Two-Shot: Feelings & Evolving Emotions |PART 2: PG12 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Romanticfreak

wooo loved it ... :-)

Originally posted by: jojo1986

Loved it👏

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

LOVELY... i wish u to continue this :P

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Res...

***EDITED for both parts...

Good Lord Girl... first and the foremost, I didnt know you wrote, so had no idea what to expect. But that brought in the extra excitement (not that it was needed though!). WONDERFULLY written. 👏 You didnt know!? :$ well, im not a writer... but i do write, whenever inspiration calls ;) i dont think i do a very decent job, but thank you for the appreciation, lucky :)

BOth your parts have the RIGHT proportion of depth, breeze, naughtiness, romance and of course retain both Raman and Ishita's characters in tact. :)

I love that you have used a couple of lines from the show to (paani piyo 😆), it makes this such a delight, it made your story surreal haha, yes i have, quite a few 😳 thank you

Aaah, the dori scene. Personally I have no specific opinion about this scene. hai to hai, nahin hai to nahin hai types. BUT, when they do have a dori scene, I'd like them to use yours... 😊 LOL ahaan... aww aww, now that is flattering, THANK YOU! 😃

the way you describe everything is so visual, I did have to think hard to imagine the scenes playing out... and the image of the saree helped too 😉 😆 hah, it did, yeah? ;) glad :)

and you should leave your modesty alone for a minute, and bask in the praise you get for this one. Both the parts were very well written, and by no means were they sub-standard OR looked like written under pressure. Your friends are right, you can write romance quite well 😊 Know what Lucky, i earnestly wait for comments from some handful of people. who're very good writers themselves, and ofcourse you're one of them, and this... coming from you is absolutely flattering, im honored, thank you! I CAN WRITE ROMANCE? That is NEWS, trust me! :P you guys are easy id say ;) 😆

Last but not the least, please write more frequently 😆

Originally posted by: eternalasha

Ok Areena... Just stop it will you... Apologizing...that is.

You wrote the part 2 scene so vividly...I thought I was there. Resham Ki Dori... Haaiye

I loved reading it... Long? Heck towards the end I was hoping you would make it longer😉.

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

hey dear..

i read both pars of your os...

and it was AMAZING...

i loved what you have written..

and it was not long at all,... either you write so beautifully that it didnt seem long.. or it was not long at all...

you chose it..

anyways keep writing more..

would love to read your works

Originally posted by: -Srkfan4ever-

Reeno. 🤗

Just read both the parts.

Wow yaar. Wonderfully written.

Dori scene. Aah. Beaauutiful.

Loved it.

Keep writing. 🤗

Originally posted by: -Raz-

ok Reeno ...u know.im lazy..so.wont type much

but GAWDD this was damn good.

and don't take me.wrong in a good way..the second part is better.than the
first...hehe



and since for.taking so long to update..make it a three.shot..and give one last update..i wanna know if another kiss happened please

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

awww romantic and super cute update...hot and sensual too

naughty Raman...blushing Ishita..super duper couple! loved it! ☺️