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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

nice.. plz upd8 sooner :)


thank you so much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Shimla532

What will happen next part? pls pm me. Its lovely :)

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Sure I will. thank you so much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam

Loved it ... Baby
Please do continue soon ...



Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

Looks interesting
Continue soon


thank you so much ; )
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Wonderful :)

Ekdum paisa vasool hoga to see Raman like that... and hats off to Ishita for saying "naatak karne ki zaroorat nahin" and walking off...

Raman is again in a hotel with Shagun/Adi... hey bhagwaan kya ho gaya Raman ko😭


Nicely done, please continue soon.


hahaha thank you soo much...
and yes, I love your writings :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Raman getting irritated with Ishita ignoring him and getting jealous over her friend who by the way is the ARMAAN MALIK !! This is awesome !! Update soon.


Originally posted by: lourel24

aab raman wud realize wat ishu had to go through becauz of his stupid behaviour.


Originally posted by: yhmdivan

i also want such type of story track in serial...please continue...

thanx a lot dear


thank you so much... thanks. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36


OS/SS
Raman's Realisation
Part 2(A)
(Self thoughts are in Italics)
In the office

Uffo! That idiot Armaan! Kya zaroorat this usse Ishita se help mangne ki? Or wo romi? Aise to kabhi kissi kaam nahi aata lakin aaj? Ishita ko fasa diya? Or Ishita? Ho kya gaya hai usse? Itna Ignore kyu kar rahi?

Flashback
Raman after eating the breakfast came back to his room
Ye JKR kaha rakh deti hai samman?
Just then Ishita entered to collect her purse when she saw Raman tensed searching for a file.
When Raman saw her-
Raman: Ab khadi kya ho? Kaha rakh deti ho meri cheese?
Raman secretly expected her to retort and help him search though he knew she won't, she is angry, his fault.

Ishita: Kyu? Apni Wife I mean ex-wife se pooch. Aaj kal to usse zayada pata hai. Apki wife i mean apki bache ki a se to zayada hi pata hai.
Raman clenched his jaw, he was hurt but before he could retort back Armaan entered the room.
Armaan: Ishu help me please...

Armaan came in their room wearing a red shirt with top three buttons open.
Raman literally killed him mentally. Did he only hate him because of the fact that he was showing off his body or because the person he was showing that off to was his wife, he didn't know!

Ishita: Kya hogaya?
Armaan: wo button tut gaya... Or merei yeh favourite shirt hai! Yahi peheni hai... Making a sad-cute-face
Ishita: Oh! Tum mujhe shirt dedo mein abhi laga dedi hu. Shirt ka button do...
Ignoring Raman Ishita moved to Armaan.
Raman did not like this. Did Not!
Armaan: Aree Ishu Aise he laga do na! Please...
Raman could not hold back now.
Raman: aree usse clinic ke liye late ho raha hoga.. mein mummiji se lagva deta hu...
Armaan smiled secretly.
Armaan: Nahi usse late nahi hoga. Please laga do na Ishu...
Ishita could sense Raman was angry.
Ishita: woh...
Armaan: ye lo button or silayi ka box Romi ne diya...
With this he kept both the things on her hand.
Ishita: Ohk!

Ishita knew Raman was angry or may be hurt, at this moment when she was hurt and angry at him too. She somewhat liked it. She prepared the neddle for the stich. While, there was a smile playing on Armaan's lips.

Raman hated the sight as he remembered his own time.
Dekho to is Armaan ko, Kaise bateesi dikha raha hai apni. Jaise Kohinoor ka hera hath lag gay ho. Waise Kohinoor se bhi kimti hai Ishi... Hell! Dekha pagal ho gaya hai tu Raman. Kya ho raha hai tujhe?
Still he wished to break his head, if he could.
Bigada kya hai is Body-builder ne tera? Kya yaar Raman kya soch raha hai itna sad kyu ho raha hai?? Wo bhi is JKR ke liye. Kyu aisa lag raha hai ki kuch chuth raha hai, jaa raha hai? Mujhe kyu bura lag raha hai jab ye dono wahi khade hai jaha mein or Ishita the? Kyu?

He was brought out of his thoughts when Armaan spoke: Oye hoye! Meri Ishu. Awesome! Thank you, jaan.
Ishita blushed at this and hit him on his chest as she moved out the room, all red.

Raman had to rub his eyes, to believe what he saw. Ishita Sharma rahi thi? Wo bhi us armann ke liye? Jaan? Iss Armaan ke Armaan to mein nasht karoonga. Ruk tu! Kissi or ki biwi ko Jaan bana ka bahut shok hai na?

Jaan le longa teri, agar ek bar or meri jaan ko jaan kaha to...Raman realised he said the last line aloud. He looked around to see if anyone heard him then shrugged his head and walked out for his office.

End of Flashback
He was pulled out of his thought by Mihir.
Mihir: aree bhai? Aap kab aaye? Mjujhe to laga ki aap aaj nahi aayenge.
Raman: Kyu aaj tere jyotshi ki bhavishwani thi ki mein nahi aaonga? sitare kuch zayada he chamak gaye kya?
Mihir: aree nahi bhai mujhe to laga aap bhi us Armaan ko Ishita bhabhi ke saath akela nahi jhodoge... chalo jhodo Ishita bhabhi akele thodi hai Ruhi to hai unke saath.. par... well koi nahi wo bahut matured hai...
Raman already had his brain at work akela nahi jhodoge? Ruhi bhi to hai unke saath... akele Ishita or Armaan.
The morning scene flashed in fronto of his eyes...
Hell no!!!!

Raman: Kya bakwas bola jar aha hai saaf saaf bol?
Mihir: Kuch nahi Bhai... wo to bus aisehi..
Raman: Bol raha hai ya phir bulvaun?
Mihir: wo bhai... he spoke slowly testing every ounce of patience Raman had when things concerned Ishita
Raman gave him a stern look
Mihir: ...wo teeno aaj shopping gaye hai. Armaan ko koi bada award milne wala hai conference ke baad to wo dono ko itna bada award milne ki kushi mein treat de raha hai. Isliye unhe shopping le gaya hai...
Raman: What the hell? Usse mere biwi bachi ko shopping leke jane ki kya badi hai?
Mihir: Kya?
Raman realised he was loud so he quickly corrected himself. "Ghar mein or bhi log hai? Unhe treat nahi dega wo?"
Mihir: wo actually bhai usne kaha ki pehle wo apne sabse special dost ko treat dega phir bakki sab...
Mihir controlled his laugh seeing the series of change in expressions on Raman's face.

Uski to... assi ki tassi... Saala merei biwi uski sabse special dost hai??
As irriated he was he went to attend the official call and the meeting scheduled. Though he knew he wobn't be able to concentrate thanks to his JKR. Now Why did she have to go with her friend, I hope wo sirf friend he ho... Raman got even more tensed at this thought. But wo meri care karti hai... uski bhi karti hai... dekha wo button? Nahi nahi wo sabki care karti hai sirf uski nahi... par mein to uska pati hu meri care pehle...
Keeping aside his thoughts he entered the conference room.

Back in Raman's cabin
Both Romi and Mihir laughed uncontrollably.
Romi: Kya yaar bhai ki to shakal dekhne wali thi. Jab wo Armaan bhai ke kamre mein gaya... aisa lag raha tha ki aaj to us kamre se Armaan ki arthi nikle gi.. Acha hua Bhabhi ne saath diya nahi to aafat aajati...
Mihir: Haan.. samajh sakta hu... yaha bhi haal kuch aisa he tha... bhai ke to chehre ki havaiyaa he ud gayi thi... or unhe ne to ye tak bol diya ki- Usse mere biwi bachi ko shopping leke jane ki kya badi hai?
Romi: Sirf itna waha to ye bol rahe the ki - Jaan le longa teri, agar ek bar or meri jaan ko jaan kaha to...
Both again started laughing holding their stomach.
Romi: Mujhe bilkul acha nahi laga tha jab bhabhi ne bhai ko us Shagun Nautanki ke sath dekha.
Mihir: Mujhe bhi Ishita Bhabhi ko hurt dekh kar acha nahi laga... wo itni caring...
Romi cut him "...or Pyari hai..."
Mihir: hmmm Lakin ab next plan tough hai bina Ruhi ke nahi ho sakta use manna bade ga ki wo bhabhi se dress pehne ki zidd kare or wo dialogue bole...
Romi: Dont you worry Bro. Why fear when Romi is here. Maine usse pata liya.
Mihir: Wow! Lakin kaise?
Romi: Maine usse bola ki uske papa ne uski Ishima ko daaata tha to ab ab unse sorry bulvana ka yahi tarika hai...
Mihir: Par usne kuvh or to nahi poocha?
Romi: Nahi smart bachi hai Ishima ka naam sunte he maan gayi!!
To be continued...
Precap: Same for part 2B: Shagun-Adi-Raman and Armaan-Romi-Ruhi-?? at same hotel. Raman realises that he is ??


Part 2(B) Tit for tat


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Edited by SnigdhaGautam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Super update
Thanks for the pm
Pls post the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
yes dear!! i got that, and i emptied my inbox!!! plss try once more.. ab theek hoga!
awesumm updateee!!! loved itt!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update but its cheating yaar same precap.I was reading expecting that scene wud come but 😕 😊 But few scenes were beautiful "Jaan le longa teri, agar ek bar or meri jaan ko jaan kaha to".awww!
Edited by lourel24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update
And thanks for the pm

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