OS: Picnic, truth and realisation...updt Pg.46 - Page 6

Yeh twist kya hai yaar😃😃..jaldi likho na..pleaseee..😃😃 btw fab story dear..loving it😃😃 very well-written👏

parta sounded smalll... Atleast ishu nodded for others sake,...poor girl

aWNNN i LOVED IT !!!!!!
Continue soon
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Amazing os kri loved it. 😃 😳 update soon..

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Nice

Originally posted by: aniiee

Naya twist😆

Originally posted by: Imanezara

Wow lovely os!! Waiting to read forwards

Neli: Haan bhai. Ishita bhabhi ne case withdraw kar diya... (Yes, Ishtita case has withdrawn the case)

Raman: Pathak... By any chance, tumne kuch bataya toh nahi na? (Did you happen to tell something to her)

Neil: Nahi bhai... Main aisa kyon karoonga? (No...Why will i do so?)

Raman: Teek hai... Baad mein baat karta hoon... (Fine, will talk to you later)

Ishita was passing through when Raman called her.

Raman: Ishita...ek minute. Kuch baat karni hai tujhse... (Ishita. I want to talk to you for a minute)

Ishita: Well...can't this wait? Mujhe clinic jaana hai... (Can we talk later? I need to go to clinic)

Raman: It won't take long...

Ishita: Teek hai. Kya baat hai? (Fine. What's the matter)

Raman: Case ko kyon withdraw kiya? (Why did you take back that case)

Ishita: Jab sabooton ko mitane ki koshish kiya ja raha hai, toh case ka kya faayda... Waise bhi, mujhe pata chal chukka hai ki mujhe kitna insaaf milega iss case mein? (When attempts are being made to destroy the evidence, what's the use of letting it go on? After all, I have got to know how much justice I will get in this case)

Raman: Ishita. Mujhe khud sach kal hi pata chala. Mujhe yeh lag raha tha ki Shagun ne sab kuch kiya aur Adi ussi wajah se hurt ho raha hai. (Even I came to know about the truth yesyerday. Till now, I thought that Shagun was the culprit and Adi is afraid for her)

Ishita: How does that matter to me? The point is...you are trying to protect the culprit... Woh bhi sabse chup chupke...

Raman: Yeh Adi ke...(I did it for Adi...)

Ishita: Please Raman. Tang aa chuki hoon. Wahi tape recorder kitni baar chalayenge aap? You are spineless... Baap ho aap Adi ka. You must show him the right path. Lekin aap, wahi kar rahe hain jo Shagun kar rahi hai. Spoil kar rahe hai Adi ko. Jo kaam Adi ne kiya, woh shield karne ka laayak bhi nahi hai. Lekin aap dono, don't call yourself parents... (Please Raman. I'm tired listening to the same. You sre his father and its your duty to show him the right path. But, you are spoiling him along with Shagun. The mistake committed by Adi is not worth all this...Shame on you)

Raman: Toh kya mujhe Adi ka future barbad karna hai... Iss galti ke liye... Waise bhi, mujhe lag raha tha ki Shagun ne hi kiya yeh sab... (Do you want me to spoil Adi's future for the same? All these days, I thought that Shagun was the culprit)

Ishita: This is your problem. You never understand stuff in the right context. Jab aapko yeh sach pata chala, aapko yeh sach sabse share karni chahiye. Meri amma se maafi mangvani chahiye... Lekin aap, gunegaar ko shield kar rahe ho. Kal Adi isse bhi bada guna karega, tab bhi yehi karenge aap...hai na... Yeh sahi nahi hai... (When you got to know about the truth, you must have shared it with us and made them apologise to amma. Tomorrow, will you again shield Adi if he's going to a commit another bigger mistake. This is not right on your part)

Ishita: Aur Raman...You love Adi and I know it. Lekin sach toh yehi hai ki aapke zindagi mein ab Shagun nahi hai. Yeh baat aap Adi ko samja nahi pa rahe hain? Isiliye yeh picnic pe gaya na uske saath? Ek chota sa doubt hai mera... Kal agar Adi aapse yeh vinati karega ki papa, kya hum phirse ek parivaar bankar reh sakte hain toh kya aap mujhe divorce de denge? (I know your love for Adi. But, the bitter truth of your life is that Shagun is out of your life. You aare not able to explain this to Adi. So, you went out on a picnic with her. I have a doubt. If Adi expresses his desire to get back to you, will you divorce me?)

Raman: Ishita... What's all this?

Ishita: Jaanna zaroori hai. Kal se surprise pe surprise de rahe hain aap... Yeh bhi ho saktha hai. I must be prepared for it na... Isliye aise pooch rahi thi. And Raman, I don't care as to in what shit you are putting yourselves into lekin meri Ruhi ko yeh sab se door rakhenge aap... Yeh bhai behen ka sentiment mere saamne display mat kijiye. Adi ke parvarish ka asar meri Ruhi pe nahi padni chahiye... Last, by any chance, agar yeh picnic mujhe manene ke liye plan kiya hai toh drop it... I am not going to fall for all this anymore... (I must be prepared for the same after getting to know of whatever you have been doing all these days. I don't know where you are getting yourself into but keep mu Ruhi out of all this. I don't want Ruhi to be influenced by Adi. So, don't try to use their relationship to bring them closer. If by any chance, this picnic has been planned to convince me, please drop it as its not to work anymore)

Raman: Ishita...

Ishita: Ishita ishita Ishita... Iske aage kuch kehne ke liye hai aapke paas? Kaisa hoga? Raman...Aapne mujhse ek cheez maanga...bharosa lekin usko bhi thod diya aapne. Ab kuch bacha nahi hai humare beech... Just leave it here... (Do you anything more to say other than my name? You asked me to trust you which has been completely broken by you. Now, there's nothing left to say)

Having said so, Ishita walked away from him to rake the car keys and left for her clinic. Raman understood that the task before him is becoming more and more difficult. He didn't know what to do and how to do... He was afraid of losing Ishita... Especially after she used the word "Divorce". Tears kept rolling down his cheeks... He felt alone... He wanted someone's support but he didn't know whom to ask the same from. He finally gave up and called Mihir...

Originally posted by: Hayaa.m

Wow going on picnic and new twist.looking forward for that. Once again though it was small but well written. waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Itna chotu update? 😒

But i liked it. 😆😃

I loved: Raman was waiting to see Ishita. Infact, he knew that it is the only choice left with him as his parents can't stop him before Ruhi. But, this time, he didn't want to exploit the same. Yes, he wanted Ishita to forgive him... But, as her husband and not as Ruhi's father. He didn't want to use Ruhi as a shield in their relationship anymore.😳

Naya twist in case?! What's that? 😲

Update soon please.