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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome... Will be getting another OS on Ishita's POV as well?

Totally loved it

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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Lucky when you are quoting from one of my favourite books how could I possibly not love it?! Quotes aside this was a beautiful piece. I must find another adjective to use but honestly reading it I felt such an affinity to him, so much warmth. I felt like I was sat with him through out as he tries to navigate his heart soul and conscience. I like how you touched on the physical aspect without alluding to it explicitly (the need he felt to be at home with her in his bedroom)

This was so heart warming and I loved your use of Bala. He is such a great sounding board for both Raman and Ishita.

Special mention about the song- when I was a kid I used to watch this movie over and over so thanks for the reminder. Made me smile 😊

Edited by happenstance - 11 years ago

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Brilliant piece of writing!! Subtly written...but the emotions and the feelings are deep and you make them come out beautifully and make Ramam and Ishita come alive!! Loved every bit of it..!❤️❤️

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: baubles
Brilliant piece of writing!! Subtly written...but the emotions and the feelings are deep and you make them come out beautifully and make Ramam and Ishita come alive!! Loved every bit of it..!❤️❤️

I second you miss baubles!😉

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I love how you manage to explain Raman's thought so beautifully all the time. It's in depth and fits Raman perfectly.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wonderful dear ⭐️
really enjoyed reading this... 😃

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Dhwaniiam

@Dhwaniiam

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I love it ... Please do continue ..

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shalu79

@shalu79

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow yesterday we got Anni's OS now yours🥳

Thanks Lucky

Reserved 😊

Sorry Sorry Couldn't reply earlier😳

Now regarding this OS, Lucky beautifully written like always.

I am fan of ur OSes😃

Loved the way u expressed inner turmoil of Raman.

Hai ek baar hume show wale Raman ke bhi dil mein jhaakne mile . we do get sneek-peek at his heart time to time😉

Bala is very sensible man n we have seen him giving right guidance n support to Ishu. Loved how u made Raman- Bala bonding n Raman sharing his feelings with Bala

This line of urs

"What alcohol Bala? I didnt add a drop of vodka to my SPrite all night. She was right when she said I didn't need permission to drink. What she didnt know is I don't want it any more."

hai hai maarjawa... Loved it.

While watching yesterday epi when Raman said "tere Bhai ko sambhal liya hai bachhe ko bhi sambhal legi", it reminded me of ur this line. Its like Ishu's effect on Raman

Once again beautiful OS Lucky.

Thanks n big 🤗 Lucky

Hope u r enjoying ur holidays😊

Edited by shalu79 - 11 years ago

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

beautifully written :) loved it :)

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Indian_Isha

@Indian_Isha

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Nice OS Lucky! We have always wanted Raman to discuss his feelings with Bala! BalRam chemistry is amazing right from the time they spoke well when Ishita got drunk in her parents' party!

Very heartfelt conversation! Much needed for Raman at the moment! Hope CVs make him talk to Bala like this when the time comes!

Loved how Mihir, Neil, Romi and Rajeev were used in ur OS!

"He doesnt need permission to drink" is a super line and "I dont need it anymore" is a duper line!

In all, super duper heart touching OS! :)

Edited by Indian_Isha - 11 years ago