OS: Pyaar Humein Kis Mod Pe Le Aaya - Page 4

Originally posted by: DivAniTanni

Beautiful..you are best at writing inner thoughts of the leads. Hats off. Hope to see something about Ishita too.
BTW, CVs should take this idea to make us know about what both feel about each other😳.

Hey Tanni... Thanks for your comments 😊 I do have something in mind for Ishita too. Just need to find a proper setting.

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

res 😛

Lucky you know I should probably stop saying the word favorite in comments to you, cos each piece of yours makes me wish IF had a love button.. and each one seems even better than the last one. 😛

Now coming to this one - the title - LOL satte pe satta one of my all time favs - such a riot that movie is and I thought that this one would be similar but I was so wrong and yet I am pleasantly surprised and happy at being wrong.

I so loved the idea of a boys night out and Raman missing his wifey 😆but more than that I am happy we had a connect here too 😛 - dreams! EEEPS I couldn't believe it when I read the convo he has with Bala and was like OMG, this is just mind-blowing and we both hadnt even discussed anything on these lines before, that he could be having *ahem* dreams 😆 but mostly his growing feelings are making his mind a mess, I also loved how you had him say how can he approach a woman he respects that is such a lovely thing 😳

And the humor in this piece 🤣 🤣 I loved these bits

He cursed the other drivers, the police and even the politicians for the overcrowding of the roads, the pollution, the heat and everything he could think of. But no one was listening, he was talking to himself in the the loneliness of his car

Raman scowled. He wasn't however prepared for the double attack. He could only slap one person at a time, he didn't know how to manage 2 errant younger brothers at the same time

But I loved LOVED LOVED this one Lucky esp the way Bala acted as the sounding board to Raman once again and how you gave him this typical boyish side which we never see on the show but of course marriage and a kid can make a man mature but mostly I loved the way you tackled his alcoholism and now this phase of his life - one where he needs no addiction to act as a sedative, one where being numb isnt his goal at the end of the day, rather he wants to FEEL again, be alive again. Such a lovely way to handle this aspect Lucky 👏👏👏

And I have gotta pick up Gaskell man, I have to

I should thank you first Aani... Your OS woke me up from the slumber of uninspiration yesterday.😛

Thanks for finding the humorous lines in this. Yes, I had to show how much frustrated the poor guy is. His conversation with Bala is also not really like him. He seems to lost, there is no order to his thoughts. More than him, I can imagine Bala's expressions, if Raman were ever to do this. Bala would have to try very hard to not laugh at Raman's face 😆

and thanks for the last part of your comments too. I wanted to make it a point to show that he drank not for fun (like everyone else in his family does), but to actually escape from pain. and that made him numb to happiness too. and now he wants to feel happy again

I am telling ya.. read the book, you will LOOOVE it... you'll see the relation between the leads, and see similarities that I did 😊

Thanks for your wonderful comments Aani!😊

Originally posted by: LaughItOff

Its beautiful!

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Wow... amazingly well written

Thanks Dipsi 😊

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Very well written lucky

Wah you have started writing one liners too

Hey Leo. Thanks dude!

the one-liners, I guess yesterday's dose of one-liners from Raman inspired me 😊

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Beautifully written...loved every bit of it be it the boys night out, the fun and masti or the rather intense serious conversation between Raman and Bala!

Thank you Vidya. I am glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: Bul3

I am always amazed at the brilliance of your writing..so subtle yet so deep..!!..plz continue soon!

Thank you Bulbul for your kind words 😊

Originally posted by: Ram-an-tic.Moi

Awww! Raman! Such a cutie-patootie!

But darling RKB, just like your JKR said "The turmoil, the frustration, the anger..ye sab emotions bhi toh unhi ke liye hote hain jo humare apne hote hain!"

Lucky, i loved it! Raman's turmoil was perfectly etched out. I could feel his frustration at not being able to put a finger to his feelings! And also at not being able to gauge what Ishu feels for him! I'm sure, just like in your story here, Bala will have a pivotal role in making these two lovebirds realise their love on the show as well!

But i loved the end the most! Left me with a smile! Raman is Ishita & Ishita is Raman. So even when there was only Raman in your story, Ishita was right there too! In equal parts, if not more! :)

Hey Pooja

Thanks for your comments😊... I can imagine how Bala will try and control his laughter when Raman comes to him in such a state of mind. I think someone should write an OS with Bala as the narrator, it would make so much sense (wow... i may actually act on this thought)

Thanks for finding Ishita in the story too. I have some thoughts about doing something similar for Ishita too. let me see how it shapes up.

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

"BEAUTIFUL" is the only word for this..!

Well written..Loved it ! ❤️

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

this is fantastic- really well done
pls pm me if you update this or write more stories 😳

Thanks Rutu. 😊

I have added you to my friends list, I will PM you in the future.