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OS/SS
Raman's Realisation
Part 2(B)
(Self thoughts are in Italics)
Raman was about to leave for home when his phone rang. It flashed Shagun's name.
He reluctantly picked up the phone.
Raman: Haan bolo, Shagun.
One pair of ears straightened at that name, Romi Bhalla. A man who could not miss this opportunity to get back at his brother for hurting his bhabhi! Ab phir kuch demand rakhegi ye dayan! Is baar patani kya mangegi... ho sakta hai adi ke naam par ek dinner date? Haayyeoo Rabba!
After a pause
Raman: Thik hai Shagun Adi ke liye mein dinner ke liye ready hu.. batao kaha aana hai...
Romi shook his head. Chalo lagta hai Bhavishwadi sach nikli. Or dekho mere mahan bhai ko maan bhi gaye! He slapped his forehead lightly.
Raman: Thik hai milteb hai Hotel Continental 8 baje..
Thik hai bhai ab aap milo apne Bhai se aaj raat 8 baje hotel continental. Teen char hari mirch na kha li na Bhabhi ko dekh kar to mera naam bhi Romi Bhalla nahi!
Then he quickly texted Mihir to meet him in the coffee-shop near Ishita's Clinic.

In the coffee-shop:
Romi: Humme aaj raat same hotel mein Armaan or Bhabhi ko bhejna padega!
Mihir: Yaar ye to haad he hai!
Romi: aree yaar karna padega.
Mihir: Pagal hai kya! ye Armaan-Bhabhi ka romance kaise karwa sakte hai... Jaise ke bhai khete hai bhabhi ne JKR wali talwar utha li to hum shaheed ho jayenge...
Romi: aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga... ek natak he to hai... konsa asli ki date hai...
Mihir: Abbe ek natak mein dono actors hote hai ek nahi. Dono ko script pata hoti hai. Lakin yaha to ek hi ko pata hai doosra to real life character play karega...
Romi: to phir kya kare bane banaye plan pe panni pher de... ek to abhi tak wo Armaan mahashaye nahi aaye! Upar se tu mera sir garam kar raha hai! Patani ye bhai ko bhi us Shagun ke saath jane ke liye haan kyu karni thi... ye adi ke liye' dialogue marke...
"Kaha ja raha hai Raman shaguun ke saath?" They heard a familiar female voice behind them. They knew even without turning that it was Ishita.
Romi(whispering): Mar gaye! Bhabhi yaha kya kar rahi hai?
Mihir(whispering): Kisne bola tha clinic ke bagal wala coffee shop use karne ko?
They both slowly turned around and saw an angry Ishita with smiling Armaan.
Romi(whispering): Lagta hai isne he aag lagai hai! Isse to akele bulaya tha.
Mihir(whispering): aag lagne ke baad kya ACP Praduman ban raha hai!
They stopped their mini-fight when they heard Armaan laugh heartily and Ishita smother her laugh.
Mihir and Romi together: Bhabhi aap?
Ishita: Armaan ne mujhe sab kuch bataya! Ab samajh aaya kyu wo Buddu Ravan Kumar subhe itna chid raha tha! Acha hai jalan hogi to pata chala mein kitni hurt huyi thi!
Mihir: Kya baat hai bhabhi aap to team Mihir mein nikli..
This earned him glares from both Romi and Armaan!
Mihir: Mera matlab hai team Revenge Raman Bhai!
Ishita saw this exchange and laughed heartily.
Armaan: Oye hoyyee... Haste hue kitni soni lagdi hai! with a dreamy smile
Romi hit him with his elbow while Mihir glared at him.
Armaan: What? I'm rying to be used to my character.
Ishita: Ohk! Ye sab jhodo ab batao karna kya hai?
Mihir: Haan to bhabhi aap or Armaan...
Romi intruppted him :No.. No.. wait there is a change in the plan. Ab jab bhabhi humare saath hai to kyu na high voltage shock de sedha bhai ko?
Ishita: Hmmm! Idea acha hai.
Mihir: Tussi great ho bhabhi!
Rohi: Acha to listen Armaan, Ruhi or aap... teeno dinner ke liye jaana... lakin haan hum bhai ke baad pahuchenge... apko un sabko ignore karna hai.. wo kya hai na mujhe us chudel par bharosa hai ki wo kuch na kuch karke bhai se chipkegi adi ko bhejke... to agar wo adi ko bhejti hai kahi akele bhai ke saath rehne ke liye to mein bhi Ruhi ko apne saath waha se lejaunga. Thik?
Ishita: par ryhi?
Armaan: aree yaar meri maa jhod de meri pyari bachi k uske chachu ke saath tum bus ab ghar jao or ready ho shaam ke liye...
Romi: Sahi! Or haan Bhabhi ek dum pataka lagna hai apko!
Ishita blushed at that "Thik hai!"
She was about to leave when she again sat back.
Ishita: Mujhe nahi pata ki mein tum dono ko kaise thx karu... I don't know ki Raman mujhse jhut kyu bol rahe hai? Or kyu is tarah hurt kar rahe hai par thank you ki yum sab meri itni help kar rahe ho...
Armaan: Ab kya kare pyaar arne walo ko milana he humara kaam hai!
Ishita blushed again: Kuch bhi... acha bye mein nikalti hu...

After Ishita left
Mihir: Bhabhi ko kush dekhke acha laga!
Armaan: Don't worry Ishu ne bahut dukh saha hai ab to us Raman Kumar Bhalla ke sahi hone ki bari hai..
Romi: Phir sab thik ho jayega...
Mihir: Par mujhe aisa lagta hai ki kuch badi baat hai ki bhai aise behave kar rahe hai... Kal mein jab pathak or bhai se mila wo dono upset lag rahe the...
Armaan: Agar aisa hai to tum Pathak se sach ugalwao... wo Raman ka lawyer hai use zaroor pata hoga! Ab main bhi nikalta hu shaam ko milte hai!
Mihir: Hmmm! Main bhi Pathak se sach pata karta hu!

At Hotel Continental
Raman was there before time waiting for his dear son and his unwanted ex-wife.
Shagun and Adi soon entered. Shagun as usual was decked up in a party dress. She tried to look as beautiful as she could to woo Raman. But could that ever matter to Raman. Even sitting there all he had in his head was Ishita. Till today morning he was hurt because he was guilty for hurting Ishita but know he was hurt because of her ignorance and that unknown emotion that bubbled in his heart every time he saw her with Armaan.

Shagun: Raman! Main tumhe itni der se bula rahi hu..
Raman: Oh! Haan Bolo! Hi adi beta!
Adi: Hmm! Hi, Dad!
Raman: baitho na... Raman pulled out a chair of Adi. Shagun expected him to do the same with her but he didn't. She was disappointed but knew that she had him today whole evening to herself. She smiled at that thought. You will come back to me Raman, akhir pyaar hu mein tuhara? Kaha jaoge tum? Abhi to mein Adi ko bhi wapis Khar bhej dongi phir sirf tum or mein... wo bhenji bhi nahi! She gave an evil laugh in her head.
Raman: Kya khaoge Adi?
Adi: Mere pass bhi menu card hai...
Raman was hurt at his behaviour. Shagun saw that.
Shagun: Adi, beta papa specially apke liye yaha aaye hai. Please ache se baat karo, mere liye.
Adi though reluctantly, gave a nod. Raman was happy at that.
Raman: Thanks, Shagun
Shagun: You are welcome.
Yeh to shuruwat hai ab dekho Raman mein kaise tumhe phsati hu.
They together ordered food. Raman was happy that Adi let him order for him.
They were eating the food when Adi's cell rung.
Adi: Hello
after a pause
Adi: ohk! He disconnected the call.
Adi: Mom, Bala sir ghar aachuke hai or wo half an hr se wait kar rahe hai... Unne mujhe class ka bola tha par mein bhool gaya...
Raman: koi baat nahi beta.. yum Padho hum kabhi or dinner kar lenge... Chalo mein tumhe ghar chod deta hu...
Adi: Nahi aap mere mom ke saath dinner karlo... Mein driver ke saath jaonga..
Shagun plays her triumph card because she knew Raman kabhi uske saath akele nahi rukega
Shagun: Nahi nahi Adi apke papa mere sath akee dinner nahi karenge. Chalo mein bhi ghar chalti hu.
Raman was baffled.
Adi: (To Shagun) Nahi! (To Raman) Aap mom ke saath dinner karke unhe ghar jhod dena. Thik hai?
Shagun smirked inwardly.
Raman had no choice "Thik hai beta, jaisa tum kaho."
Adi: Ohk! Then bye.
Adi left.
Ab kya karoge Raman? Ab tumhe to mein mana hi longi!
With this she shifted her seat closer to Raman.
Raman was too lost to notice.
Shagun: Raman, khao na...
Raman: Hmm!
They both started eating.
Outside the hotel
Romi on phone: Yelo! Kardi na isne chudalo wali baat. Bhabhi jaldi jao, Ruhi ke bina usne Adi ko bhej diya... Apka kaam hogaya hai complaint wapis hogayi... aap jaldi karo ab bus Bhai ko sahi karna hai... Shagun ko to milke dekh he lenge.
Flashback
Mihir: Haan bhabhi! Pathak ne bataya... (they knew everything, every single detail.) Shagun ne ye sab kiya or tab se bhai ko tang kar rahi hai...
Ishita: Kamal hai! Raman mujhpe itna sa bhi yakin nahi karte... Kamse kum ek bar mujhe batate to mein Adi ke liye case wapis le leti...
Romi: Bhai Shayad bahut pareshan hoge...
Ishita: Itne ki mujhse jhut bola? Mujhse bate chupayi? Mein to unki biwi hu na? Unne to promise bhi kiya tha ki abse Adi se related har baat mujhe batange...
Mihir: Mujhe vishwas hai Shagun ne unhe Adi ka naam leke mana kiya hoga...
Ishita: Jo bhi ho mein ab thodi der akele rehna chahti hu...
Armaan: Ishu..
Ishita: Please...
Romi: Par bhabhi bhai? Humara plan?
Ishita needed time but still for them agreed.
Ishita: Shaam ko milte hai!

Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla hu mein Raman ek bar bolke to dekhte... to mein galat nahi thi Shagun abhi bhi apke liye important hai... With that she started crying. But she knew that Raman was just a weak father not a weak man. Now she could understand that guilty look that always surfaced in his eyes. The sad look he had. The unwillingness he had to look in her eyes.
She could now see Raman see through. She knew him now. She understood him. She did, and she does.
Main apko samjhti hu Raman isley ye bhi samjhti hu ki apne mujhse baat kyu jhupayi. Main janti hu aap na to mujhe or na hi Adi ko hurt karna chahte the. Or mein ye bhi janti hu apne mujhe dhoka nahi diya... wo sab meri galt famiya thi... To phir thik hai Raman. Maine apko mujhse jhut bolne ke liye maaf kiya.
She then smiled. A mischievous smile that reached her eyes. Par apko kimat to chukani padegi! Ab dekhte hai Jealous Kumar Bhalla Kaisa dikhta hai. Apko apna dard samjhaoungi apki JKR style.
End of Flashback
With that a very beautiful couple entered the hotel. They caught the notice of everyone, even Raman.



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OS/SS

Raman's Realisation

Part 3

(Self thoughts are in Italics)

With that a very beautiful couple entered the hotel. They caught the notice of everyone, even Raman.

Shagun was talking all nonsense about the past when she notice Raman tightening his fist and glaring beside her. She turned to witness the most beautiful sight. Ishita was there wearing a yellow halter neck frock with white belt and accessories. With her was a handsome man who was dressed to kill too.
Raman was angry is an understatement, when Shagun added to his fury.
Chal beta Shagun isse better mauka nahi milega tujhe... karle Raman ko apni side

Shagun: aree Raman ye to Ishita hai na... aise to humesha behenji bani rehti hai or aaj dekho... itni hot dress pehen kar apne boyfriend ke saath date par aayi hai...

She stopped as her phone rang.
Shagun wanted to continue further and stay back for the action scene but since it was Ashok who was calling she had to leave after all she had lied to him.
So she got up and left silently, happy at her work.

Raman was furious replaying Shagun's words in his head. "itni hot dress pehen kar apne boyfriend ke saath date par aayi hai..." Ishita yaha? Wo bhi is chirkut ke saath? Itne sundar lag rahi hai, wo bhi iske liye? Dekho dono hans hans ke baate to aise kar rahe hai jaise die hard lovers ho... lovers? Ishita-Armaan? Nahi nahi. Ishita aisa nahi kar sakti... wo mujhe kabhi dhoka nahi de sakti..
Kyu nahi de sakti? Tu kya kar raha tha usse jhut bolke? Usse bhi to kush rehne ka haq hai? Par sirf mere sath! Kyuki Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla ki khushi uske he naam mein hai!
Raman was now depressed and Romi who was witnessing this flow of expressions on his bhai's face felt bad for him.
On the other hand even Ishita started feeling bad as she gave him side glances, still she hadn't forgiven him. So he chose to ignore.
Raman was about to get up and go to Ishita to take her back home, when he saw both of them going to the dance floor.
DJ played a very sensuous number and they started dancing. Their bodies were close and Armaan had his hand on her waist. His grip was firm and it was visible.

Shit! Ye bewakoof DJ yahi time mila tha iss gane ke liye? Jaise he ye dono aye? Dekho to dono ko kaise chipak ke salsa kar rahe hai! Aisa lag raha hai ki ye JKR sidha Zara touch me touch me ki Katrina kaif ban gayi! Had hai! Par mujhe itna gussa kyu aaraha hai! Itna gussa to mujhe tab bhi nahi aaya tha jab meine Shagun or Ashok ko sath dekha tha... Grrr... Ye sab JKR ki wajha se har cheez ka extreme he experience karati hai! Jealousy ka bhi... Jealous? Aur mein, Raman Ku...
He was about to shrug his thought thanks to his ego when suddenly Armaan pulled Ishita forcefully and she crashed onto his chest.
Badh mein jaye mera naam. Haan mein Raman Kumar Bhalla accept karta hu ki mein usse leke bahut possessive hu... Kyuki wo sirf or sirf meri hai...
Par kyu? Jitne mein Iska jawab sochunga utne mein ye Armaan meri Ishita ko...
With that he menacingly strode to them and pulled Ishita away.
Armaan: Aree bro...
Before he could continue Raman gave him his deadliest stare and walked of dragging Ishita with him.
Ishita tried to free her hand but she was just pushed inside the car.
Within minutes they were far away from the hotel.
Ishita was first time scared looking at her Ravan Kumar. He was seriously angry but then she thought about her plan and dropped the idea of letting it go.
Ishita: I know you won't answer me ki hum kaha ja rahe hai... but please kya main tumhara phone use karsakti hum ear waha table par reh gaya...
Raman did not say anything because he knew he could burst out any moment. He just heeded to her request.
Ishita quickly dialled a number.
Though Raman was looking straight on the road he had her ears to Ishita. Even he was curious that whom she was calling. Could it be Armaan? No no she won't dare to call him in front me that to using my cell.
Ishita: Oh! Hi Armaan. Ishita here.
Hell, she did call him! You have Guts woman! Grrr.
Ishita continued after a pause: Woh! Actually tum please mera phone apne saath le jana. Ghar pe lelungi.
Raman was dying of the curiosity he was sure that if strained a little more he will be able to could hear Armaan and he could.
Armaan: haan sure, jaan. Acha haan ek baat or thanks. I loved it. Aaj ka din bahut acha tha.
Ishita blushed. Aaj ka din? What are they talking about? Aur ye Ishita aise blush kyu kar rahi hai. Main to kubh bhi kahu wapis ek taunt he aata hai!
Ishita: I'll talk to you later.
Armaan: No wait yaar. Ek baat aur tum salsa champion thi aur rahogi! Agar wo tumhara pati nahi aata to long drive nahi miss hoti...

Ishita cut him.
Ishita: I'll talk to you later, bye.
The briskness in her moves further infuriated Raman.
Ye Ishita mere samne baat kyu nahi kar rahi thi usse? To ye long drive plan kar rahe the jo maine spoil kar di? Acha kiya!

Inspite of his anger he felt nice about his move. He was happy that he spoiled whatever they had planned.
Ishita: Hum ghar se kafi door hai. Kaha ja rahe hai?
Mujhe apke saath kahi nahi jaana Mr. Bhalla.
Ishita knew exactly what happened moments ago she knew Raman could hear Armaan after all she had deliberately raised the volume. She mentally praised herself for her smart move and now the pick of words in the conversation.
Raman: Mr. Bhalla? Oh to abse no Raman.
Ishita: Main apse dusri aur akhri baar khe rahi hu mujhe apke saath kahi nahi jaana?
With that car came to a screeching halt
Ishita looked around. It looked like a farm house.
Before Ishita could react she saw Raman opening her side door and pulling her out.
Ishita: kya kar rahe hai aap?
Raman picked up Ishita and carried her inside. He locked the door and kept the keys in his pocket.
Ishita: Ye kya zabardasti hai?
Raman: Acha to mein karu wo zabardasti hai? Aur wo Armaan jo kare wo sab sahi. Main tumhara pati hu wo nahi.

Ishita: Dekhiye Mr. Bhalla that is my personal life. You cannot interfere.
Raman had enough he pushed her to the nearest wall and held her arms tightly still careful not to hurt her. He had hurt her enough but not anymore.
This didn't go unnoticed by Ishita. She was happy but couldn't show that of course so she turned her face.
Raman: Dare to say that again. Aur khabardar agar mujhse muh phera toh.
Ishita: Leave me. Apko koi haq nahi hai mujhe order dene ka.
Raman: mujhe haq nahi hai mujhe?
Ishita: haan apko. Aap kiss haq ki baat kar rahe pati hone ki to Apne toh mujhe ye bhi batana zaroori nahi samjha ki aap Shagun ke madad kyu kar rahe. Apne toh mujhe ye bhi nahi bataya ki amma ka accident Shagun ne kiya.
Raman: Tumhe pata hai?
Ishita: Haan pata hai.. she said this time in a softer tone.
Raman also left her arms and moved back a little.
Raman: Wo Ishita, I'm sorry main...
Ishita: Janti hu Adi ke liye... main apko samajhti hu. Par aap nahi samajhte. Main apse gussa nahi hu is baat par balki iss baat par hu ki apne mujhse jhut bola Shagun ke liye..
Raman: Nahi Ishita...
Ishita: Bus... mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Toh phir jis tareke se aap Shagun ke saath khush hai uske saath hotel room share karke, kiss karke main bhi Armaan ke sath khush reh longi...
Shit, she knew very next moment that it was a pathetic idea. His face was menacing.
She knew the truth but she wanted Raman to confess so thought of taking the risk. But she knew it was no risk but sucide.
Raman again clutched her arms this time harshly.
Raman: Kya kaha tumne khush reh logi uske saath, hotel room share karke, kiss karke?
Ishita looked away.
Raman: for your kind information maine koi room nahi share kiya agar tumhe sab pata hai to ye bhi pata hona chahiye tha ki wo bus ek legal discussion ke liye tha. Pathak bhi saath tha humare. Or meine usse koi kiss nahi kiya, wo toh mein seat belt laga raha tha. Par tumne...??
The thought of any other man touching her made him crazy he didn't understand what to do. He did something that shocked Ishita but yet she had waited for this. He pushed himself against Ishita pressing her between him and wall and captured her lips in the most soul steering kiss. He wanted to prove his right on her. Make her his forever so no one could try steeling HIS Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla. And he knew he was successful when Ishita too responded with equal passion.

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