Two-Shot: Feelings & Evolving Emotions |PART 2: PG12

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

LOVELY... i wish u to continue this :P

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Page 5 mein updated for both parts Reeno :)

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eternalasha

@eternalasha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Ok Areena... Just stop it will you... Apologizing...that is.

You wrote the part 2 scene so vividly...I thought I was there. Resham Ki Dori... Haaiye

I loved reading it... Long? Heck towards the end I was hoping you would make it longer😉.

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

hey dear..

i read both pars of your os...

and it was AMAZING...

i loved what you have written..

and it was not long at all,... either you write so beautifully that it didnt seem long.. or it was not long at all...

you chose it..

anyways keep writing more..

would love to read your works

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Divya

@.Divyaa.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Reeno. 🤗

Just read both the parts.

Wow yaar. Wonderfully written.

Dori scene. Aah. Beaauutiful.

Loved it.

Keep writing. 🤗

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

ok Reeno ...u know.im lazy..so.wont type much

but GAWDD this was damn good.

and don't take me.wrong in a good way..the second part is better.than the
first...hehe

and since for.taking so long to update..make it a three.shot..and give one last update..i wanna know if another kiss happened please

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

awww romantic and super cute update...hot and sensual too

naughty Raman...blushing Ishita..super duper couple! loved it! ☺️

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

And u say u are not good at writing romance. If this us termed not good the what will we called the bad once.
Girl that was amazing. And thank u so much for the "dori" I just loved it. Raman had it in him to kiss her in front of mihir and mihika. And those idiots were standing like shameless intruding their moment. Couldnt they just go. We could have more of IT 😉

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

reser 😳

Hey Reens you sneaky little devil ... seriously you say you cant write romance 😳 then please let me know the name of your ghostwriter because this edition was thoroughly cute and romantic 😛

The car thing was really funny reminded me somehow of the time he drove her car right before the shopping mall scene where they meet the Tandons from London and Ooo you brought in a dori scene here ( thanks for the mention btw 😳😃) .. and NOT just a dori, a complicated one at that 😆😆 plus that sari.. I can Sooo imagine Ramz' reaction 😉😆😆

coming to the best written bit - the kiss, that was amazingly well written Reens I swear I could visualize it plus I liked how he genuinely complimented her Oh how I want something like this on the show - the kiss... I wont hold my breath for but the compliment I do expect 😆

And Mr. & Mrs. Bhalla not minding PDA... Whoa! Didnt see the part of the Mrs. not minding it really 😆😆 I thought she would be mortified but if anything she is complaining because it was short 🤣 and because it wasn't private... hmm kinda with her on that one. I wouldn't want any eyewitnesses esp pesky sisters around for that one too 😆

Also with THAT end why is this a two-shot? this needs to be more.. we wanna see how Raman keeps up his promise 😆

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

The scene in the car when Raman just brushes Ishita's cheeks n holds her nose was too cute. Dori scene was amazing!! Romantic but sensual at the same time and kya end tha. I can't believe Raman was so lost in Ishita that he didn't bother that there is someone else in their room, he still went ahead and kissed Ishita.

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