OS: Picnic, truth and realisation...updt Pg.46

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Thanks to cv's... Their track is giving sleepless nights to YHM-ians... Another OS from my side...

Even after being with Adi, that day was the worst day of Raman's life. After all, the last sight before he got into his car was Ishita's puffed eyes which were shooting millions and millions of questions. Raman could understand what Ishita was going through since he has gone through the same few years back...betrayal. He was silently cursing his fate as to why he was forced to be in a position where he has to hurt a person like Ishita... He noticed that evil smile plastered to Shagun's face, a lost Adi and a sad Ruhi... She was missing her Ishima. She came running near him...

Ruhi: Papa... Ishima ko phone lagao na... Main unhe bahut miss kar rahi hoon... (Dad...Call Ishima. I'm missing her a lot.)

Raman called the landline number because he knew that Ishita's wouldn't take the call if she sees his number.

Raman: Ruhi...tum baat karo. Apni Ishima ko bulao. (Ruhi. Call your Ishima and talk to her)

Ruhi: Hello...Dadu...

Mr.Bhalla: Ruhi puttar...kaisi ho...(Ruhi...How are you)

Ruhi: Aap logon ko miss kar rahi hoon... Ishima kahan hai... (I'm missing you ppl a lot. Where is Ishima?)

Mr.Bhalla: Woh... So rahi hai na...(She's sleeping)

Ruhi: Ab...Ishima kabhi iss time ko soti nahi hai na dadu... (Now...But she's not habituated to the same)

Ruhi heard Toshi's voice asking the doctor to get inside to check Ishita...

Ruhi: Dadu... Ishima ko kya hua? Doctor kyon Ishima ko dekhne aaye hain? (What happened to Ishima dadu. What is doctor doing there)

Raman who heard the same snatched the phone from Ruhi's hands...

Raman: Ishita ko kya hua?(What happened to Ishita)

Mr.Bhalla: Puttar ji...Aap... Yeh bewajah pareshan kyon ho rahe hain aap? Apne bte aur pyaare ex=wife ko sambhaliye. Hum sab apne bahu ko sambhalenge. (Oh...Raman. Why are you unnecessarily getting worried. You take care of your son and loving ex-wife. We'll take care of our Daughter-in-law)

Raman: Papa...

The line on the other end died...Raman was totally restless. He tried again but no one took the call this time. He didn't waste time as he knew there's no use trying to call them. By that time, Ruhi started crying...

Ruhi: Papa... Ghar jaana hai... Ishima ko dekhna hai...(Let us go home. I want to see Ishima)

Actually, Ruhi stole Raman's words out of his mouth. Both of them ran towards their car when Shagun came near them when she saw Ruhi crying.

Shagun: Ruhi... Kya hua? (Ruhi...What happened?)

Ruhi: Papa...jaldi...

Raman: Adi...Chalo... Shagun, get into the car.

Adi: Mom...main jaanta tha. Yeh insaan kabhi apne promise poora nahi kar payega. (Mom...i knew it. This man can never keep up his promise)

Raman: Ishita ko kuch ho gaya. I need to be there. Please beta... (Something has happened to Ishita. I need to be there)

Adi: So what? Woh koun hai mera? (How does that matter to me)

Raman: So what? Adi... I'm telling you that something is wrong with her lekin tum... Woh tumhara kuch nahi beta lekin meri biwi hai. Mujhe uske pass jaana hai. (How can you ask so Adi. Even if she's nothing to you, she's my wife. I must be there with her)

Raman: (Facing Shagun) Kaisi parvarish di hai Adi ko? Apne jaise salfish bana rahi ho... (What have you taught him? You are making him selfish)

Adi: Stop it...Aap meri mom se kuch nahi kahenge. (You won't talk to my mom like that)

Shagun: Leave it Adi...

Adi: No mom... Yeh kya jaanta hai. Aapne mere liye accident ka blame tak apne sar pe utaya aur yeh...(Mom. He knows nothing. You took the blame on your head for the accident committed by me)

Adi stopped right here. He said what he was prohibited from confessing... He saw Raman's shocked face. Shagun's worried face. Shagun tried to cover up.

Shagun: Woh Raman...

Raman: Meri patni ko dekhna hai... Chup chap gaadi mein baito warna beech sadak mein chodkar jaana padega. (I must meet my wife. Get into the car else i must leave you in the middle of the road)

Shagun and Adi settled in the back seat to escape from Raman's wrath but she saw those killing stares from Raman through rear mirror and was genuinely afraid of Raman's reactions. She was somewhere positive thinking that Raman would never do anything to harm Adi. Raman was extremely worried for Ishita. He finally understood that Shagun has been fooling around to hurt Ishita. He kept on driving recklessly till he reached Mayur Vihar. Shagun wanted to put up a nice act again.

Shagun: Mujhe bhi dekhna hai Ishita ko... (Even i want to meet Ishita)

Raman: Get lost Shagun...

Shagun: Mujhe dekhna hai...

Ruhi: Papa...chalo...

Raman ignored Shagun and went upstairs to see Ishita. He saw Pammy aunty talking with Toshi.

Pammy: Aise ajanak cooker burst kaise ho gayi? (All of a sudden, how did the cooker burst like that)

Toshi: Pata nahi yaar... Ishita har kaam dhyan se hi karti hai... Aaj uski dhyan nahi tha aur..(Dunno...Ishita is always careful. Maybe, she was a little disturbed today)

Pammy: Doctor ne kya kaha? (What did the doctor say)

Toshi: Rabji ki lakh lakh shukar hai kuch khatarnak nahi hua... So rahi hai. Doctor ne kaha teek ho jayegi... (By god's grace, she's out of danger. She's sleeping. Doctor said that she'll be fine)

Pammy: Aaram karne do... Mein baad mein aake dekhthi hoon...(Let her take rest. I will see her later)

While leaving, she saw Raman. She wanted to reassure Raman but on seeing Shagun, she silently went out without telling anything. Ruhi ran inside to see her Ishima.Before Raman could ask Toshi something, Shagun started her antics again.

Shagun: Arey... Ishita ko kya hua? Hum sab picnic mein itna enjoy kar rahe the aur tab phone... (What happened to Ishita? We got the phone when we were enjoying so much that...)

Mr.Bhalla: Shagunji... Aap... Mere Raman puttar ke guest ho... Puttar ji... Aap inhe sambhalo. Hume apni bahu ko dekhna hai.(Oh Shagun... You are Raman's guest. Raman...you take care of your guest. I must be with my DIL)

Saying so, Mr.Bhalla and Toshi slammed the door on Shagun's face to be with Ishita. Shagun felt offended by the same. She tried to touch Raman's hands when he shook her off...

Raman: Bas...aur nahi... Tumhari jaisi characterless woman ko maine apne zindagi mein kabhi nahi dekha hai. Tumhare gale dabane ka mann kar raha hai. Ishita ko hurt karne ke liye yeh natak kiya tumne. Arey...uss bechari ka kya kasoor hai? Chi... Uski kehne pe samman diya tumhe jisse tum deserve bhi nahi karti ho... Chale jao... Aur...Regarding the accident case, dhamaka abhi baaki hai... Intezaar karo Raman Kumar Bhalla ke game ka... Jo dukh tumne Ishita ko pahunchaya hai, usse sou guna jyada milne wali hai tumhe... Tumhe mujhse behtar aur koun jaan sakta hai... (That's enough. I have never seen a characterless woman like you in my life. I feel like strangling you to death. You did all this to hurt Ishita. What did she do? I respected you because she asked me to do so which you aren't even worth of. Go away. And wait fro RKB's answer for the game you played regarding this accident. I will make sure that you suffer 100 times more than what Ishita did. After all, who knows you more than what i do?)

Shagun was shaken to hear the same. Petrified, she silently left that place to ask for Ashok's help...once again...

Raman kept on waiting in the hall to see Ishita... Finally, Mr.Bhalla came out.

Raman: Mujhe Ishita se milna hai. (I want to meet Ishita)

Mr.Bhalla: Aapke guest itne jaldi chali gayi. Toh aap phirse unse milne ke liye jayiye na... Miss kar rahe honge... (Your guest left the house so soon. You go behind her to meet her. She'll be missing you)

Raman: Papa...please... Aaj ka din... Bahut kuch dekh chukka hoon. Mujhe Ishita ko dekhna hai. Usse kuch share karna hai... Aap apne kamre mein Ishita ko kyon rakh rahe ho... Humara kamra aur bhi comfortable hoga na... (Today, i have seen so much. Not anymore. I want to see Ishita and share something. Why didn't you let her say in our room? It is even more comfortable)

Mr.Bhalla: Tum Ishita se door rahoge... Tumhare kamre mein usse sukoon kam takleef jyada hogi. Tumhe dekhkar... (You will stay away from Ishita. She will get more hurt by staying in your room or by seeing you)

Toshi: Bhallaji... Yeh kya ho raha hai? Bahu so rahi hai aur aap itne zor zor se baat kar rahe ho...(What's happening here? DIL is sleeping and you are making so much noise)

Raman: Aapme koi mera takleef kyon nahi samaj rahe ho? Mujhe Ishita ko takleef mein dekhkar maza thodi aa raha tha... Mere takleef... (Why don't you ppl realise that i'm suffering because of my actions... I am not enjoying all this... My pain...)

Toshi: Yeh meri meri kya hai Raman? Tera zindagi Ishita ke saath juda hua hai. Vachan diya tha...apne kartavya nibaane ka... Yaad hai. Ab jo kuch bhi tere zindagi mein ho raha hai, usme Ishita bhi judi hui hai. Isliye, yeh mera takleef, mera dukh, yeh sab bekaar ki baatein mat karo... (What is all this Raman... You are not alone in anything .Your life is connected with Ishita's life. You took your marital vows promising the same. Ishita is connected with you. So, please stop with our rantings like 'My life, My pain,etc...)

Mr.Bhalla: Kise samja rahe ho aap? Tere wajah se aaj Ishita ka yeh haal hua hai. Aise soch mein dubi hui thi ki cooker ko teek tarah band nahi kiya aur yeh sab... Lekin, ab bhi apne ma baap se sab kuch chupake rakha hai... tere izzat ko bachane ke liye... Ishita jaisi ek heere ko chot pahunchavoge toh shayad bhagwan bhi tumhe maaf nahi karega Raman. Lekin, inn baton ko koi faayda bhi hai. Jo nuksaan hona tha voh toh ho gayi... (Why are you explaining all this to him? Raman... Ishita was lost in thoughts that she had to face all this today... because of you. But, to save your honour, she's hiding everything from her parents. Even the god won't forgive you for hurting a diamond like Ishita. But, what is the use of all this? The damage is done)

Raman: Papa...maine Adi ke liye kiya... (I did all this for Adi)

Toshi: Puttar. Hum sab jaante hain ki tum Adi se bahut pyaar karte ho lekin puttar tera zindagi uss kamini aurat ke wajah se poori tarah badal gayi. Ab teri zindagi mein Ishita and Ruhi hi hai. Yehi hai tere zindagi ka sach. Jitna jaldi tum isse apnavoge, usi mein sab ka balayai hai... Tumhe sab kuch nahi mil sakta... Baaki toh tum samajdar ho... (We know your love for Adi. But, because of this creep Shagun, your life has changed course. Now, Ishita and Ruhi are in your life. The sooner you accept this truth, the better life will turn out to be for you. You can't get everything in your life. Hope you understand the same)

Raman went back to his room and sat in silence.

Raman: (Self talk) Yeh mummy papa kya keh rahe hain? Adi ko apne zindagi se kaise phenkh sakta hoon... Mera beta hai... Lekin, yehi baat sach hai... Ab chahe kuch bhi ho jaye, mera beta mujhe nahi apnayega. Maine issi chakkar mein Ishita ke dil thoda, uska bharosa, humara rishtha... sab ko khatre mein daal diya. Iss galti ke liye tum mujhe jaldi maaf nahi kar paogi Ishita lekin... main koshish karoonga. Aaj ke baad, Kabhi Adi ke liye tumhe chot nahi pahunchavunga.

Tumne iss parivaar ko apna sab kuch diya lekin main...takleef se jyada kuch nahi diya hai aajtak. Pehle Ruhi ke saath yehi kiya, ab tere saath... Humare iss rishthe mein tum unlucky ho gayi Ishita... Bas...ek mauka aur de do mujhe... (What is that mom and dad are trying to explain? Adi is my son. How can i throw him out of my life. But, it is also true that my son is never going to accept me. I have lost Ishita's trust in the process and i have hurt her beyond words. Ishita can't forgive me easily but i'll still try. I will never hurt her for Adi anymore. Ishita...You have given everything to this life but i have nothing else but for pain. You have turnd out to be unlucky in this relationship of ours. First, it was Ruhi and now, its you. Please give me one chance Ishita)

Raman wiped his tears and called Mihir...

Raman: Haan Mihir... Ek bus book karo... Parson picnic ja rahe hain... Hum sab...(Mihir...Book a bus for us. We are going for a picnic day after tomorrow)

Raman just hoped that things become alright and lied down allowing Ishita's thoughts to disturb him...

Part 2: Page 6
Part 3: Page 10
Part 4: Page 17
Part 5: Page 21
Part 6: Page 26
Part 7: Page 29
Part 8: Page 38
Part 9: Page 42
Part 10:Page 46
Edited by krikumar.91 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful, however since my Urdu isn't that great please could you kindly add an English translation whenever you are writing an SS or Os?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kri...this ws so so awesome...plz continue soon
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Hi dear
again a marvellous piece of work
the words are nt enough now
raman has to mend things by his actions...
Plz continue asap
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So awesome... Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really Raman neds to get a grip on his actions
Update soon
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Reserved.
Edited.
Lovely OS Kri.🤗
Omg wow.Bhalla parivaar royally ignoring Rkb.😉
Padhte wakt I felt as if I was watching yhm. Seriously.
I loved it how RKB bajofied Shagun. And how Bhalla uncle bajofied RKB.😆
PS. First page pe first nahi aayi toh kya hua, second page pe first comment toh mera hi hai.😎😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CharmGal

Wonderful, however since my Urdu isn't that great please could you kindly add an English translation whenever you are writing an SS or Os?



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kri.😭
Iss baar Main first nahi hun.😔
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Originally posted by: krikumar.91



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