Two-Shot: Feelings & Evolving Emotions |PART 2: PG12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: florine_20
And u say u are not good at writing romance. If this us termed not good the what will we called the bad once.
Girl that was amazing. And thank u so much for the "dori" I just loved it. Raman had it in him to kiss her in front of mihir and mihika. And those idiots were standing like shameless intruding their moment. Couldnt they just go. We could have more of IT 😉

HAHAH, yes, well thats my opinion, i wonder how and why so many of you differ, but anyways, good for me, a nice encouragement ;)

THANK YOUU! haha yes DORI! :D LOL i knowww! Intrudersss! 😛 HAHHAA, well yes, you can always imagine them having more of IT... and finally DOINGG ITT! :P 🤣

but thank you for the lovely comment :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: ABBY92
The scene in the car when Raman just brushes Ishita's cheeks n holds her nose was too cute. Dori scene was amazing!! Romantic but sensual at the same time and kya end tha. I can't believe Raman was so lost in Ishita that he didn't bother that there is someone else in their room, he still went ahead and kissed Ishita.

the car scene, yes i sort of liked the idea of it too, thank you :)

IT WAS?! YAY YAY! THANK YOUU! :P

HAHAHA, YESSS! He didnt! :P Thanks for the comment!

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11
Amazing Update. Loved it.

Thank you :)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

awesome..very well written..😊

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Nisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

poor ishu...wht a embarrassing moment

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shalu79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

res :)

Awesome OS.

Read both d parts at one go.

Loved ur way of writing👏👏.

About 1st part:

Poor Raman could not get any work done bcoz he is preoccupied by his JKR in his thoughts😆

Loved Ishu's firing mode towards Shagun.

Mihir-Mihika playing cupid reminded me of carom competition.

Restaurant scene was too good. Raman being jealous abt Ishu's friend.

How i wish this track soon comes in d show too. KP will do awesome job of playing Jealous Hubby

Now abt second part the famous dori scene. when u mentioned it in intro I thought Raman will save her from being embarrassed😳 in public by help her.

But loved the way u made it uniquely a private 😉👏 n romantic moment.

Thanks for this wonderful OS

Edited by shalu79 - 11 years ago

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

aaah...WHAT ON EARTH WAS THT part 2...this ws THE MOST PERFECT ISHRA OS i hv ever evr read...see v all told u u can write romance well..n OMFG this ws SUPER HOT..SUPER ROMANTIC...n yes SOULFUL..n heck no i am NOT exaggeratin for a bit...!! oh god..i swear with evry second of IshRa moment,i could literally feel my heart doing DHAK DHAK...🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪...dori scene ws AWESOME...but the kiss..it came at the most perfect moment n the way u described,for the first time evn i din care abt any haddies present there 😆😆...

woman i DEMAND PART 3 of this...pretty pretty plzzz BHABHIII,,,,,😆😉...PLZZZ...

n thnx a ton for dedication...but plzzz PART 3 CHAHIYE MUJHE...jitne time lena hai lelo..BUT A PART 3 CHAHIYEEE