no use for Ashok...and more her present behavior, he already made her pay for her diamond ring demand 😆
next he will do something worse for sure...as he said he is not Raman...
so m eagerly waiting to see what he will do to her😆😆



Hey Meet

@bold - you cant imagine how much I laughed last night when the ShaShok scene came and she said come to meet me in jail 🤣 I unwittingly ended up thinking of my OS 😆

@red - count on it she insulted him last night with the same words- I dont trust you I believe Raman you are useless 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: EkPaheli



Hey Meet

@bold - you cant imagine how much I laughed last night when the ShaShok scene came and she said come to meet me in jail 🤣 I unwittingly ended up thinking of my OS 😆

OMG i thought its only me😆... i swear i prayed that time that GOD do something and make her go behind bars😆
i wished that we will have a twist more and Raman get shock of his life that actual culprit is Shagun only and it was Shagun-Adi plan to save shagun😆...Raman ko itna fool to dikha hi diya hai thoda aur sahi 😆

@red - count on it she insulted him last night with the same words- I dont trust you I believe Raman you are useless 😆

this lady have the guts...such a shameless woman she is... not only Raman but wid everyone she knows well to strike on their weak vein ... she knows what irks Ashok and she is doing exactly...m sure end mein roti hui Ashok k pass hi aayegi...
but u know seeing this track. m having this feeling that Ashok have soft corner for shagun...
last night bhi when he came to know abt court notice, he was genuinely concerned...
m telling u Shagun's end will be dhobi ka kutta na ghar ka na ghat ka😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...

awesome OS Aaani😳⭐️


thanks Ramona 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Aani..
Is there anything that you can't write.?? 😳 You are a pro at everything you attempt... 😉

When I initially started reading, I was only thinking on Ishra's lines.. I was imagining Ishu being broken after realizing about Raman's lies..
For a moment I was stunned when it turned to be Shagun and Ashok was mocking her..
Frankly, for the first time I loved Ashok..He showed her the place she belongs.. The best part of it was him rejecting her and admitting that for once he was glad that Raman won.. 😆 Its so good to imagine Shagun pleading with him..
Also the good and positive part of the OS was that Raman finally got Adi's custody..The spineless woman is finally paying for her deeds by rotting in the prison all alone...

Fabulous OS.. Even though it wasn't Ishra, but still I enjoyed it thoroughly..😳 Thanks..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Wow Aani..
Is there anything that you can't write.?? 😳 You are a pro at everything you attempt... 😉

When I initially started reading, I was only thinking on Ishra's lines.. I was imagining Ishu being broken after realizing about Raman's lies..
For a moment I was stunned when it turned to be Shagun and Ashok was mocking her..
Frankly, for the first time I loved Ashok..He showed her the place she belongs.. The best part of it was him rejecting her and admitting that for once he was glad that Raman won.. 😆 Its so good to imagine Shagun pleading with him..
Also the good and positive part of the OS was that Raman finally got Adi's custody..The spineless woman is finally paying for her deeds by rotting in the prison all alone...

Fabulous OS.. Even though it wasn't Ishra, but still I enjoyed it thoroughly..😳 Thanks..


Thanks a lot Anu it would be gloating to say this but I consider this one as one of my best pieces personally even if it has no IshRa cos it gave me a high, an adrenaline rush just by writing.

I am a huge fan of mystery books and suspense dramas but of course had never written something in the genre this was my first exploration of it and it just gave me an unprecendted thrill 😛

and of course in the end good had to win and evil had to loose also Ashok can reform if given a chance his character has a lot of scope if only the writers can move ahead of brainless comedy and dont make him a filthy pervert one is enough for the show 😆

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