Two-Shot: Feelings & Evolving Emotions |PART 2: PG12

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exploringmyself

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

loved it..plz upd8 soon :)

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dreamy-sa

@dreamy-sa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

loved it. awesome writing. waiting for ur update. pm me if u can

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Mindblowing loved it
that awkwardness dialogue and ravan kumar dara k rakega was epic
cnt asap

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome! First off, your dialogues are so like Raman's. "Baalon ka burger" was my favouriate. I still can't stop laughing.🤣

Aww! Raavan Kumar became love struck and is calling Mihir the same? Double standards!😆

He has a radar in his head, kya? Instantly found out where Ishita was.😆 Ishita also gave back well. Seriously, he met his match in her. Perfect match!

Waiting for part 2😃

Edited by Metamorphmagus - 11 years ago

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PrateeK

@-CrazyPraT-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Yaar...Beautiful story😳
plz update ASAP😉

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Shona

@SilverGold

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

OMG! This was hilarious! I loved it. The way Raman said "Shut Up" to himself out loud! 🤣

The way they both are realizing that they are attracted to each other has been portrayed amazingly, like it would happen in real life...I loved it!

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asha nair

@i4ishra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Totally Luvd it😳 I feel like I m watching th show r such. a superbb writer ⭐️plzzz do post next part soon😛

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Hey reeno I think you should write often...

It was very well written...the way Raman called her yaar...reminded me of the button scene...he had used yaar there too...so really cud picturise Raman's playfullness...loved how u brought old frnds of Ishita before Raman...and he got 2 see a diff Ishita...

Eagerly waiting 4 next part...

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Muneeza04

@Muneeza04

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This was good! Please Continue! 👏

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Reenz i want more!!! seriously update this ASAP😳

The way you have penned down his feelings and how he is consciously realising her effect on him, and his wish to explore more of her is just beautiful. (and for once i'm not being guttery at all😳 i promise!)

On a lighter note I'm gushing literally, ! these are just so damn feisty, sexy and so cute. I could honestly totally imagine RKB holding her a little bit tighter and closer, Mr Possessive is just so sassy love him. You have RKB down to a T!

Edited by happenstance - 11 years ago

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