Mann chala teri ore - An IshRa OS (chapter four- page 8) updated 24/6 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful work Shreya !! You write really well .. great start
And Welcome to IF 😊
Last part of Ishita's kiss on RKB's forehead and running her fingers through his hair.. so sweet !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awnnn that was super cute !!!
continuee soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to the forum Shreya...

A very promising start to your story. And very well written dear. Hope to read more of your work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it ... Please do continue ...
Do PM me ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it!! Looking forward to what happens next:)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome👏 U should continue n plz do pm me 😛😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

nice 1 ::) upd8 soon :)

Thank you so much! I will update later today definitely! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks! I'm glad
I'll update later today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Wonderful work Shreya !! You write really well .. great start

And Welcome to IF 😊
Last part of Ishita's kiss on RKB's forehead and running her fingers through his hair.. so sweet !!


Thank you soo much!
I'll update later today..more sweet moments to come
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute OS. I felt like I was watching a YHM scene. It's good both realised their feelings . Waiting for your next update.

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