OS: Picnic, truth and realisation...updt Pg.46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: suhaaana
Read last three updates
a perfect blend with realisation and feelings
do start a new one and pm me
i am always in que for ur perfect fictions

suhana

Thanx a lot... Will definitely PM you...

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-kri-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: srgmpazee
A beautiful end to your awesome OS.👏👏👏

Thanks yaar, Raman did not let us down this time. Loved his convo with Shagun. Really liked the way he showed shagun her place in his life and in the society. Looks like Adi is also fed up of his mom's antics.😊

Hmmm, Diamond necklace this time. BTW, was this also designed by patidev himself?? 😊😉

Loved the final confession part... "And now their wonderful life journey continues with their usual nok jhoks."

Thank you so much for taking time out and entertaining us all with your OS.
They are all very practical with full of emotions and feelings. I have got used to them. Please do continue to write such interesting ones in future as well and please do PM me whenever you write one.

That's a birlliant comment again from your side... I wanted Raman to ask this to Shagun when she calls Ishita like that... So, tried that here.

Diamond necklace... Gaudy nahi hoga... Isliye...

Thanks a lot for liking my style of writing... Will definitely PM you...